I know I should be updating my FF but to be honest I have this writer's block...Can't seem to continue. Two days ago I ended up watching the accident scene because of a discussion with Renu. Since then an alternative scene has been buzzing me. I tried writing it yesterday but the episode was so powerful that I decided to let it go. I was not planning to write it. But today I just couldn't get it out of my head so decided to pen it down finally.
I know its not an amazing piece but I hope you guys still enjoy it!
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So here's the alternative accident scene that I feel could've also done wonders - or not! The scene starts from where Veer accidentally hits Radhay.
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Sunaina: Veeerr! Veer woh daikhyn...
Veer: Maa, maa ap wait karyn I'll go help!
Sunaina: Ni, Veer, ap ni jayn gae, apko humari kasam. Hum apko jail me ni daikh saktay.
Veer: Ni ma, please asa na bolyn. Kuch ni hoga. I need to go help him, ma! It's my duty.
Before Sunaina could say another word Veer gets off the car and runs to the man lying on the middle of the road. Sunaina follows suit. Veer turns the man to see how hurt he is.
Veer: Ma... Ma yeh tu...
Sunaina: Radhay! Radhay theek ho na beta... Krishna kahan hai...
Sunaina looks around worriedly hoping to spot Krishna nearby. Radhay with weak trembling hands points towards his ringing phone. Sunaina picks it up and before she can say anything, Krishna speaks up from the other end.
Krishna: Radhay kahan hain ap, hum kub say apka wait kar rahay hain. Ap mummy ji ka phone b ni utha rahay...
Sunaina: Krishnaa...
Krishna (with an element of surprise in her voice): Chachi ji ap...
Veer hears the siren and looks around to see an ambulance stopping nearby.
Veer: Ma, tell her to come to the hospital!
Veer helps and instructs the paramedics to put Radhay in the ambulance.
Sunaina: Beta ap hospital phuncho. Radhay ka accident hua h. Hum unko hospital lae k ja rahay hain...
Krishna (shocked): Accident...
After making sure that Radhay is in safe hands, comes back to his and takes the phone.
Veer: Krishna just reach damn hospital! There is no time for explanations.
He cuts the call.
Veer: Ma, gari me bethayn. We have to follow the ambulance and reach the hospital fast.
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Krishna reaches the hospital just as Veer and Sunaina are taking Radhay towards the operation theatre on a stretcher.
Krishna: Chachi ji... Dr Veer... Radhay... kiya hua Radhay ko...
Sunaina: Beta woh...
Veer looks at Krishna in her white wedding gown looking beautiful and then looks at this man bleeding for his life on the stretcher. He hopes Radhay lives, for Krishna's sake.
Veer (with concern): Accident. He came in front of the car... He'll be okay.
Krishna: Hum jantay hian. Radhay, kuch ni hoga apko. Dr Veer hain na bacha layn gae apko...
For the first time in his life, Veer is scared to go in. He's scared to fail, to let Krishna down. He does not want history to repeat itself. This time, he hopes the husband lives!
With a strange sinking feeling and yet with a lot of determination Veer enters the operation theatre while Sunaina consoles Krishna in the waiting area.
Sunaina: Krishna, beta ap pareshan na ho... Radhay theek ho jayn gae...
After a while Veer comes out with a dejected face. For the first time in his life, he is scared to tell the outcome of the operation, for the time ever he is speechless. He looks at Krishna, tears rolling down her face. He tries to avoid looking at her and searches for his mother's reassuring face. He sees a lot of worry and fear there.
Krishna sees him and runs towards him.
Krishna: Dr Veer, humaray Radhay kasay hain? Theek hain na woh... hum mil layn unsay...
Veer: Krishna... woh...
Krishna: Bolyn na Dr Veer... theek hain na woh... hum bhi kasi fazol baat puch rahay hain... ap ne operation kia h... theek he hoon gae... hum jayn?
Veer: Krishna, Radhay is no more. I'm sorry...
Krishna: ...Sorry? Ni Dr Veer... humaray Radhay humain asay kasay chor k ja saktay hain... ni...hum jatay hain andr... uno ne apko bola hoga na humko sitanay k liye...
Veer: Krishna...
Veer stops her from entering the OT. He holds her. He looks her in the eye and tells her again...
Veer: Krishna, I am sorry. Radhay is no more. I tried my best, but...
Krishna crying uncontrollably. She puts her head on Veer's chest and cries her heart out. She falls down and Sunaina comes rushing to her, holds her while Krishna screams.
Krishna: Radhaayyy
Veer looks down at the broken beautiful bride consoled by his devastated mother. A tear falls down from Veer's eye...
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