Fanfiction 4 those who luv Garv-kumud's r

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Kshitij was missing & they all find a dead body & thinking that its his ,they coduct the funeral.Kumud becomes depressed.Garv tries to make her normal thru his sweet friendship.kumud forgets her b'day.garv tells abhay& khusum not to remind her that.garv invites kumud to a hotel lyeing that there his friend's wedding party is there.she comes there & finds no one.She gets tensed.garv comes there & she gets relieved.garv gets impressed by her look.she was very pretty in res glittering sar & diomand ornaments.Kumud:garv,where is the party?garv holds her hand & takes her to a big hall.she gets shocked.she was surprised to see the hall.it was decorated.really grand.garv:happy b'day kumud.Kumud eyes got filled up with happy tears.she tells in her mind:whenever i was sad,u came with a beautiful smile to cheer me up.garv & kumud sit to hav dinner.lights were put off.kumud gets scared.garv holds her hand:u got scared?no need of that.when i'm there with u ,u don't hav to get scared.she:i know that u'll take care of me.Garv lights the candle.Kumud:i don't know how to thank u garv.even i forgot my b'day & u remember that.Garv:no need of thanking me kumud. In the candle light Both of them look at each other's eyes.Music was put on:kuch na kaho...{1942 luv story}Garv:kumud,will u dance with me?kumud hesitates.Garv extends his arms,kumud holds his hand & both of them dance to the music.They loose their control & their emotions come out,they hug each other.Kumud became conscious,she cries & runs away.Garv becomes sad & he follows her.It rains.garv:kumud,plz don't go.Kumud stops there.garv sings;kuch na kaho...kumud looses her control & goes back to garv & hugs him.They decide to get married.But unfortunately kshitij comes back & knowing that kumud has already given her heart to garv,he turns evil.He tries to kill garv thinking that he always tries ti snatch kumud from him.but by mistake he himself got killed.Garv & kumud liv happily 4ever.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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it is a gud 1. but dont make kshitij evil
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Posted: 20 years ago
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loool tht was realli creative😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
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oh.........kkkkkk...Kshitij should not be the evil guy.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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well creative but i don't want garv to be wit kumud, bettez wit kali anwyaz. yep awesome.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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It's a very good story!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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😃that waz sooooooooooooooooooo awesome!😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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lol yer i cnt imagine kshitij bein evil n LOLOLOL garv singin das funny (no offence bt cnt imagine ne actor/actress sing) agree wit ejaz4eva garv n kali make a wonderful couple😃
Edited by reepz - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Now that's what call getting creative. LOL!!! Love the story..but heck, no way can Kshitij ever turn evil. He doesn't look the sort. Mebbe it cud be an amiable parting or get Kshitij another partner. That way everyone's happy. MEbbe we shud take on the script writing job for Balaji.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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errr nar i dnt think every1 wud be happy most of da people here at india forums prefer kumud n kshitij together!! nno dats nt creative at all das jus dum how can kumud jusin like 2/3 days 4get kshitij n go happily 2 garv boi if dat happned she aint got no sense of motions at all n if dat happens kkusum wud get soo... (lol dnt mke me swear) sorry jasmine didn mean 2 offend u in neway bt i think da time thing is jus 2 shrt she shudda relaised her love 4 garv a bit later on
Edited by reepz - 20 years ago

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