A short fanfic: Ankahee..Updated...Page 4 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

32

Views

6.4k

Users

21

Likes

13

Frequent Posters

c85rie thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 16 years ago
#11

Very well written , I hope you continue.

koolaries4 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#12
omg...omgosh!! amazing... u gottta continue man!!!!
anut thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#13
P.S. This is not related to the earlier fan fic in any way...these are more of small stand alone sequences I think would be amusing for the lead pair to feature in...



"Tu is tarah se meri zindagi mein shaamil hai

Jahan bhi jaau yeh lagta hai teri mehfil hai" Aap to Aise Na The (1983)

It was the morning after the engagement and Arohi was in a very bad mood as she walked to work. First she woke up late. She blamed it on Arjun. Didn't he call her like 10 times throughout the night to apologize for the torn dupatta'How was she supposed to get any sleep with the phone ringing every fifteen minutes or so. And when she mentioned as such to her sister Antara, who slept in the same room as her, a non plussed Antara rectified her with "Lekin di'The phone rang only twice ' 'you were the one who kept muttering on it throughout.". "Do you know what I was muttering?" a chagrined Arohi asked her. "Err'sorry di'.but it was a lot of Arjun Sir this'.Arjun Sir that".


And when she went to pick a dress to wear to office, all the good ones were in the laundry except for the red one. She groaned and asked Sur if she could borrow one of hers. "Kyu di'.?" "Kyu mujhe is dress mein dekhar Mr. Arjun Punj ne "laal chadi maidan khadi" kaha tha" "Di..since when did u letting him dictate what you wear?" Sur asked innocently.


Observing that Purvi was a little short staffed in the kitchen, Arohi offered to serve her dad his breakfast. Placing the tray in front of him she smiled and said "Here's your special breakfast baba, with your special coffee'the way you like it'No foam". And suddenly came to her senses as her father returned her brilliant smile with an understanding one of his saying "Beta'.I think you know'.Main coffee nahi peeta hoon."


Walking in the sweltering heat did nothing to improve her temper, further provoked when the cream colored Honda Accord drove beside her and stopped by her side. She thought she handled it well when she said pretty audibly "I don't need a lift from you Arjun Sir" and nearly died of mortification the next minute as the man behind the wheel said "But madame, I was asking directions for this address".


Totally restless, she spent the whole day in office alternately scowling and apologizing for her absent mindedness. Purvi's casual observation kept coming back to her. Listening to Arohi grumbling about her boss, Purvi asked her why she didn't leave this one and get another one. The mere thought of it had stunned Arohi and it was a full one minute before she stammered'"Errr..Its actually not that bad you know'I mean'he makes me work real hard..but he's really fair and 'then he's also just and '.a good'err'man..I mean employer '.". "I don't know whether he's good or bad Arohi'.All I know is that somewhere, somehow'he affects you because tumhari har baat Arjun se shuru hokar '.Arjun par khatam hoti hai."


Arjun was surprised to see Arohi so inattentive during the meeting. She rarely spoke a word and instead of her usual confident-looking-directly-into-your-eyes kind of glance, she looked askance.

More ever, she got him all the wrong files when he asked for the project details on their new studio. After sending her back to her cabin for the fifth time to get the right file, he asked her,concerned, "Arohi, are you alright? Tumhara dhyaan kahan hai" She looked straight at him for the first time in the day and said in-a-Can't-hide-can't-admit-it voice, "Sir'.Aap par".


Edited by anut - 16 years ago
Bugger thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#14
anut tht was damn gud !! i hop u wud hav written more !! it was a treat to read wat u hav written!! absolutely real and situational!!
amazingly gud and plzz provide us with sum more stories like tht !!
after watching yesterday show ....with great difficulty i came back to my senses and here wit ur fic ....u hav again snt me to a dreamworld😊
Edited by Bugger - 16 years ago
ria_h85 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#15
You are amazing dear! The best part about your writing is that it looks as if this sequence is coming straight out of the KMH narrative! one thinks how good it would have been if you had included Arjun's response but than I have to admit that this is the beauty of it! you let us think how we would like to see it! very nice !

and hey bugger! how come we haven't met yet😲 main bhi to wohin thi.....dreamland!!!!!!!🤪
koolaries4 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#16
amazing man!!!!!!!!!!!!! jusssssssssssttt looovveeedd it!!! i liked the end.. i can actually picture arohi!! lol.. amazing!! but i m glad that this is happening with arjun!! :D
darkness4ever thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#17
omg that's lovely... beautifully written.. such good narrative grasp... i loved it.. every bit of it.. continue soon.
swetha10 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#18
Cool part.. cant believe Arohi imagining Arjun everywhere... itz lovely.. God cant wait to c her reaction after seeing Arjun.. Plzz continue soon n do PM me when update...
koolaries4 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#19
^ same here.. plz PM me when u update!!! thanks!! :D
Desi-Gal89 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#20
woow great!!!!!! especially the last bit..lol
plz pm me when u update :)

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".