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Posted: 9 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: pinky.padda
what a beautiful ending

absolutely awesome

cannot believe this story has finished

perfect ending

thank you

for writing it

thank u so much😃😃

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Madhu

@Madhu-n-kaddu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#182

Part 1 :

OMGGG... Such a Devdas dis Arjun is...

3 yrs of divorce n he s still wearing his wedding band...

He s so much in love wid Arohi... 😭

Finally Arjuhi met aftr 3 looong years...

Dat moment must b very very intense one...

What has Arjun done in past which lead dem to deir divorce ???,

Watever it was Arjun must hv done it unintentionally or dere is a huuugeee misunderstanding...

Coz his love for her is unconditional n he s suffering too much..

Dey both r in so much pain...

Cant see dem like dis... 😭

Edited by Madhu-n-kaddu - 9 years ago

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Madhu

@Madhu-n-kaddu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#183

Part 2 :

ooohhh... I love Arjun's intense eyes on Arohi...

can feel d goosebumps till here...

n I love intense Arjun also...

Awww... he covered her wid his coat so she wont catch cold...

Aisa Arjun kabhi koi galat kaam kar hi nahi sakta...

He is pavitra like Ganga Jal...

Aru is acting all rude to him... its heart breaking actually...

The Misunderstanding in deir past must be very deep...

OMGGG... dey kissed... dat toon this intense...

Chingaari av v baaki hai...

HORMONAL RUSH----- huhhh... kuchh v ...

Arjun is sooo romantic n dreamy n full of hope...

He will win her back for sure...

"I couldn't sleep last night after that kiss..." ---- Arre baapre... ROFL...

ladka toh suppa BOLD nikla...

Arohi ----- hehehehe...

"really?? I don't remember anything other than that sanity disturbing kiss we shared from last night!" he winked at her... ---- Again a huuugeee SIXER...

Yeh ladka Aru ki sanity bigaadke hi rahega...

n HE kissed her again...

He s a ROCKING KISSING STAR...

"3 years without u were hell Arohi...I want u back and I will win u back" ---- Ladka toh chhaa gaya...

"God! Ur kisses are addictive...I want to kiss u again..." ---- BESHARAM Arjuns r my all tym FAV...

n Yeh wala toh kuchh zyada hi hai...

"Teach me...give me some "private" classes" ---- ek hi update mein inne SIXERS i mean besharmi...

Yuvraj k 1 over m 6 sixers ka record tut gaya...

"and I called just to give u my number..." ---- Another one...

Damn Snehu ben, I just love these killer one liners...

"I am sorry! I really am...but m not letting u go this time Arohi...we will be better!"

he s sooo hopeful n saying sorry for his part also...

Pls Aru sunn toh lo ... everything will b good after that...

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Madhu

@Madhu-n-kaddu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#184

Part 4 :

Hahaha... Possessive Arjun in action...

Bhagaa diya Aryan ko...

Haayeee... his intense look...

I wish i too get one of his dat look for me...

I m sure about his pain... its bcoz of Aru's ignorance towards him...

Arrey she should listen to him once naa...

dere is always two side of any story...

She should listen Arjun's POV too...

Dis guy cant b heartless...

Stubbornness sometime can kills u too...

"I give u 5 seconds...if u didn't walk to car on ur own...I will pick u up n throw in car" ---- Do it Ajun... hum tumhaare saath hai...

OMGGG... first kiss...

So suppa cute n romantic n HOT... all together...

Only Possible with Arjuhi...

Arjun brought her to their once home... dat was heart breaking...

He didn't even change d nameplate...

This guy is soo helplessly hopeful...

Pls Aru give him a chance...

zyada itraao mat... Arjun ko chance dene waalon ki kami nahi hogi iss desh mein...

We are just waiting for his one ishara...

He changed NOTHING in dat house... OMG... pls koi mujhe isse de do...

Pls pls pls...

Aru apni aankhein kholo pls...

the only place which makes me feel home..."---- ladka heera hai heera...

Arohi felt as if he was trying to tell not this place but she was his home... --- Yup r8 u r Aru...

He even kept her things...

Flashback of fight for cushion is cute...

D way she was threatening him by taking his Dadi's name was hilarious...

arjun is soo cute... much cuter than Arohi...

OMG... dey gave in to their desire for each other...

But after dat what happened is heart breaking...

Angry Aru n helpless Arjun...

But for me Arjun is here the injured party...

He took the maximum burn here...

Nothing can be just physical between Arjuhi...

Dere is much more dan it...

Arohi is wrong here...

She should know it...

The past... no no no... it cant b true...

NATASHA... yeh naam hi bahot zyada kaala hai...

n watever happened is sure shot Natasha's kaala kartut...

