FF: Together Again...when the heart beats||Page 52 - Page 33

Originally posted by: shibz

oh yea...! i jus realized this was in the flash back...the 1st part started wit Arjun at teh beach n Arohi on the bed wit his letters..both in tears i guess..as far as my memory goes..m feelin lazy to go bac n chec😳😛wow!! wat a link up Parm..Amazin..! this part was simply....i luvd it..perfect sentiments...beautiful blendin!! continue asap..:)

Originally posted by: mchopra

It's say that men never cry. Or at least that's what it's say. He did not care what people said, he did not mind the curious looks of the past, who wondered why a handsome man walking through the city crying. To Arjun did not matter. Arohi was gone and nothing now made more sense. Nothing.
loved these lines Parm reminded me of that scene in KMH where arjun is crying on the terrrace the whole night for aarohi..beautifully wriiten..wow man just loved it..

Originally posted by: xxiheartmexx

so parm ji u bak wid ur updt...!!

lol...agar tu aaj nahi kar rahi hoti updt den surely i must hav forgotten ki last wen ur ff was updted...!! :P

nyways...cumin to d part...!!
it was cho sad...!!
arohi cryin..n arjun lonely...!!
n dat karan...arghh...soap mein bhi kuch kam dimaag nahi kharab kiya tha usne...!!
ab yahaan bhi...!!

bt chal...unite toh honge na...!!
hpe so...!!

do updt soon...!!

--radz--

hey Radz🤗🤗 Kaisi ho tum?!??!

Originally posted by: kritika31984

superb!!😉

ThQ 4 updating !!😃

Nicely written👏 Keep going !!👍🏼

hey buddy

Originally posted by: -Parm-

Hey buddy...what is your name?😳

thanks for the words mean lot for me ...will update asap🤗

I am Sayali.........u can call sayu........

beeautifuulll.... Parm, awesome
luved it to the core,
aww the pain that Arjuhi are going through, such complicated they are as emotions but u put them so simply in ur words and especially luved Arjun's POV and the poems, thanks for making Arjun so so sweet, like he always was😳😉

read it in a hurry, so cant give much detailed comment but surely its worth numerous readings so will comment much more nicely after reading it again next time.

just hats off to u, simply brilliant 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: sayu14

I am Sayali.........u can call sayu........

hey Sayu...nice name😃

Originally posted by: Pranii

beeautifuulll.... Parm, awesome
luved it to the core,
aww the pain that Arjuhi are going through, such complicated they are as emotions but u put them so simply in ur words and especially luved Arjun's POV and the poems, thanks for making Arjun so so sweet, like he always was😳😉

read it in a hurry, so cant give much detailed comment but surely its worth numerous readings so will comment much more nicely after reading it again next time.

just hats off to u, simply brilliant 👏👏👏

hello Prani🤗🤗🤗 OMG....such a beautiful posts for me...I'm sooo happpy that u love tha updates,,,thankies for

I was waiting for your next update😳..woww such an emotional part😭😭..but wonderfully written and those emotions looked so real👏👏👏👏...It was good to read those POVs..In the actual serial they never showed these POVs with such depth..but Parm u did it with your fantastic use of words and poems👏...Superb update👏

Originally posted by: jyoti06

I was waiting for your next update😳..woww such an emotional part😭😭..but wonderfully written and those emotions looked so real👏👏👏👏...It was good to read those POVs..In the actual serial they never showed these POVs with such depth..but Parm u did it with your fantastic use of words and poems👏...Superb update👏