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shibz

@shibz

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#201

Short update!!!!!😭😭😭
😆😆read it as soon as i reserved the slot...😆😆cudnt wait wen the much awaited update was here😆😆but had head ache 2 write anythin😆..

Arohi is fired!!!! poor thing!! felt bad wen she cudnt stop cryin for the same... but she wanted 2 b fired na?!😆 den y so upset?😆 coz she wont get 2 see her gud lukin boss anymore?😆

Arjun raised both eyebrows and slipped his hands into the pockets of his jeans.😍😍

while a tight black T-shirt confirmed the hypothesis I had made days before: he had abdominal muscles.😆😆Arohi is crazy...!!!😆😆

Arjun joined me, placing himself behind me.

"First, you have to find the right balance between you and the stick."

He put his left hand on mine. I could feel his breath on my neck as he positioned his other hand on my right one. He showed me the correct position. how romantic... 😍☺️😆😆😆

"There, see? This is the right move: you're in command. " Hez soo cool...!😳😳😳
Arjun Punj is the overall package😳Hez intelligent..Hez serious..Hez happy..Hez romantic..Hez cool...hez hott!!😆 Hez the Man!😳😳😳
Luv the way u hav portrayed Arjun Punj here😃..hmmm...mmm...I think..Arjun is Arohi's Mom's choice for Arohi?🤔

Arjun better hav a gud reason 2 fire her...😆otherwise i hate him😡😉😛😆 Poor Arohi is bali ki bakri..all playin wit her?!! for fun? dis is like raggin a new comer in college!!😆
Natz wanted 2 tel her sumthin but stupid Purvi!!😡😆

Arjun left her alone 2 feel like an idiot!😆 poor Arohi is always embarrassed😆

I cant imagine Arohi in Punjabi suit😳 thot she'd had a modern luk..😳 The secretary of the classy Mr. Arjun Punj. She goes for massage n plays pool😆
But shez cute n funny..😆 made for Arjun Punj😆

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1.Arjun is who spoke the dialogue..it was predictable..who didn't guess, shame on you🤣😆😆its predictabl for the writer😆😆..plz pity the readers..hu r a fan of yo mysterious plots😆😆but shame shame😆😆

2. Arohi is drunk plus Arjun in hawt avatar= Tere mast mast do nain, meri dimaag ka le gaye chain.🤣🤣🤣ha ha ha ha ha ah aha ha ha ha ha ha ha ah..🤣🤣🤣 wah wah!! great research...! but whose nain?? Arjun ya Arohi's?😕😆😆

3. I didn't know about how to play Pool, so didn't go in detail...written what I knew. I totally invented the belief😆lol..i guess most of us here dunno😉😆

4. Arjun Arohi got closy-closy but no kiss😆...sorry, this isn't the correct situation..next update pakka kiss😳 waitin waitin...n as kavya said.. Arjun's pov mite start after the kisssss!!😳😳

5. Arohi fired by Arjun...don't kick me...now you understand why I made Arohi drunk.😊 to oversleep n get late for her job 2 b fired?

6. Promo next Epi:

Nikhil: "Arohi, I lied you about the bet"

One second, two seconds, three seconds---->One Slap😆 ve...rry gud!!!😆😆

7. Chipsie: Not a problem dear🤗Will PM you on Sunday with the new updates😉

I'm still sleepy sleep...if you any doubt, ask me😃 i think i m the one here wit the highest num of doubts!!😆😆

Take care
wow!! Sunday!!😃😃 update soon!!!