Coz an egoistic person can never cheat on anyone...

n if dat erson person is Arjun... there is no way he even pronounce d wort CHEAT...

There is a huge misunderstanding in Arohi's mind alone...

Natasha has shown her things she wanted to see...

Reason for Arjun's changed behavior must have some reasons...

All she need was to ask Arjun... to talk...

But instead of that she took all hasty decision ...

Atleast she could confront dem right there right then...

Her this hasty decision has already made him n her suffer for 3 long years...

Just hoping it wont make dem suffer for any longer...

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Madhu

@Madhu-n-kaddu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#185

Part 3 :

Dadi is cool...

Getting loads of positive vibes from her...

She will definite help Arjun in monaofying his ruthii huyi ex-Wifey...

Aru is too fond of Dadi...

So there will b less hurdle for Arjun in his mission...

Hahahaha... Arjun is so cute...

Not leaving a single chance to woo Aru...

He is keeping all his options open...

Be it Dinner or Lunch or Breakfast or Coffee or simple walk...

So damn cute...

Everything was going smoothly den suddenly things changed...

All angry n serious...

Poor Arjun...

Ooohhh... possessive Arjun... n scared Aru... cute combo...

I am the only one for u" --- Haayeee... Love it ...

We know it only Aru could know it too...

Dat HOT encounter in his cabin...

His caresses n then dat kiss... ooo... so very HOT...

"No Arohi...this is my chance to have u back...how can u expect me to let it go like this? I will do anything to win u back...whatever it takes m ready to give it all..." ---- awww... somehow it hurt me like hell... HIS PAIN...

it has to be only me!" --- OMG... Aru should listen to him atleast once...

r I should say they should talk about past, may b it will clear watever happened between them...

A guy who is wearing his wedding ring after 3 years of divorce cant b wrong...

May b he did some mistakes in past but he got his lesson now n very much deserves chance...

Pls make Aru listen to him once...

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florine_20

@florine_20

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#186

read all the parts
brilliant piece of work sneha

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Madhu

@Madhu-n-kaddu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#187

Part 5 :

Arre baap re... ho gaya na siyappa...

dat fight between Arjuhi was damn ugly...

Arjun has asked her so many times to listen him once but she denied each n every time which is definitely not done...

But those last sentence injured egoistic Arjun uttered is really scary...

" if u walked out from here today without hearing me once...everything will be over Arohi..." ---- it is very scary...

Ho gaya naa...

its one week now n dere is NO Arjun around Arohi...

n now She s missing him... very good Arohi...

Jab ird gird mandrata tha tab value nahi tha... ab bahot yaad aa rha hai naa...

Ab bhugto... u deserve dis ... huhhh...

Now wats cooking up in Dadi's mind ???????

I dont think she knows anything about their last rendezvous ...

Her Grand Son didnt share it i guess...

Haailaaa... Arjun is not giving any bhau to Arohi...

Aru tu toh gayi... sachchi muchchi gayi... lambe tym k liye...

Sweetest Kumud is always under doubt...

Hahaha... Dadi is d coolest...

Total emotional blackmailer...

at last dey made dem dance together...

But what a waste...

A close dance between Arjuhi for d sake of formality would do nothing...

"My Grandson loves u a lot...and not able to tell u before u left is his biggest regret" ---- Awww... her words hurt me to the limit...

"I was everything, Arohi...careless, irresponsible, ruthless, insensitive, arrogant but...I was not a cheater" ---- I know n believe that... My Arjun cant b a cheater... never ever ... even not in nightmare

Leave Arohi n come to me...

See Kumud ne kaisa zeher faila diya...

I so knew she s bad...

Maaro kheenchke 4 laafe isko ...

Hehehe... somehow i love d way Arjun said NO to her...

There were times when Arjun was dying to make her listen him n everytime she ignored him n walked over his pleas n heart...

Now she wants him to talk why would he talk for her peace of mind...???

He s a egoistic person n he s taking full revenge on her which is pretty justified from Arjun's POV...

But shifting to London is a bad decision...

Wow... Truth is out now...

Mujhe pata tha yeh Natasha n Kumud dono hi uchcha koti ki kutti, kamini, jaahil aurat hai...

in dono ko suli pe chadha do koi...

Barbaad karke rakh di Arjuhi ki zindagi...

Arohi, tere bhugatne k din shuru huye...

BUT IT IS NOT CLEAR TO ME WHY ALL OF A SUDDEN ARJUN STARTED IGNORING AROHI 3 YEARS BACK BEFORE D DIVORCE ????????

Now Arjun is giving cold shoulders to her...

Arohi was fooled at dat tym but it didn't change d fact that she didn't trust Arjun...

No amount of SORRY cant change thing like this over night...

They take time...

And in here things are messed up badly ...

and top of that Arohi is dealing with Egoistic Arjun whose ego is injured right now...

