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Posted: 19 years ago
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HERES MY STORY 5 YEARS B4 U R INNCIDENT:

Kittu iz standing beside the road n there iz no signs of any cars .She calls rohan and asks him to pick her he says that he's quite busy y dont she takes an auto and go hame .she says that there r no signs of car in this area and already its 12:00am its been an hour since the fuction has been over n u r not here yet u should have atleast called me i would have asked sum 1 fer a lift .He say that im really sorry dear i was so busy in the work that i had no idea that wat's goin on n where then he says that i'll ask the driver to pick ya up.She says no use i already have tried there but the driver has left fer his sleeping quater already .He iz like huh okay i'll send a person from here to pick u .She says okay i'll be waiting here but plz hurry up .Kittu iz standing there all alone near the grand hotle at a side of a road suddenly sum men come n they all have drunk .She b'cums tensed the men notice her n start approaching her she iz scared the men start touching her she slaps one of them but she's the only girl hmm woman there .All the men become angry on her this action n then two of them hold her tight n......suddenly a car comes by ..... kittu iz screaming fer help its yuvraj's car .Yuvraj comes out of the as a hero he starts fighting with the men n then he throws his coat to kittu kittu fetchs it and keeps it on her shoulders he fights with them like a gr8 hero n then they all run away he comes to kittu She iz still scared but then she thanx him n they both hug each other he then asks her to go with him n she agrees n when he iz taking her with him n he has kept his shoulder around kittu rohan's man arrives at the spot with the car he sees them both goin togeather ..........
He calls rohan n tells him:SIR MAIN HARRISH BAAT KER REHA HOON .SIR MAIN YAHAN PUHANCH GAYA HOON LAIKIN KITTU MAIM SAHAB TO KISSI AUR AADMI KAY SATH BAHON MAIN BAHEIN DAL KER UN KI GARI MAIN UN KAY SAATH CHALI GAIIN".Rohan becomes tensed n asks that man to follow that car . n then inform him .HE says as you say sir n sits in the car n follws yuvraj's car.
Mean while in the car yuvraj say that tum aissay ghar jaao gi to sab peraishan ho jain gay tum meray sath chalo change ker kay phir chali jaana n kittu agrees .he takes her with him .N takes her to his room n gives her a ladies "SHALWAAR KAMEEZ" kittu again thanx him n hugs him he say its okay mention not u may change n then i'll drop u at u r place she says okay.
Kittu comes out of the room in a lousy ladies kammez shalwaar n says now u can drop me at home he says sure .He opens his door n thadaak thadaak thadaak zoom in n out on kittu n yuvraj .
ITS ROHAN STANDING IN A RAGE AT HIS GATE .kittu becomes more tensed n tries to say some thing but rohan mooves away she follows him n sits in the car n the whole way home she tries to say some thing but rohan does not listens n drives very fast n niether says any thing they reach their home n both moove in the room rohan starts shouting at her he says woh kisa tha WOH KIA THAAA kittu iz crying n crying then she says R-R-ROHAN MA-MAIN TU-TUMHEIN S-S-S-SAB B-BA-BAT-BATA-TI HOON T-TUN SH-SHAANT HO JAO rohan again roarsKAISAY SHAANT HO JAOON KAISAYYYYYYYYYY
