n hey fiona can i plz just make a change in ur story just a bit to blend it with mine ........ i hope u wont mind ....its at the party :
Kittu's daughter (lets name her mishi) iz playing with other kids in the restaurent n they reach the place rohan's sitting n mishi fells over there n rohan picks her up she crying he makes her quite n gives her a sweet n asks her name she says that its mishi he says wat a beautiful name n then he asks where r u'r parents she points towards kittu ..... kittu iz standing with yuvraj he sees it n gets angry 😡 he says okay go to ur mama but she insists him to come with her n on her insisting he takes her to kittu n along with him he takes his wife aswell from a large crowd of ladies gossiping n then when hegoes there (it comes all from ur story)but in the end he says that u hav got a beautiful girl .........i hope u wont have minded me bringing these changes😳
HERE COMES MY NEXT PART :
Kittu reaches her home n she gets milk fer n takes her to bed over there while getting her daughter to sleep she goes into a desert of thoughts she remembers that night "the way rohan had talked to her...the way he left her at her place ... the way yuvraj had saved her"then she thinks of the party ..... rohan nay shaadi ker li ..... ussay to yeh bhi nahin pata kay mishi ussi ki baiti hai .... aur yeh poora rasta ussi kay baaray main baat kerti rehi hai .... aur abhi to yeh sirf 5 saal ki hai jab bari ho ker apnay baap kay barray main poochay gi to kia jawaab doon gi .... On the other hand rohan iz sitting on a couch looking at the ceiling lost in thoughts when (lets name his wife as anjali) anjali comes with two mugs of hot choclate keeps one at the side table n then sits down near rohans chair n sighs then asks in a low tone "kittu kay barray main soch rehay ho" he nods then she asks "abhi bhi pyaar kertay ho na uss say?" he sighs she says "to" he says main do din baad ussay wapis lainay giya tha laikin wahan giya to (he goes to a flash back)[KITU'S DAD OPENS THE DOOR HE IZ SHOCKED TO SEE HIM N IT GOES LIKE THADAK THADAK THADAK ..HER DAD STARTS CRYING N MOVING HIS HEAD ROHAN ASKS KIA HOWA UNCLE AP AISSAY KIYUN RO REHAY HAIN HE SAYS WOH CHALI GAI WOH CHALI GAI ROHAN BECOMES TENSED N ASKS KEHAN HER DAD SAYS WOH YEH GHAR CHHORR KAY CHALI GAI HE AGAIN ASKS KEHAN HE SAYS PATA NAHIN N ASKS HIM TO COME IN N HE TELLS WAT ALL HAPPENED THEN ROHAN STARTS CRYING ASWELL HE SAYS MAIN USSAY WAPIS LAOON GA MAIN USSAY DHOOND NIKALOON GA] He comes back to reallity n says main nay uss ko buhat dhoonda buhat koshish ki 2saal tak dhoondta reha nahin milli laikin aaj jab main tumharay saath sirf kush nahin buhat khoosh hoon to woh mujhay mill rehi hai .. n can u beleive it she got married aur she has got a child .Anjali says that she'z not married he says wat she says han mujhay kavita (aiwein bus kittu ki dost ka naam rekh detay hain)nay battaya keh uss nay shadi nahin ki aur yeh bachi to uss kay saath thi jab woh donon aik doosray say millin aur ussay yehan koi bhi kittu kay naam say nahin jaanta sab ussay kathiyani bulattay hain kehti hai kay buhat dukhi si larki hai aisay lagta hai kay woh zindagi say door bhagti hai.Rhan's facial expressions change n he says u mean kay woh bachi.....
Next day moring kittu iz sitting in a lawn having tea with yuvraj(*kittu has got glasses) yuvraj starts "Rohan nay nnn say resign ker diya tha uss din kay foran baad"..kittu nods but keeps quite..then yuvraj again says:"tum yehan kiyun aa gai thi sab kuch chor kay main aglay din tumharay ghar gia tha pata chala kay tum ghar chor kay bhaag gai ho".. kitu keeps quite ... then he asks "tumhein apnay ghar walon ki yaad nahin aati she sighs then say"yaad to her pal stati hai laikin ghar jaoon gi to uss waqt ko soch kay kay jab sab log mujh say sawal kerein gay kay rohan nay kyun chor diya terah terah kay log ungliyaan uthain gay meray ghar walon ko bura bhalla kahain gay mazaaq uraain gay duniya ki nazar main hamari kia haisiat reh jayay gi woh kathiyani jo kabhi logon kay masalay solve kerti thi aaj woh mazaq ban gai ...meray yehan rehnay say atleast meray ghar wallay to khush hon gay koi un pay ungli to nahin uthata ho ga aik sukhi zindagi to jii rehay hon gay "then yuvraj asks in a sad tone that "tumhein lagta hai kay woh tumharray bina khush hon gay ?".. kittu again sighs but does not say ne thing ...then he asks kay baiti kab hoi...she says yehan aa kay thokerein khattay khattay thak gai thi jiss din say ghar chora tha uss din say hee tabiyat kharaab thi yehan nokri to mil gai laikin her koi poochta tha kay nn ki job kiyun chori aur meray pass koi jawab na hot tha...yehan aanay kay aik haftay baab nokri kay pehlay din hi main nay apna check up kerwaya aur tests say pata challa kay keh i was 2 months pregnant yeh jaanay kay baad mujh main jinnay ki aik nai ummang uthi main nay socha kay apnay liyay nahin to apnay bachay kay liyay jioon gi zamanay ki her baat berdash keroon gi aur panch saal main jaa kay main nay yeh makaam hasil kia kay jehan sab aik baar phir say mujhay izzat ki nighaon say dekhtay hain koi ungali nahin uthata mujh pay ab "
then one day yuvraj and anjali meat in a shop by chance .Anjali recognizes him n says aap wohi hain na jo uss din kittu kay saath humein party main millay thay n he's like apppppppp.. oh ic app Mrs.Kapoor hain rite n she'z like ji waisay yeh haq Mrs.Kapoor honay ka shaid kissi aur ka hai laikin main pata nahin kiyun iss pay qbsa ker kay baithi hoon he says kia matlab main kuch samjhay nahin she says app chahein to hum kahin baith kay baat kerein he says sure n they both go into acoffee shop n sit .Anjali starts rohan aaj bhi kittu say utna hi piyaar kerta hai jitna pehlay kerta tha ... n then she tells him every thing n then he also tells her every thing .Then yuvraj iz like app ka kia khiyaal hai ..mera jahan tak khiyaal hai woh yeh hai kai zindgi nay unn say buhat khella hai aur ab humhein zindagi ko un say kheilnay nahin dena chahiyay humein unnhein aik ker dena chahiyay .. then abjali smiles n says mujhay bhi aissa hi lagta hai then she takes her hand out n says will u help me he gives his hand smiling zaroor "I M WITH U"
to be continued.....
here's my 2nd part hope u would like it n hay i dint copy it from ne of the serials okay its my own made now i hope u ppl will not start again calling it kekta's serial or sumthing like that its orignall ..... n u guys better tell me who this kekta iz i'll bang his/her face😡
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hope u would enjoy reading it