Edited by shibz - 15 years ago

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Fantasy-Kmh

@Fantasy-Kmh

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#202

Wonderful updates parm..👏👏👏 I am totally engrossed in your FF and i was like.. should not end!! should not end!! but your "End of Update" line made me sad.. 😭😃 Good job done!! 😃😃 Update asap.. 😊

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-Olly-

@-Olly-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#203

wonderfull update....parm really loved it..and one thing i must say...ur story is very intelligent...there r many mysteries to unfold...me loving it...and yes if possible..update from arjun's pov too...rest hats off to..u👍🏼

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

Moderator

+ 71

Posted: 15 years ago

#204

thanks a lot people🤗🤗🤗..will reply to each one later

Arjun's POV will be posted after other 2 updates :)

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Anjali

@Anjali96

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#205

reserved...and me not 1st to comment😭 editited😃

Short update😭😡😆 But i dnt mind cuz after 2 updates u will update Arjun's POV...yay😆😆

once again wonderful update👏👏 hw can ur rite so well and make ur brain cum up wid these us idea's as plots?😳😆 yess...i knew it was arjun hu sed the last line...after all it jus had to be him😉 so obvious😛 and arjun teaching arohi hw to play POOL correctly was jus bliss😍 and once again punji wearing jeans...and black jus makes him look sooo hot☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ and he told arohi to call him arjun our of office hrs...there has to be something in his mind...he must have sum feelings for her....aaahh Parm...i really wanna read arjun's POV...i wanna kno wats he's thinking....wen will these 2 updates cum😡😆😳 and Parmm the kiss...so close bt so far😆😆 nxt update there better be a kiss☺️...then arjun's POV😆

He put his left hand on mine. I could feel his breath on my neck as he positioned his other hand on my right one. Hailaa...i wish i was arohi...jus imagine this scene if arjuhi were together😳😳😳😳😳😳☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️😍😍😍😍😍😍

The sensation that his warm breath caused on my neck made my heartbeat frenzied. Air, I needed air. loved this scene...i cud jus imagine in front of my eyes😃

Then I saw him grab my drink and sip it. My drink. His lips were touching the place from which I had just drank. aww this scene reminded me the one in kmh where arjuhi were toghther and arjun made arohi drink his coffee to check if it was sweet...and wen arjun drank it after her..he sed...nw it's sweet😳😳😳😳😳

oh no poor arohi...she got fired jus for waking up late😭😆...cuz she had alcohol accidently yes'day😭😭😭 luks like she really needed the job...bt this punji na😆😆 so unpredictable😆...he best bring her bac again😛😉

Arjun is known throughout Mumbai for being unpredictable...so true😆😳

Here the much awaited update😆 yes finally😆😆 bt no kiss😭😆

So:

1.Arjun is who spoke the dialogue..it was predictable..who didn't guess, shame on you🤣 i was first one to guess😆😆

2. Arohi is drunk plus Arjun in hawt avatar= Tere mast mast do nain, meri dimaag ka le gaye chain.🤣🤣🤣 wat a song parm...wah wah🤣👏

3. I didn't know about how to play Pool, so didn't go in detail...written what I knew. I totally invented the belief😆 yh i knew that😆😆

4. Arjun Arohi got closy-closy but no kiss😆...sorry, this isn't the correct situation..next update pakka kiss😳 yhh it betta b😆😳

5. Arohi fired by Arjun...don't kick me...now you understand why I made Arohi drunk.😊 okay...bt u best bring her bac in the job😆 and nw u kno why i reserve...so i cn type my long comments😆😛

6. Promo next Epi:

Nikhil: "Arohi, I lied you about the bet"

One second, two seconds, three seconds---->One Slap😆 yessssssssss....noo background music slap🤣🤣

7. Chipsie: Not a problem dear🤗Will PM you on Sunday with the new updates😉

I'm still sleepy sleep...if you any doubt, ask me😃

Take care u too😳🤗

Edited by Anjalii...xXx - 15 years ago

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kavyasam

@kavyasam

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#206

Wow I get to read the new update also , I am stuck in a hotel , since we were not going anywhere got my hand on the lappy. Awesome updates parm . about the massage table , I was stuck with the massages they have here sorry made u explain ...🤣.

