*Tum hi ho..* New FF -part 5...pg.8 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow that was a fantastic update, thank you, its nice to know that DK likes Arohi and they all love her singing, cant wait to read them to work together it will be fun.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
loved the fanfic great as ever to continue soooooooon loved it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
really good please do continue soon

Irika

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Posted: 16 years ago
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i simply loveddd it!!! great!!! cant wait to read the next part...when will u update it??? pls do it soooooooooooooooon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh myyy Pallavi!!
THAT WAS AMMMAZINNGGG!
Loved it! =]
Plkease do continue soon...can't wait to see what happens next.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aaaaaaaah!! ...

BRILLIANT update ... So Purvi is Salil and Arjuns cousin, becahra Salil, you made his fiance his cousin lolz ... but never mind ..

anyways Arohi going to live in Punj Out House .. Nice!!, that means we'll get too see many takra's and stuff ..

i like DK in your Fic, he's Sweet ..

The scene where Arjun says "If you need anything" ... and then a moment later "don't bother me" .. reminded me off K3G .. when Kareena says that too Hritik lolz ...

He's got so much of an Attitude, but our Arohi is not far behind ..

So DJ is going to Launch Arohi with Arjun Cool!! ....

Waiting for your next update ... so update soon

and Take Care

Yasmin
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awww My Pallo Jhello..... You writing a FF...your forte......Awesome!
I am glad you are enjoying this show.........isn't PUNJI awesome...
Loved what you wrote so far...........Atta Girl!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@amtul,tanvi,rbb,yasmin,irika,samiya thanks a bunch for liking this it is making me feel like updating
@ nupur...haan yaar I am hooked!!!! Punji rocks!!!!....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Lovely update.. gr8 tht Arohi is staying in Arjun's outhouse.. Wow DK punj launching her.. thts really nice.. Plzz continue soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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YEH KYA HO RAHA HAI????
Aarohi awoke on her bed and squinted at her surroundings and remembered that she was in the Punj outhouse. She rushed through her daily chores and chose to wear a yellow and white pretty chudidaar. She wriggled sum bangles onto her bare hands and brushed her long black hair. "Hmmm...perfect" she smiled at the mirror. A sharp honking sound irritated her ear she marched out in fury and demanded to a smug looking Arjun "Kya hain....subah subah itni shor kyun macha rahe ho?" "Mohtarma, agar aap jaldi karenge toh meherbani hogi...Dad ne bola hai tumhe academy lene ke liye ....Mera koi shauk nahi hai tumhare peeche dum hilane ki..." Aarohi jst rolled her eys and sat in the car.
Aarohi made sure that she didn't come across Arjun the whole day in the academy...but she heard loads of buzz about him though...and the most shocking one was that " Arjun Punj is a care-two-hoots about gals .....and takes no interest even in flirting at the slightest!!!"
"....kya bakwaas...that super-smoocher is actually a touch-me-not????" she thought angrily to herself. She resolved not to let her thoughts stray back to him..but failed miserably....."what was he doing in the director's office then....experimenting?" she fumed. "Mere baap ka kya jaata hai agar woh kiski ladki ko ...joh bhi kare..." she reprimanded herself. Basically her whole day went in thinking about Arjun.
Arjun too was in the same plight...he was dreaming ....and constantly remembering Aarohi..her singing...her eyes....so lively and beautiful...her smile....so charming...her hair..so silky....
"Lagta hai Arjun demonstration dena chaheja..." the lecturer taunted him breaking his flow of thoughts..."huh?" he looked lost...
The lecturer had recognized the distant look in Arjun's eyes and decided to teach him a lesson. "Yes Master Punj....would you like demonstrating to the rest of the class the meaning of smoothness in voice without rough ends..." Sahil sniggered.....Arjun never sang....he always managed to pass semesters by the quantity of donations.....though he had a good voice...
Arjun's face was flushed and the lecturer's blazing look was doing more harm. The whole class was staring at him ....in breathless silence...they wanted to hear him sing...
Arjun closed his eyes and Aarohi's lovely face flashed before him....she smiling and laughing at him...he opened his eyes...and den...
Kahin to.. kahin to.
Hogi woh
Duniya jahan tu mere saaath hain
Chaha mein chaha tu
Aur jaan bas tere mere zajbaat hain
Hogi jahan saba teri
Palkon ki kirano mein
Lori jahan chand ki