Arjun couldn't managed to forgive her but managed to succumb to her single demand ... Uhh ooh... MEN WILL B MEN...

"we both needed it to get each other out of our system" --- No comments on this...

Felt like ONE NIGHT STAND to me...

Hope he ll find out his true love for her over his ego n anger n return to her soon...

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Madhu

@Madhu-n-kaddu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#188

Part 6 :

Ab toh kuchh kiya nahi jaa sakta... bss fine na hoke v I AM FINE hi bol sakte ho Arohi...

Keep crying Aru...

U deserve this...

Waise cool Dadi's cool revenge is mind blowing...

Buwahahahaha... i can imagine Kumud's state...

n I am sooo happy...

No one can take better revenge but Dadi...

Like Grandson Like Dadi... full of Hope...

Ab toh Dadi ki ummeed hi bachi hai jispe chalkar Arjun wapas a sakta hai to Arohi...

Oohhh... she shifted back to their EX HOME ...

Now she s also full of hope n crying n blaming herself too...

I love d way she slipped in Arjun's shirt...

Kinda cute it is...

Yiippeee... Arjun is back n back n back...

It was heart melting d way he opened his heart out in front of Arohi...

Its not easy to forgive someone so soon after suffering so much insult from dat same person...\

But his love has defeated all d negativity he has in him including his ego...

if he told her otherwise he would never be able to forgive himself for pushing her to edge...---- Awww even after all dis he s holding himself responsible for Arohi's condition...

He s dfntly a gold hearted person...

What an amazing revenge he took against Natasha...

bravo babby... bravo...

nobody gets away after messing with Arjun Singhania..she needed to be punished..." ---- oh yeeaahhh

OMG he proposed... dey r getting married... Yiippeee...

Hahaha... D way Arjun reacted on Arohi's someone is coming to live with us is suppa cute...

"there is no way my letting someone invade our privacy" ---- oohhh... bada hi romantic hai ladka...

Dey r going to b Mommy n daddy... yaahooo

Anya is cute...

Dey are complete now...

Thnx Sneha for this awsm story... Short but nice one...

Keep writing n rocking...

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Arjuhi_dreamer

@Arjuhi_dreamer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: Madhu-n-kaddu
Part 1 :

OMGGG... Such a Devdas dis Arjun is...
3 yrs of divorce n he s still wearing his wedding band...

He s so much in love wid Arohi... 😭

Finally Arjuhi met aftr 3 looong years...
Dat moment must b very very intense one...

What has Arjun done in past which lead dem to deir divorce ???,
Watever it was Arjun must hv done it unintentionally or dere is a huuugeee misunderstanding...
Coz his love for her is unconditional n he s suffering too much..

Dey both r in so much pain...

Cant see dem like dis... 😭

thank u so much Madhu

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Arjuhi_dreamer

@Arjuhi_dreamer

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: Madhu-n-kaddu
Part 2 :

ooohhh... I love Arjun's intense eyes on Arohi...
can feel d goosebumps till here...
n I love intense Arjun also...

Awww... he covered her wid his coat so she wont catch cold...
Aisa Arjun kabhi koi galat kaam kar hi nahi sakta...

He is pavitra like Ganga Jal...

Aru is acting all rude to him... its heart breaking actually...
The Misunderstanding in deir past must be very deep...

OMGGG... dey kissed... dat toon this intense...
Chingaari av v baaki hai...

HORMONAL RUSH----- huhhh... kuchh v ...

Arjun is sooo romantic n dreamy n full of hope...
He will win her back for sure...

"I couldn't sleep last night after that kiss..." ---- Arre baapre... ROFL...
ladka toh suppa BOLD nikla...
Arohi ----- hehehehe...

"really?? I don't remember anything other than that sanity disturbing kiss we shared from last night!" he winked at her... ---- Again a huuugeee SIXER...
Yeh ladka Aru ki sanity bigaadke hi rahega...

n HE kissed her again...
He s a ROCKING KISSING STAR...

"3 years without u were hell Arohi...I want u back and I will win u back" ---- Ladka toh chhaa gaya...

"God! Ur kisses are addictive...I want to kiss u again..." ---- BESHARAM Arjuns r my all tym FAV...
n Yeh wala toh kuchh zyada hi hai...

"Teach me...give me some "private" classes" ---- ek hi update mein inne SIXERS i mean besharmi...
Yuvraj k 1 over m 6 sixers ka record tut gaya...

"and I called just to give u my number..." ---- Another one...

Damn Snehu ben, I just love these killer one liners...

"I am sorry! I really am...but m not letting u go this time Arohi...we will be better!"
he s sooo hopeful n saying sorry for his part also...
Pls Aru sunn toh lo ... everything will b good after that...

thanks for highlighting :*

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