Originally posted by: annx
Based on Aaliya's insistence here is what I think of the Accident Revelation Track.
So there are a lot of layers that need exploration when dealing with this track. From the top, it just looks like an accident and it needs punishment or some sort of accountability but when you add the dimensions of relationships this the number layers increase.
To begin with, I would love to see all three of them, Veer Sunaina and Krishna to find out at the same time. I would like to see the expressions from realization to horror to guilt.
I want some sort of accountability - not necessarily jail time - but some sort of accountability on Veer's part, and also some sort of empathy on the victims family's part too...
I want a confrontation where death for death' is spelt out. I don't know between who should this confrontation happen but I want it to be spelt out. Years ago, negligence on Shukla's behalf caused a family to lose a family head. The family had to go through way too much, although eventually, they came out of it. Years later, negligence on Veer's behalf caused Radhay to die. The family had to bear a lot of pain, especially Krishna, although eventually, she came out of it too. The saying what goes around comes around needs to be spelt out here. To me, that is really important!
Then there a lot of emotions that need to be spoken of (or played out) in this track!
There is also guilt on Sunaina's part. She cursed them, and then did not let Veer stop and help! Turns out the son of the man who was responsible for her husband's death, died. The man who made her a widow, she in return, made his daughter in law a widow. The death for a death played out. Although, it was pretty unintentional. I want to see guilt. I want to see her asking for forgiveness from Krishna and I want Krishna to empathise. I want Krishna to understand.
There is guilt on Krishna's behalf. Not only did she fell in love with Veer but also married him. I want her to see her struggle between trying to hate her current husband for her late husband's death. I want to see her try and forgive herself for falling in love with Veer (the murderer of Radhay). I want to see empathy and understanding of Veer's situation and reasoning (eventually). I want to see her get justice for her late husband, which does not necessarily mean jail time.
Veer has way too many emotions that need to be played. Veer is a doctor. He was unfair with his own profession. He let the man die - and as it turns out, the man was Radhay. Then the guilt he was the reason Radhay died, which in return caused Krishna so much humiliation by the hands of her ex-in-laws. The thought of losing Krishna forever should also be played out. The fear of spending time in jail and losing all the respect. The thought the Krishna had to go through so much torture and pain after Radhay, all because he did not stop the car to help. He was the reason a mother lost a son and that feeling should also be explored.
For Veer, it was death for death that played out when he thinks about Shukla. But when he thinks about Krishna, it was the loss of dreams against loss of dreams. Krishna was the reason he lost his dreams and respect in London, he was the cause she lost her dreams and love in London. What goes comes around!
Veer should realize that being guilty or feeling sorry shall not bring back Radhay and therefore Veer should make himself accountable for what he did. And I want Krishna to understand all these emotions and empathise with Veer.
Shuklain lost her son. I want to see Veer apologizing - begging for forgiveness, not because Krishna asked him to, but because he understands. He seeks forgiveness from a mother. And I want to see Shuklain eventually forgiving. I want to see a full spectrum of emotions from her. From hatred to cursing, to crying, to understanding to finally forgiving.
Shukla is a selfish man and I want him to use to this as an excuse to create havoc in Krishna and Veer's life. And I expect Bela and Tirloki to do what they do best - add fuel to fire. Shukla, maybe, gets his hospital back, as an exchange offer. I don't know. I know the this would be a lot more of drama, and a lot fewer emotions.
Gaj and Lalia. They would have a lot of emotions to play too. Broken trust, hurt, anger and maybe eventually forgiveness. But they'll be quick to forgive. I want to them act like they always do - as elders and as mature people. I want them to be the of voice sanity. Because we do need sane voices in this track.
I want Veer to face his charges, not because Krishna is forcing him to but because HE is a responsible citizen who made a mistake. I want him to make himself accountable and THAT would be a different storyline. Not because Krishna makes him do that - seen too many stories with such tracks. Veer is sensible, a mature and I want him to act like one now. It should be out of his own accord, his own will. I want Sunaina to understand that and support him. And Krishna to be proud of his decision. The decision should be independent of Krishna's influence. That is important. And accountability of his actions should not necessarily be jail time. It could be lots of money as fine or maybe the giving up of the hospital to Shuklas or anything else.
And as a guilt Veer could set up an emergency unit, in the name of Radhay, where accident cases are treated immediately and free of cost? Or something along those lines?
Jhanak