Sune teri bahon mein...
[Jane na kahan woh duniya hai
Jane na woh hai bhi ya nahi
Jahan meri zindagi mujhse
Inti kafa nahi ] - [2]
Saasein kho gai hai kiski aahon mein
Mein kho gai hoon jane kiski baahon mein
Manzilon se rahe dhondte chali
Aur kho gai hai manzil kahin rahon mein
Kahin to kahin to hai nasha
Teri meri har mulakat mein
Hoton se hoton ko
Chumti o rehete hai hum har baat pe
Kehti hain fiza jahan
Teri zaameen aasman
Lyricsmasti
Jahan hai tu
Meri hasi meri khushi
Meri jaan....
[Jane na kahan woh duniya hai
Jane na woh hai bhi ya nahi
Jahan meri zindagi mujhse
Inti kafa nahi ]- [2]
His voice was soul-stirring....everything beneath the sun came to a halt...only his voice flowed mellifluously creating sensations never felt before....the lecturer was shocked....in total filmi style..."us saale ko sau volt ka jhatka laga". ....the whole class gave him a standing ovation and the academy thundered with their claps...Sahil jumped over three desks and hugged Arjun.."Kya boss!!!! inspiration kahaan se mili???" Arjun just smiled...
The ended in total horror for Aarohi...she was dead scared of herself cause she was non-stop thinking of Arjun and a total success for him...he was declared the unbeatable voice of the academy. He met her near the academy gates..."Er..Aarohi...studio chale?" he asked her throwing her a cute smile...she was shell-shocked.."Did he just smile at me?....Aarohi u r freaking out....contral kar...yaar!" They both set off to the studio together each lost in their own thoughts...
"FM laga sakte ho?" Aarohi requested...she felt that the silence between them was killing her and making a bigger passage for unwanted thoughts to barge into her head....
"Sure!" he smiled again....and obliged...
"Aaj hum baatein karenge kuch aisi majboori ki...joh hum pehle kabhi nahi jaante the...jee haan....Have you ever hated to love someone...."the jockey was saying. Arjun almost crashed the car...that was just how he was feeling. He didn't know why he was being drawn towards this girl whom he had determined to hate....
"This song is for you guys..." the jockey said and Rihanna's voice glided out of the system...Aarohi was trying her best to read Arjun's expression..his smile had been replaced again by a frown...
"Ajeeb Aadmi hain.." she muttered to herself...
That's how much I love you
That's how much I need you
And I can't stand ya
Must everything you do make me wanna smile
Can I not like you for awhile
No.. but you won't let me
You upset me girl, then you kiss my lips
All of a sudden I forget that I was upset
Can't remember what you did
Well I hate it
You know exactly what to do
So that I can't stay mad at you
For too long, that's wrong
Girl, I hate it
You know exactly how to touch
So that I don't wanna fuss and fight no more
So I despise that I adore
And I hate how much I love you boy
I can't stand how much I need you
And I hate how much I love you boy
But I just can't let you go
And I hate that I love you so..
And you completely know the power that you have
The only one that makes me laugh
Sad and it's not fair how you take advantage of the fact that I
Love you beyond the reason why
And it just ain't right
And I hate how much I love you girl
I can't stand how much I need you
And I hate how much I love you girl
But I just can't let you go
And I hate that I love you so
One of these days maybe your magic won't affect me
And your kiss won't make me weak
But no one in this world knows me the way you know me
So you'll probably always have a spell on me
That's how much I love you
How much I need you
That's how much I need you
That's how much I love you
That's how much I need you
And I hate that I love you so--
And I hate how much I love you boy
I can't stand how much I need you
And I hate how much I love you boy
But I just can't let you go
And I hate that I love you so
And I hate that I love you so.. so..
Aarohi was silently enjoying the song and humming along with it while Arjun felt a tempest raging in his heart....
The car came to a halt..."Studio aa gaya.." he quitely told her.
She looked nervous now...and fumbled with the door...he bent over and helped her..In the process her hair fell on his face and he took in her fragrance which made his senses numb...he shivered at his own reaction..."Arjun get a grip on yourself man!" he chided himself.
They both walked to the lobby of the studio and she was dead tensed by now and was muttering some prayer under her breath...
Something came over him and he grabbed her hand...she looked at him...stunned a little...
"Don't worry...U'll do great!" he reassured her feeling the warmth of her palm against his...and for the first time...she smiled!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry for the comparitively short update....I promise next one will be longer and better.
DO COMMENT!
love
Pallavi

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