A short fanfic: Ankahee..Updated...Page 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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"Pyar ka tohfa tera ..bana hai jeevan mera

Dil ke sahare maine paa liye...jeene ko aur kya chahiye"

Tohfa (1985)


The parcel surprised her, more so since it didn't have a sender's name on it. She opened it to find a beautiful sea green suit with a silver embroidered dupatta. One of the most beautiful dresses she'd ever seen. And then she remembered Salil's casual remark during lunch time. He had handed her a red dress for Purvi ."My favorite color…..I want Purvi to just have this in her wardrobe even if she does not wear it .....Actually, shopping for this was not as much fun as watching Arjun sort through tons of salwar suits and sarees to search for one in his favorite color ….For someone special I think" he said winking.

Arohi definitely knew enough about Arjun to know that he loved every possible shade water could take. She also didn't know him well enough to guess why this packet was on her desk unless someone had mistakenly placed it on her desk. With an intention of correcting the mistake, she went to Arjun's desk as he was winding up for the day.

"Sir..I think the person whom you sent on an errand to deliver this package made a mistake. He put it on my desk." "No he didn't. He delivered it exactly for whom it was intended." "For me??Why??" Arohi went on the offensive now. "Mujhe par yeh meherbani kyun?"

Arjun's reply to Arohi's accusing question was a haughty one of its own "Meherbani nahi hai..Harjana hai…. During Salil's engagement, I roughed you up and caused some unintentional damage to your beloved dupatta….This is just for compensation. You want it, take it or trash it. After all, I am making you pay for the scratches to my car. Atleast you'll take the unfair part of the description off when you talk about me. Hopefully khadoos also." He finished, sounding amused now.

A part of Arohi wanted to take a pair of scissors, cut the dress into little pieces and dump it in the bin right before Arjun's eyes. Another wanted to just take the dress and cherish it as perhaps the one and only thing Arjun would ever willingly give her. Other than the daily doses of scoldings, arguments and find-my-watch-type-of-inane-orders notwithstanding.

"I errrr…usually don't take gifts from anyone other than people who are close to me. So…I will…I mean Inspite of it, I'll take this because its special..I mean the cloth is special….because you gave it to me…..I mean you owed me a dupatta to say the least..", Arohi said giving Arjun I-am-actually-doing-you-a-favor-by-accepting-this-gift look. And he gave her one of his rare smiles.

"Err…not that I am affected by it or anything…."Arjun asked trying to sound incurious. "But do you like it?" "Its….. very pretty" Arohi said softly, touching the fabric. "This color can make anyone beautiful". "No Arohi…" Arjun said draping the sea green dupatta over her head and tilting her head to look up at him. "You make every color look beautiful."

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!
tht was so cuteee ...............tht was a pretty gud job and was a lovely bit of writing!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwww................. how swweeeeeeeeeeeettttttttttttttttt.
green dupatta..... haila...
thanks for updating.. continue to do so...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow tht was so cute... luved it.. plzz continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey that's so sweet !! esp loved the last sentence ' don't have to see u to know its u .. Arjun SIR ' ....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Anut I look forward to reading your little extracts! They are plain awesome! As always loved this one!

keep posting dear!

Edited by ria_h85 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey amazing ff just read it i really luved it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lovely.... do continuee .... 🤗👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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"Aur is dil mein kya rakha hai....
Tera hi dard chupa rakha hai....
Cheer ke dekhe dil mera to
Tera hi naam likha rakha hai" - Imaandar (1987)



"You know Arohi'..'.cars are very capricious. However nicely you treat them or maintain them, they're always bound to give you loads of unwarranted grief and heartaches. They never behave the way you expect them to behave. Unreliable'.totally unreliable'.", just as his car screeched to a halt in the middle of nowhere. "Just like women" he muttered to himself as he stepped out to find the cause of this abrupt stoppage.

Arohi looked at her watch and then peeped out of the window'"Sir'.is the car going to be ok? We're already running late for our meeting with Mr.Balsara"'.. "O really''I hadn't noticed'. I took 2.5 hours to for my dress selection make up etc etc. And then it my genius idea to take this

no-traffic-through-the-jungle-shortcut to the meeting place instead of the actual route.", Arjun said sarcastically'. "Well'I was not the one talking about how unpredictable and unreliable my car was'.Woh kehte hain na'.deewaro aur caaro dono ke kaan hote hain'", Arohi replied, smiling now.

With half a mind on his car and half on Arohi as she fidgeted with her watch, Arjun opened the bonnet. Looked around for a minute before his attention turned back to Arohi who was fidgeting with her dupatta now. And went back to the car again as she saw him staring at her and raised her eyebrows with a are-you-really-trying-to-fix-your-car-expression? This continued for a couple of minutes till he got a shot back to reality when he accidentally put his right hand on the radiator in middle of his I-can't-stop-looking-at-Arohi session. And burnt it real bad.

Around 30 minutes later, he figured out what was wrong and fixed it. "Ok'done'let's go" he said getting into the driver's seat. "Err'can you wait for a couple of minutes more?" Arohi asked, opening her door now. "Now what???" Arjun asked, exasperated. Wordlessly, she opened the backdoor and pulled out a first aid kit.

Surprised and touched that she noticed that he'd hurt himself, Arjun let her bandage him and then asked her softly "How did u know that I hurt myself?"

In response, Arohi clasped his left hand in hers and brought them both to her heart.

"Ab se '.aisi ki chot nahi jo aapko kahin bhi lage aur mujhe yahan mehsoos na ho."
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Fantastic, lovely, touching, sweet..loved all of them!! I so wish to see these sequences on the show..very well written👏👏👏

Keep them coming😊

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