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Antara123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Amazing as always Hema. It is insane having you here, I literally joined the Forum last week, and having you from JA Forum, feels nostalgic and comforting. Kise pata tha, online mein bhi acquantainces hone se achcha lagta hai! Love you!❤️

Oh, read this OS. Amazing work. Update soon. I wrote an OS myself. Jaake padhol😎

LOADS OF LOVE
NaAj😉

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diksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Good start.

Like it 😊

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Asif

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

It was awesome
Dev apologised on his mami behalf & assured her that nobody will misbehave with her. Waiting for her reply.
Update soon plz
Thanks

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Part 2 added to first post

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: lasyap3
It is a bliss to see you here , Akka :))
As usual, your writing is beautiful ...

Hey Lasya.. how r u doing? You're telugu girl na.. how do you know Bengali?
I saw your message to Najma to help with Bengali 😆

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Thank you all for your feedback.. Its quite encouraging 😳
Added Sona's reply to first post.. hope you like it

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onie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

I LOVED LOVED LOVED the second part!!

Yesterday's episode disappointed me big time man!! I so wanted something like this to happen. Didn't CVs already shown Sona working in a hospital in promo? She really doesn't need to stay at Dev's house 24/7 😕

Anyway your OS was really good. You are quite an amazing writer...

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Nikhita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Read both parts glad to read a practical story where it's dev who has to bow down for his deeds and its she who makes the decision.

Sometimes distances are solutions where no one would take you for granted.

Nailed it yaar!

More than love story I am really waiting for those 3 months to get over so that at least we get dev missing sona scenes.

I am really not liking she falling for him first.

I liked it how Dr. Bose kept her dignity in her story. The firmness in her dialogues show how a woman is to be treated with Respect.

Lovely story do write more such parts.

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Emma.j

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Really enjoyed reading your os

Especially second part was amazing

update soon

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Onie...
I LOVED LOVED LOVED the second part!!

Yesterday's episode disappointed me big time man!! I so wanted something like this to happen. Didn't CVs already shown Sona working in a hospital in promo? She really doesn't need to stay at Dev's house 24/7 😕

Anyway your OS was really good. You are quite an amazing writer...

Hi Onie.. I too was disappointed by Sona's immediate acceptance though I guessed this is bound to happen.. CVs are too desperate to initiate love track.. 😆

Glad u liked this OS😳

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