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Posted: 19 years ago
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n hey fiona can i plz just make a change in ur story just a bit to blend it with mine ........ i hope u wont mind ....its at the party :

Kittu's daughter (lets name her mishi) iz playing with other kids in the restaurent n they reach the place rohan's sitting n mishi fells over there n rohan picks her up she crying he makes her quite n gives her a sweet n asks her name she says that its mishi he says wat a beautiful name n then he asks where r u'r parents she points towards kittu ..... kittu iz standing with yuvraj he sees it n gets angry 😡 he says okay go to ur mama but she insists him to come with her n on her insisting he takes her to kittu n along with him he takes his wife aswell from a large crowd of ladies gossiping n then when hegoes there (it comes all from ur story)but in the end he says that u hav got a beautiful girl .........i hope u wont have minded me bringing these changes😳

HERE COMES MY NEXT PART :

Kittu reaches her home n she gets milk fer n takes her to bed over there while getting her daughter to sleep she goes into a desert of thoughts she remembers that night "the way rohan had talked to her...the way he left her at her place ... the way yuvraj had saved her"then she thinks of the party ..... rohan nay shaadi ker li ..... ussay to yeh bhi nahin pata kay mishi ussi ki baiti hai .... aur yeh poora rasta ussi kay baaray main baat kerti rehi hai .... aur abhi to yeh sirf 5 saal ki hai jab bari ho ker apnay baap kay barray main poochay gi to kia jawaab doon gi .... On the other hand rohan iz sitting on a couch looking at the ceiling lost in thoughts when (lets name his wife as anjali) anjali comes with two mugs of hot choclate keeps one at the side table n then sits down near rohans chair n sighs then asks in a low tone "kittu kay barray main soch rehay ho" he nods then she asks "abhi bhi pyaar kertay ho na uss say?" he sighs she says "to" he says main do din baad ussay wapis lainay giya tha laikin wahan giya to (he goes to a flash back)[KITU'S DAD OPENS THE DOOR HE IZ SHOCKED TO SEE HIM N IT GOES LIKE THADAK THADAK THADAK ..HER DAD STARTS CRYING N MOVING HIS HEAD ROHAN ASKS KIA HOWA UNCLE AP AISSAY KIYUN RO REHAY HAIN HE SAYS WOH CHALI GAI WOH CHALI GAI ROHAN BECOMES TENSED N ASKS KEHAN HER DAD SAYS WOH YEH GHAR CHHORR KAY CHALI GAI HE AGAIN ASKS KEHAN HE SAYS PATA NAHIN N ASKS HIM TO COME IN N HE TELLS WAT ALL HAPPENED THEN ROHAN STARTS CRYING ASWELL HE SAYS MAIN USSAY WAPIS LAOON GA MAIN USSAY DHOOND NIKALOON GA] He comes back to reallity n says main nay uss ko buhat dhoonda buhat koshish ki 2saal tak dhoondta reha nahin milli laikin aaj jab main tumharay saath sirf kush nahin buhat khoosh hoon to woh mujhay mill rehi hai .. n can u beleive it she got married aur she has got a child .Anjali says that she'z not married he says wat she says han mujhay kavita (aiwein bus kittu ki dost ka naam rekh detay hain)nay battaya keh uss nay shadi nahin ki aur yeh bachi to uss kay saath thi jab woh donon aik doosray say millin aur ussay yehan koi bhi kittu kay naam say nahin jaanta sab ussay kathiyani bulattay hain kehti hai kay buhat dukhi si larki hai aisay lagta hai kay woh zindagi say door bhagti hai.Rhan's facial expressions change n he says u mean kay woh bachi.....