Last update, arjun is slowly coming out in the open. Elevator scene Arjun is capable of doing that . That is why he is Arjun Punj. What is this plan/bet tucked up his sleeves?Arohi is also getting attracted 😳. Todays update wow pool, almost kiss but no kiss☺️, firing her ofcourse with a plan 😉. oh ho so much happened. Cant wait to read his POV , that I am guessing will come after their face off and kiss eh?

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arshiyaa

@arshiyaa

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: -Parm-
Here the much awaited update😆loved it 😃 sooso
1.Arjun is who spoke the dialogue..it was predictable..who didn't guess, shame on you🤣i guessed right, and who didn't shame on u 🤣

2. Arohi is drunk plus Arjun in hawt avatar= Tere mast mast do nain, meri dimaag ka le gaye chain.🤣🤣🤣

superhit 🤣

3. I didn't know about how to play Pool, so didn't go in detail...written what I knew. I totally invented the belief😆 me also don't know much abt pool *hugh 5* 😉 😆 and u guessed abt the belief, it is very convincing though 😉😆

4. Arjun Arohi got closy-closy but no kiss😆...sorry, this isn't the correct situation..next update pakka kiss😳 yup its ok, waise bhi Arhohi drunk and then kiss is not an ideal situation for kiss 😆 a slap will follow arjun's cheek soon then 😆

5. Arohi fired by Arjun...don't kick me...now you understand why I made Arohi drunk.😊

i m not kicking u 😆 but i want to kich arjun in behalf of arohi 😉

6. Promo next Epi:

Nikhil: "Arohi, I lied you about the bet"

One second, two seconds, three seconds---->One Slap😆

yayyyyyyy 😆

loved every word of this update parm 👏 very very well written 👏

awww poor Arohi, she don't know ppl are plying games with her.she is confused and sad aww.

and i guess natz wanted to tell her something like truth na 😆 waiting for story to unfold 😊

and arjun's POV 😍

Damn, why was he so handsome when he smiled.

loved it ^ 😉 😆

Edited by arshiyaa - 15 years ago

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

Moderator

+ 71

Posted: 15 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: chip86
Awww, Pam! I feel so sorry for Arohi.... 😕 She's terrible after being fired! The way you described her emotions.... you know... that she gave her whole to the job and didn't complain even once - for an entire year! Truly very heart-breaking... 😭 Arjun better have a good reason for doing so.... otherwise... otherwise.... i'm gonna.... ! oh, never mind.... who cares what I'm gonna do, anyway! 😆

But Pam.... great going, girl! You're unfolding the plot extremely well! And yes! I'll be free on Sunday, as of now, so will be able to edit it much sooner! 😳

hey Chipsie🤗🤗

thanks a lot for liking this updates..glad I'm able to write Arohi's feeling so well

Arjun reaction will be unfold by his POV after other 2 updates from Arohi's POV😉

Thanks a lot again🤗

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

Moderator

+ 71

Posted: 15 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: divi4u
Hey Pram🤗
thnx 4 d PM first🤗

a very very very nice update👏👏👏

i really d name u gave to each update😃

d thing I lyk d most is....whn Arjun drink frm Arohi's Glass😳😳😳😳

such a nice thing

I also dont knw playing Pool....but lyked d way u described hw Arjun teached Arohi

m waiting to knw Arjun's POV😳😳😳

update soon👍🏼

cant wait😉😉

n dont 4gt 2 PM me😃

Hey Divi🤗🤗 your welcome for the PM😉

Thanks a lot for liking the update..means a lot for me

Arjun's POV after 2 other updates...soory, for making you wait😛

love you🤗

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

Moderator

+ 71

Posted: 15 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: -Sasi-
Wonderful updates parm..👏👏👏 I am totally engrossed in your FF and i was like.. should not end!! should not end!! but your "End of Update" line made me sad.. 😭😃 Good job done!! 😃😃 Update asap.. 😊

hey Sasi🤗

thanks a lot for enjoying this updates😃I'm soo happy you liked it...will update asap pakka😉

thanks once again