FF: Arjuhi -Part 8 - Pg 15! 21/06!

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

wow that was amazing thank u

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

really nice - do continue soon. looking forward to the next update.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Hi Tamana 😊 wow dear thats a brilliant 👏 fanfic i landed on. gosh lovely concept😳😊 and love the way u r writing it. letting us know how both brains of Arjun and Arohi & their emotions r working.😳. i mean both the hero and heroin's inner feeling is very well written. thanks for making there family so supportive. please do continue soon.😍
thanks😊🤗 awesome style dear. am already loving it.

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Posted: 16 years ago

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I lv readin ur FF, gr888.

Really nce writn & nt getn bred, cn imagine evry single scene. 👍🏼

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

T@m@n@: u roq yaar!!! this FF is 1 of the bst aftr i read this 1 called "a lifetime wid u"! u really r gud at it!
your story is jst soo amazingg and uff no words....

jst never leave ur FF in the middle!!!!

Updt asap!!

name?? ummm...................... wat about Destiny or kismet sumthingg............. nythingg yaar,.....

lol

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Tamana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: prabzz123
i just read the last two parts and they are totally Awesome plzzzz carry on soooooooon thanksssss

Thanks!!!!!

Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv
again u have left me speechless....how can u write so well yaar??u hv portrayed both arjun n arohi's emotions perfectly.......just awesome fanfic...plz do cont fast..can't wait..

Awww! I'm almost blushing here!!

Originally posted by: latamehra
This is getting better and better...I can really relate to the characters, and your writing flows beautifully😊😊

Waiting for the next chapter..!

I'm seriously blushing now!!!!

Originally posted by: Irika
loved it
do continue soon

Irika

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Originally posted by: amtul2009
it was great very nice do continue love to read this ff

Thanks!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: rbb1
wow that was amazing thank u

Thanks!!!

Originally posted by: julielaldin

really nice - do continue soon. looking forward to the next update.

Will continue!!!!

Originally posted by: castrafa
Hi Tamana 😊 wow dear thats a brilliant 👏 fanfic i landed on. gosh lovely concept😳😊 and love the way u r writing it. letting us know how both brains of Arjun and Arohi & their emotions r working.😳. i mean both the hero and heroin's inner feeling is very well written. thanks for making there family so supportive. please do continue soon.😍
thanks😊🤗 awesome style dear. am already loving it.

Awww!! Thank you so much!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Ms.M.Z
I lv readin ur FF, gr888.
Really nce writn & nt getn bred, cn imagine evry single scene. 👍🏼

Thanks!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: xx-ReenO-xx
T@m@n@: u roq yaar!!! this FF is 1 of the bst aftr i read this 1 called "a lifetime wid u"! u really r gud at it!
your story is jst soo amazingg and uff no words....

jst never leave ur FF in the middle!!!!

Updt asap!!

name?? ummm...................... wat about Destiny or kismet sumthingg............. nythingg yaar,.....

lol

Thank you so much!!! I won't leave it in the middle!!!

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Tamana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Part 4:

Arohi's Point of View

I stepped in the dining area. Suddenly, I felt my eyes weld up with tears, this was the family I would really want. Everyone was laughing and smiling in the table, joking around. Quietly, I sat on a chair where Aunty indicated me to. I was just in between of the elders and the youngsters. I laughed as Nikhil cracked a joke about Antara as she smacked him on his head. They were quite a couple. They liked to talk a lot. On the other hand, Salil and Purvi were the ones who were quiet occasionally stealing glances at eachother. As I looked over at Aman and Sur, I saw them talking quietly in a corner while eating their breakfast. I turned my head towards Aunty and Uncle, they were discussing something really important as Uncle was nodding No very much.
'Good Morning.' My head snapped at the voice as I saw Arjun smile at me and sit beside me. He had just had a shower which was clearly indicated from his wet hair. He was wearing a shirt and jeans. It looked as though he was really free today.
'Good Morning.' I replied smiling. I took some bread and put some butter on it.

Later, everyone were almost finishing breakfast. Suddenly, everyone stopped as if time made them pause their actions. Their eyes were behind me. Slowly, I turned to look behind and saw a couple standing there, not pleased to see the family's reactions. As I turned to look at Arjun, his hands were formed in fists as if he was trying to control his... I don't know...,but maybe, anger.
Uncle and Aunty made their way towards them and greeted them meanwhile no one else moved. Aunty directed her gaze towards Arjun and smiled as if trying to assure him about something and then she called him there and told him something. I saw that Arjun wasn't trying to comunicate with them while standing so close to them. He came towards me.
'Let's go, Mom took a doctor's appointment for you.' he said as he stole a glance to the new couple. They also had their heads bent low.
'But..' I tried to say, immediately being cut of by Arjun.
'Trust me Arohi, I'll explain.' he looked at my eyes and whatever it was, I had no option,but to wait.

Arjun circled his hand on my waist as we made our way towards the door passing the 4 people standing there. I smiled at everyone and turned to leave.
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Arjun's Point of View

I got up late and hurried my way to breakfast. I had washed my hair so they were still wet. Dressing myself into a shirt and jeans, I remembered Mom had taken an appointment for her, to consult the doctor. As I closed the door of my room, I made my way towards the dining area and say Arohi laughing. Again, it made my heart melt. I smiled.
'Good Morning.' I whispered and she turned to look at me. I smiled at her and sat right beside her.
'Good Morning.' She replied, again smiling.

As I looked at everyone, they were almost finishing their breakfast. If I didn't speed up, I would be late for the appointment. I looked up again and saw everyone's faces with a look of shock. Arohi turned to looked around and saw something which gave her a puzzled look. I turned and saw them. How could they, after so many years, come here? Maybe, they had shifted back, but why? Mom and Dad went and greeted them as my hands were forming in fists at the very sight of them. Finally, I was happy and these people of the past come back. Mom looked at me and motioned me to come there. I went there, but didn't dare to talk much. What if my anger escaped out of my control?
'Arjun, Don't be angry. Go with Arohi.' I looked over at her as she said this, so they knew they were coming. 'I said Go, Go Arjun.' I noddded and walked back to the dining area. No one had moved.
'Let's go, Mom took a doctor's appointment for you.' I said and stole a glance at them. They had no shame in coming here.
'But..' I knew she wanted to know, but if I tried telling something, I might just explode so I cut her off.
'Trust me Arohi, I'll explain.' I looked at her intently as she lowered her eyes.

I circled my hand around her waist and turned to leave. They had a confused look on their face, but they didn't say anything.

I know short chapter, but if I don't stop her the suspense is entirely gone!! So enjoy the cliff hanger!!!
3 things I'dlike to say:
1. Please suggest name of the Fic.
2. Do you want Arohi and Arjun to get married before the birth or after the birth?
3. Someone asked me: Why such an elder age? My answer is: In this period everything can go on smoothly,no tension of college, studies or work. I hope you understand.

Thanks for the lovely comments!!

-Tamana!

Edited by T@m@n@ - 16 years ago

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sayantika

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

i am running out of word 2 compliment dis part.....u know i had a feeling dat u might continue ur ff now, so i just logged in 2 see if u had continued it..n bingo, i was right..it is simply awesome n ur fic is really irressitble..plz cont fast...can't wait 2 see what happnes next..