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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 15 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: shibz
😆😆so peace 2 everyone😆😆

congratulations.....🤗for your job...good luck!
no probs sweety..U can update wen U find tym....
oww...i like both the parts...wat do i do?? i'l go wit the 1st option..😳

n ah..me 1st 2 comment😳

P.s: i luv your las sigg..awe...so sweet..

hey shibz🤗 thanks a lot for the word...yes my angel wali siggie..⭐️⭐️⭐️lovely

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 15 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: blossom18
Parm sorry d last one to comment....extremely sorry..really bsy wid college but do PM me il read ur FF when im free

Loved it as always....ur way of lukin n explaining things is juz 👍🏼
Hope Arohi remembers Arjun...n d proposal part was fantastic..u wrote it vry well!!

Congo for d Job!🤗I too go wid Shibz i guess d 1st one would b more interesting!!
Update it soon can't wait for d next!

Hey Anchal🤗 no problems, I know u're busy..thanks for words..mean a lot. yes will PM u 🤗

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 15 years ago

#163

@Ash,Anjali,Shreya,Divi,Arshi, Mahima nd kavyasam

Thanks a lot for the words🤗

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 15 years ago

#164

Good morning People

Finally I've written the updates of the FF

but before updating

as usual my

*Hugs&Blessing* for all those who appreciated my work

PIKAPPA, mahima8, aparna4karanika, kmhfan4destiny, shibz, Asther, blossom18, divi4u, Ruhani.., arshiyaa, Anjalii...xXx, 🤗🤗🤗

Now here the updates

Read

Enjoy

and Comment😃

PS: Check the 3rd post here..there is the banner of the FF😃

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 15 years ago

#165

Koi Tumsa Nahin

One moment, a moment of true joy is worth much more than a lifetime of suffering.

The rain continues to fall. The rain was pounding on the top of the hospital, the first thunder approach the beginning of a thunderstorm. It is a never-ending rain. Arohi open the eyes immediately , panting, she saw all around her blurred, the place around her was cold. She was in a hospital in a bed ...alone and she was afraid ... afraid of thunderstorms.
Aroha sat on the bed but this had cost a great effort as she was moving muscles after four years. Thunder. She began to tremble and tears began to fall. However, in a part in her mind a little voice was whispering "He promised to you... he'll come." but she didn't know who was coming. Perhaps him?...Arjun. Then another thunder made her jump. She heard a voice reassured her, telling her it was over. She felt someone hug her. Another thunder, she was devoured by fear and she tighten the figure that was beside her. After that she raised her head and crossed the gaze of two black eyes that were looking her ... another thunder but she heard nothing, she was completely lost in the boy's eyes and words that Arjun whispered. "Calm down ... I'm here .." and hugged her "I'll be next you day and night." Arohi hearing those words was touched.
She, with whom a few hours ago, had behaved badly, was standing near her. He loved her well enough to run from his house to the hospital to reassure her ... "Why don't I remember anything?" She thought.

She then calmed a bit and Arjun help her to lie on the bed. He sat down next to her, and the minutes passed, there was silence between them while they were looking the rain.

AS: "So tell me about yourself." She didn't want anymore the silence between them otherwise she would scream.
AP: "Me? Well ... No one done a similar question, "said confused
AS: "Does it bother to you to talk about your past with someone who doesn't recognize you?"
AP: "You'll remember me ...Mrs. Aroh Arjun Punj" and took her hand "You are the heart ...That beats in my chest...You are the air I breathe.. You're the light That shine on my path... You are the star that light my nights...You're The Voice That allows me to scream to the world I love you...nothing in the world is infinite and perfect EXCEPT the love I feel for you.... you know that I asked God 's water and He give me the sea, then I asked the Light and He give the sun then I asked an angel and I got you. I love you, you are always in my heart and my thoughts. You'll remember me...It's a promise. I'll wait an eternity to gain you even for a moment."

At these words the girl's heart began to beat wildly. She was impressed that he felt such a strong feelings for her, feelings she had experienced in the past for him.
She was about to respond when Arjun sneezed.
AP: Sorry .. but I ran in the rain .. now I go to dry ...I'm back in 10 minutes .. "said and ran away.