Kittu keeps on crying she says plz rohan try to listen plz rohan mujh pay wishwaas kero .Rohan leaves the room in a gr8 rage .Kittu iz sitting near the bed n keeps on crying n crying.The night iz over itz morning rohan is sitting on the sofa with his head in his hands when kittu comes from behind touchs him he gets up she tries to say some thing but he keeps a finger on his lips to tell her to be quite n moves away from their kittu again sits their near the sofa n starts crying 😭 😭 😭
Rohan is with nandani in a bar (they both r friends again)he tells nandani every thing .she shows a cruel smile on her face n then again makes a sad face n tells rohan ROHAN MAIN TO TUM LOGON KO TO PEHLAY HE KEHTI THI KAY YEH MOHALLAY WALON KA KIA BHAROSA KISSIN KAY BHI BISTER KI CHAADAR BANNAY CHAL PERTAY HAIN AUR YAAD REKHO KAY KITTU BHI AIK MOHALLAY MAIN PARA HOWA PATHAR THI JISSAY TUM NAY UTHA KER MEHLON KI RANI BANNAYAThen rohan looks up n says tum to high society ki thi tum nay kia kia tha han?
nandani becomes frustated n say ROHAN TUM ABHI TAK USS BAAT KO NAHI BHOOLAY ITS BEEN YEARS SINCE THEN AUR MAIN NAY TO APNA SABAK SEEEKH HI LIA HAI AB KITTU KO SABAK SEEKHANNAY KI ZAROORAT HAI TUMHEIN USSAY TALLAK DAY DENA CHAHIYAYhe says "U R RITE NANDANI MAIN USSAY TALLAK DAY DOON GA"
NANDANI AGAIN SHOWS A CRUEL SMILE .
Rohan reaches his house n throws a letter towards kittu ,kittu is still on the same spot crying she looks up at rohan n agian tries to say some thing but he cuts her n sayAPNA SAMAAN BANDH LO MAIN TUMHAIN SHAAM KO TUHARRAY GHAR CHOR AAON GA
Kittu holds the leteer an starts crying wildly n then goes to the room rohans again there sitting on the sofa with his hand on his chin kittu says along with crying SAB KUCH AIK PAL MAIN KHATAM HO GIYA
Rohan says that sab kuch main nay nahin tum nay khatam ker diya 😭 😭 😭 n moves from there.
In the evening when he reaches there he sees kittu still lying at the same place he says tum abhi tak tiyaar nahin hoi n kittu's like kay main nahin jaaon gi tumhein meri baat sunni ho gi .Rohan says tuharay pass na kuch kehnay ka reha hai aur na meray paas sunnay ko kuch bacha hai main sab aankhon say dekh liya hai.She say s that tum kuch nahi jaantay .He holds kittu from her wrist pulls her up n takes her to the car makes her sit n leaves her at her place n leaves that place at once .Kitu's bhabs opens the door n finds kittu crying she holds her kittu hugs her n her bhabs takes her inside her dad sees this n asks kittu batay kia howa n she'z still crying n says sab khatam ho gia sab kuch khatam ho gia . N her dads like kia khatam ho gia aur rohan kehan hai.
She say woh mujhay chor kay challa gia her dad's like "SANWARI ISSAY TO ANDAR LAY JAA".Her dads too tensed ...........
it's already night next day morning when kittus bhabs goes to the room she sees that no ones there she searchs fer kittu n then finds the letter on her bed
she starts crying n shouting babu jii babu jii Kittu's dad comes running n asks kia howa baytaa she shows him the letter he reads it n then he also starts crying ... 😭 😭 😭
THE CONTENTS OF THE LETTER WERE AS FOLLOWS:

Main nay aap sab ko bohat takleefain deen aur sach to yeh hai kay main bhi ab aap logon ko aur takleefain laitay bardash nahi ker sakti iss liyay main yeh ghar chor ker humesha kay liyay jaa rehi hoon mujhay tallaash kernay ki koshish mat kijjiyay ga aur ho sakkay to rohan ko bhi yeh baat betta diya ga .
aap ki piyaari baiti kittu


HOPE U WOULD LIKE THE STORY I'LL POST THE OTHER ONE LATER NOW U PPL MAY READ THIS ONE N DO LET ME KNOW THAT HOW DO U LIKE THIS STORY?? 😊 😊

Edited by little wing - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
wow too good little wing 👏

it really blending with my story.

great looking forward to read the next part... 😉 .
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
OH MY GOD! U PEOPLE R SO HARSH TO ROHAN.I FEEL THE SHOW WILL LOOSE ITS MATURITY AND ORIGINAL FLAVOUR AS KIUNKII SAAS AFTER LEAP.WE CANT EXPECT KITTU TO BE THAT STUPID AND CRYING ALL THE TIME.
OK I HAVE THIS STORY:-
PLOT BEFOFE LEAP-----
ROHAN & YUVRAJ ACCOMPANIES KITTU TO PANCHGANI AND THERE ROHAN & KITTU GETS VERY CLOSE WITH KITTU IN THE MEANTIME THE TERRORISTS ATTACK PANCHGANI & KIDNAP KITTU & A SCHOOL FULL OF CHILDREN. ROHAN GOES TO SAVE KITTU AND BECOME SUCCESSFUL BUT THE TERRORIST HIZACK ROHAN TO TAKE REVANGE. all try to save rohan but there is no information about him.
A 5 YEARS LEAP-----
After the leap kittu is more successful , more matured as a reporter. She is now the owner of nnn. and she has a 4 year old daughter .she is single till today. she lives in a big flat with her daughter and krutika.
A FLASHBACK-------
After returning from panchgani kittu was broken. she tried to commit suicide but yuvraj saved her . to make her life happy her family wanted her to marry yuvraj & due to her mother she was ready. But just before marriage she came to know that she was pregnant with rohan's child. Knowing this yuvraj changed his mind. He told kittu to aboard the child and her family members supported him.kittu was not ready for this as it was not wrong in her eyes.at that time sonia kapoor helped her. She presented nnn to her and thus she became the md. Of nnn. She decided to give birth to their "payar ki nishani" but her parents didn't permit so she left the house.yuvraj after this left nnn and went to mumbai and opened a group of channels.
BACK TO ORIGINAL STORY------
In nnn things have in 5 years nayan & naty are happily married and rolly is still single .shelly is now jogi's second nayan . shivani is a complete housewife & chandy & prabhakar are still now working in nnn. Daksha commited a mysterious suicide & so her daughter is living with kittu.
A TWIST-----
Yuvraj returns to delhi and wants to buy nnn as nnn is not working properly ,but kittu directly says no.
Due to some news coverage kittu goes to panchgani where she finds a watchman who saw rohan for the last time. he informs kittu that rohan went inside the school full of terrorist after all the people were freed as yuvraj told him that the terrorists left everybody except kittu. Kittu decides to investigate this and gets another shock –daksha was killed by yuvraj as she understood yuvraj's game.
Now kittu decide to expose yuvraj.but by the time yuvraj had become a very popular person in the nation,so she starts a game.
She at first merges nnn with yuvraj's channels by accepting his offer & then marries him to expose him.
She was getting success when a news come that rohan is alive & he will be released soon by the terrorists.
And then……………………..

Now u know what will happen. Rohan wont understand kittu's motive behind marrying yuvraj and ……………

Sorry to tarun khanna's fans but he is expert in negative roles.but please response I will be waiting.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
thanx fiona i'll rite the next part later yaar i m not in a mood 2day or else i'll try writing out that at nite 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
open challenge AVFan now i will be harsh about ROhan. wait and see. i will defintely complete you story.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
OMG. You ppl r looking inspired by Ekta kapoor's stories. 😆 😆 😆
Well I will also post my story soon, but not now.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
hey AV fan even i m a gr8 AV fan n i'm not being harsh to him at all ........ n u just read my next episodes u'll get me 😉 😉 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
I tell u guys U all STOPPPPPPP watching Kekta's shows sachi yaar 😆

Ok so Fiona lets get back to busiines start fighting 😆 again so count me in n u know I m gonna support whom 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
wats there in these kekta's shows han . i cant get it 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: mitts

I tell u guys U all STOPPPPPPP watching Kekta's shows sachi yaar 😆

Ok so Fiona lets get back to busiines start fighting 😆 again so count me in n u know I m gonna support whom 😉

😆😆😆

so open challenge 😆

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