Next day moring kittu iz sitting in a lawn having tea with yuvraj(*kittu has got glasses) yuvraj starts "Rohan nay nnn say resign ker diya tha uss din kay foran baad"..kittu nods but keeps quite..then yuvraj again says:"tum yehan kiyun aa gai thi sab kuch chor kay main aglay din tumharay ghar gia tha pata chala kay tum ghar chor kay bhaag gai ho".. kitu keeps quite ... then he asks "tumhein apnay ghar walon ki yaad nahin aati she sighs then say"yaad to her pal stati hai laikin ghar jaoon gi to uss waqt ko soch kay kay jab sab log mujh say sawal kerein gay kay rohan nay kyun chor diya terah terah kay log ungliyaan uthain gay meray ghar walon ko bura bhalla kahain gay mazaaq uraain gay duniya ki nazar main hamari kia haisiat reh jayay gi woh kathiyani jo kabhi logon kay masalay solve kerti thi aaj woh mazaq ban gai ...meray yehan rehnay say atleast meray ghar wallay to khush hon gay koi un pay ungli to nahin uthata ho ga aik sukhi zindagi to jii rehay hon gay "then yuvraj asks in a sad tone that "tumhein lagta hai kay woh tumharray bina khush hon gay ?".. kittu again sighs but does not say ne thing ...then he asks kay baiti kab hoi...she says yehan aa kay thokerein khattay khattay thak gai thi jiss din say ghar chora tha uss din say hee tabiyat kharaab thi yehan nokri to mil gai laikin her koi poochta tha kay nn ki job kiyun chori aur meray pass koi jawab na hot tha...yehan aanay kay aik haftay baab nokri kay pehlay din hi main nay apna check up kerwaya aur tests say pata challa kay keh i was 2 months pregnant yeh jaanay kay baad mujh main jinnay ki aik nai ummang uthi main nay socha kay apnay liyay nahin to apnay bachay kay liyay jioon gi zamanay ki her baat berdash keroon gi aur panch saal main jaa kay main nay yeh makaam hasil kia kay jehan sab aik baar phir say mujhay izzat ki nighaon say dekhtay hain koi ungali nahin uthata mujh pay ab "

then one day yuvraj and anjali meat in a shop by chance .Anjali recognizes him n says aap wohi hain na jo uss din kittu kay saath humein party main millay thay n he's like apppppppp.. oh ic app Mrs.Kapoor hain rite n she'z like ji waisay yeh haq Mrs.Kapoor honay ka shaid kissi aur ka hai laikin main pata nahin kiyun iss pay qbsa ker kay baithi hoon he says kia matlab main kuch samjhay nahin she says app chahein to hum kahin baith kay baat kerein he says sure n they both go into acoffee shop n sit .Anjali starts rohan aaj bhi kittu say utna hi piyaar kerta hai jitna pehlay kerta tha ... n then she tells him every thing n then he also tells her every thing .Then yuvraj iz like app ka kia khiyaal hai ..mera jahan tak khiyaal hai woh yeh hai kai zindgi nay unn say buhat khella hai aur ab humhein zindagi ko un say kheilnay nahin dena chahiyay humein unnhein aik ker dena chahiyay .. then abjali smiles n says mujhay bhi aissa hi lagta hai then she takes her hand out n says will u help me he gives his hand smiling zaroor "I M WITH U"

to be continued.....

here's my 2nd part hope u would like it n hay i dint copy it from ne of the serials okay its my own made now i hope u ppl will not start again calling it kekta's serial or sumthing like that its orignall ..... n u guys better tell me who this kekta iz i'll bang his/her face😡

😉😆😊

hope u would enjoy reading it

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Posted: 19 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: little wing

hey wat do u mean who iz kekta han .. i even do not know who that thing called kekta iz . n u r being ruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude😡😉

ketka- ektaa kapoor, of balaji telefilms-writer, director, producer, all in one hhhh - the famous one 4 dragging the stories to .... u know infinity hhhh

as all the series made by her begins with k, she became kekta

and when i became rude, i'm always sweet to everyone 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: little wing

yeah larnay kay allwah kuch aata hai han ......... y do v have to start a fight over here yYyyyY😕

arey r-k fans & y-k fans fight, friendly fight 😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: mitts

Guyz I have an idea instead of writing everything here we should make a fan fic I guess it will be gr88 as kittu doent have ne running fan-fic

All the yuvi n Kittu fans start one fan-fic n Rohan n kittu fan start another
How about this did neone like my idea 😛

gr8 idea

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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
sammie i was kidding hey yaar dont mind plz waisay bhi yeh upper wali story type ker ker kay hath dukh gayay hain aur himmat nahi hai
aur waisay bhi saath friend kay sath chat bhi kerna perta hai ................................i m sorry 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
😊

