Drabble: Fanaah... Part 5B (LAST) Page 19

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@navk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

superb update
loved it
ending was quite unexpected
and i think it was rushed
loved it anyhow

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MyshaAlvi007

@MyshaAlvi007

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

offfooo ek toh ittey dino baad update dia or oopar se yeh 😡

u know how much i hate this marne maarne type wali ending🤢

m a sucker of happy endings but no ...tum koi magic nahi kar sakti thi after ol u'r a gr8 writer

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Arjuhi_kk

@Arjuhi_kk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Zameem pe na sahi...toh aasmaan m aa mil..
tere bina hai guzaara...aae Dil hai mushkil ❤️

That's all I can say...even though it seemed rushed..
(totally understand ur view) ..but u gave justice to this story 😃

Thank you completing it ❤️

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shalbi

@shalbi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

I really liked the aay you kept it close tor eak, i mean he was dead and couldnt live, he had to go and they could only be together in some other world.

Liked it

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Tulishikha Biswas

@Dark-Beauty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Part 5b
Beautiful update sneha
Such a heart touching ending
So sorry for being so late
But seriously you always reminds me I love your writing for a reason
Thanks for pm
Can we get an epilogue???

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Arjuhi_dreamer

@Arjuhi_dreamer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: sasir
Emotional..

But awesome...

thanks😃

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Arjuhi_dreamer

@Arjuhi_dreamer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: cuteariya
what last part??????? 😲 🥺
u just came back & just finished this SS 😭
eww that jerk Mikhail invited arohi for dinner 😡
that monster had dirty mind abt arohi 😡
arjun didn't agree with arohi's plan at first but at last had to😊
yippee finally that demon got punished for his deed 🥳
awe I love the part that how arjun scared shit out of him 🤣
but arjun had to leave arohi 🥺
it was heart breaking moment of arjuhi 🥺
wow after 7yrs arohi became famous writer but her life still was empty without arjun 😭
OMG arohi also died in accident 😲
at least finally arjuhi soul can stay together ❤️
can u plz update epilogue sneha?

I am so sorry but there was no point in dragging story.

thank u so much for loving this story so much!! :* :*

u had been a brute force for me to update this ss😆

I can't think of any epilogue right now. If i ever come with some idea i will surely do😊

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Arjuhi_dreamer

@Arjuhi_dreamer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: arjuhi-forever
wow what an update...!!
Finally got ur updates aftr so long...!!!
The story ended nd I loved the way u ended it... I mn eternal love...!!!! 😊love u nd ur updates nd really wish to see such stories based on supernatural concept from u in future... 😛

Thank u so mcuh sweetheart and thank for always bugging me to update...seriously that helps😆

I dont know if i can write more supernatural stuff😛 but m willing to write one where Arjun imaybe a werewolf😳, I so love their possessiveness for their mates⭐️ but that's not going to happen in near future since i have got already so much on my plate!