Arohi was waiting for him. The minutes began to pass and the thunder resumed. She began to tremble again ... she promised herself not to scream. The minutes passed but no trace of Arjun. Then she took courage and went slowly out of bed. She put so much energy to lose all the other forces that remained. And she fainted with a single thought. "Arjun where you are?...Come "

Meanwhile, Arjun was trapped in the elevator and only after 20 minutes he managed to get out. While he was going back in the room, he had a bad feeling and just inside the door he saw Arohi on the ground ... fainted. Arjun rushed the girl, pulling her to himself, rocking her, as he sat on the couch with her. "Come on Princess...wake up." he whispers gently shaking her.
Suddenly like to answer to his prayers the door opens and finally a doctor enter in a white coat.
"Oh thank heaven!" sigh.
"What happened here?" the doctor asked.

Few minutes passes before she recover herself. But at the end she open her eyes. And looked around. She was a bit confused, but smiled when she saw Arjun...her Arjun, her husband, her best friend, her love, her family, her everything.

After 10 minutes

D: "It's all right now Mrs Punj...You're wife is okay. And you madam make sure not to move, you need to do physiotherapy. You'll start soon, till then no abrupt movement" and said this he left. Arohi was going to speak when Arjun interrupt her.

AP: I'm sorry Arohi...I didn't have to leave you alone in this room with thunderstorms. I'm so sorry.

AS: Arju...

AP: I know you are angry and you have all the rights to do so...

AP: Lets me finis..

And this time was Arjun' phone and he picked up.

AP: Good morning Anya...Yes, Papa coming soon. Do not worry and not cry.

After finished the call, Arjun were about to leaving saying to Arohi.

AP: Now I have to go...we will talk later.

Arohi didn't want that Arjun leave her without giving her the opportunity to say that she remind everything. She has to do something, something to make him understand that she was back, something to stop him, something like...

AS: Tumko chuke bhi chune ko karta hai dil,

Pake bhi pane ko karta hai dil, Awaargi aane lagi ,

Sansoo mein khusboo chahne lagi

Dil pe dewanagi chah gai is kadar,

Band ankhoon se bhi mujhko aiye nazar,

Kaisai kahein hame kitni mohabbat hai,

haan mohabbat hai,

Kaisai kahein hame kitni mohabbat hai,

Kitni mohabbat hai....

At that moment to Arjun seemed that his world began to spin, his heart start to beat fast ...she could say those words because she remind everything.

She paused for a moment.
AS: "Even though we 're separated for four years, I feel and I know that our bond is not broken." Arjun smiled slightly. He was amazed.
AP: Because what unites us is beyond time and space.
Arohi was again astonished hearing him saying those romantic words.
Arjun we're going next to Arohi but she signed him to stop and even doctor said to don't move, she got up from the bed and went next to him.

"Arohi" Arjun couldn't speak, he only needed a hug, a hug to make sure the feelings that Arohi was feeling at that moment.

AP: "Please give me space in your arms. Arms that are capable of being for me a world of my own. Your arms are a safe place for someone like me. One who is looking for Love. Apparently I'm strong but in reality I'm so fragile." . Then they hugged each others. Finally after four years Arjun and Arohi have only meaning: Arjuhi.

AS: So I clutched you next to my heart as it were our last sad day... the last important day to forget of being alone.

Love...
oxygen of life
and when you feel suffocated
comes to rescue you
and helps you breathe
without love life would be useless.

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Edited by -Parm- - 15 years ago

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 15 years ago

#166

Hope you liked it...i have changed the words of option 1 but the concept is the same😉

I have do my best...if you don't like it, tell me I'll not feel bad😳

Take care and Enjoy

Love you all :)

edit: Here the banner of the FF made by Maryam...thanks dear😃

Edited by -Parm- - 15 years ago

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shibz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#167

i dint like it😔 now wat wil u do? wil u change it??
he he...hw can anyone not liked it Parm...i loved it..😃so beautiful.. the poem...the writing..the everything..simply amazin...awe..bless 'em..its such a sweet part...Luv Arjuhi...😳

n the banner..is great..!😳😃

Edited by shibz - 15 years ago

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mahima8

@mahima8

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Posted: 15 years ago

#168

amazinggg dats all i can say 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️

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Krithika

@kmhfan4destiny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#169

Parm congo on ure job! Way 2 go buddy!! tis update was truly fabulous! sorry 4 the late reply and the late wishes! the 1st option is reeely nice! each and every scene was so beautiful and i hv jus 1 word 2 say:VAAH!!!

All the best wit ure job! hope 2 c an equally mind-blowing romantic update soon!!