Originally posted by: sammie

arey r-k fans & y-k fans fight, friendly fight 😃

i know it yaar but actually when i posted that i was'nt in a gud mood of fighting or sumthing waisay bhi chotay bhai say uss waqt main nay larai ki thi ..n i have got a head ache now n i'm signing off .............i know that its gonna be fun pehlay bhi lar chuki hoon aur laroon gi maza aiyay ga😊

😆😉😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: little wing

sammie i was kidding hey yaar dont mind plz waisay bhi yeh upper wali story type ker ker kay hath dukh gayay hain aur himmat nahi hai
aur waisay bhi saath friend kay sath chat bhi kerna perta hai ................................i m sorry 😕

its ok, but r u felling sorry😕

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Posted: 19 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: little wing

😊

i know it yaar but actually when i posted that i was'nt in a gud mood of fighting or sumthing waisay bhi chotay bhai say uss waqt main nay larai ki thi ..n i have got a head ache now n i'm signing off .............i know that its gonna be fun pehlay bhi lar chuki hoon aur laroon gi maza aiyay ga😊

😆😉😊

han

its a real fun game😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: AVFAN

OH MY GOD! U PEOPLE R SO HARSH TO ROHAN.I FEEL THE SHOW WILL LOOSE ITS MATURITY AND ORIGINAL FLAVOUR AS KIUNKII SAAS AFTER LEAP.WE CANT EXPECT KITTU TO BE THAT STUPID AND CRYING ALL THE TIME.
OK I HAVE THIS STORY:-
PLOT BEFOFE LEAP-----
ROHAN & YUVRAJ ACCOMPANIES KITTU TO PANCHGANI AND THERE ROHAN & KITTU GETS VERY CLOSE WITH KITTU IN THE MEANTIME THE TERRORISTS ATTACK PANCHGANI & KIDNAP KITTU & A SCHOOL FULL OF CHILDREN. ROHAN GOES TO SAVE KITTU AND BECOME SUCCESSFUL BUT THE TERRORIST HIZACK ROHAN TO TAKE REVANGE. all try to save rohan but there is no information about him.
A 5 YEARS LEAP-----
After the leap kittu is more successful , more matured as a reporter. She is now the owner of nnn. and she has a 4 year old daughter .she is single till today. she lives in a big flat with her daughter and krutika.
A FLASHBACK-------
After returning from panchgani kittu was broken. she tried to commit suicide but yuvraj saved her . to make her life happy her family wanted her to marry yuvraj & due to her mother she was ready. But just before marriage she came to know that she was pregnant with rohan's child. Knowing this yuvraj changed his mind. He told kittu to aboard the child and her family members supported him.kittu was not ready for this as it was not wrong in her eyes.at that time sonia kapoor helped her. She presented nnn to her and thus she became the md. Of nnn. She decided to give birth to their "payar ki nishani" but her parents didn't permit so she left the house.yuvraj after this left nnn and went to mumbai and opened a group of channels.
BACK TO ORIGINAL STORY------
In nnn things have in 5 years nayan & naty are happily married and rolly is still single .shelly is now jogi's second nayan . shivani is a complete housewife & chandy & prabhakar are still now working in nnn. Daksha commited a mysterious suicide & so her daughter is living with kittu.
A TWIST-----
Yuvraj returns to delhi and wants to buy nnn as nnn is not working properly ,but kittu directly says no.
Due to some news coverage kittu goes to panchgani where she finds a watchman who saw rohan for the last time. he informs kittu that rohan went inside the school full of terrorist after all the people were freed as yuvraj told him that the terrorists left everybody except kittu. Kittu decides to investigate this and gets another shock –daksha was killed by yuvraj as she understood yuvraj's game.
Now kittu decide to expose yuvraj.but by the time yuvraj had become a very popular person in the nation,so she starts a game.
She at first merges nnn with yuvraj's channels by accepting his offer & then marries him to expose him.
She was getting success when a news come that rohan is alive & he will be released soon by the terrorists.
And then……………………..

Now u know what will happen. Rohan wont understand kittu's motive behind marrying yuvraj and ……………

Sorry to tarun khanna's fans but he is expert in negative roles.but please response I will be waiting.

hey i just love u r story its quite better then mine i just read it today its sumthing different really i just read it 2day...rite now😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: sammie

its ok, but r u felling sorry😕

yeah i m😳

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