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Posted: 10 years ago
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One of d best writer I HV ever known ..u r best in whatever u write..loved every thing abt this ..
So Mr singhania also has a heart BT he is busy hiding..I m sure he will realize soon ...I felt bad for arohi ..she has feelings for him BT poor soul couldn't express it
Captivating concept
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awee
Cute!!
So arohi is in love with him but who knows about Arjun hmm update soon though! Waiting!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
jaaan, iam glad u r back with an update of this fairytale
great start mahi - aru's character is beautifully portrayed in arjun's words - loved the start dear
please continue - would love to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
first of all m in love with Title...
IN LOVE WITH A DEVIL PRINCE
and m already in lve with this mysterious charismatic and insanely handsome devil prince..

the more i read ur stories the more i fall in love with them.. uff kaise kahun ki Kitani Mohabbat Hai..

the questions of cindrella's fans cracked me up.. her fans are so cute..
and utne hi cute h Arohi ke frndzz..

WTOL and FFMW ki Arohi ke baad mujhe is Arohi ki innocence se bhi pyar ho gya...she is so pure at heart..
"Dil se ..kyunki dil kabhi galat nhi hota.." awww !! i want to pull her cheeks..

the way Arohi drools on her classy boss... mein toh faint hi ho jati hoon..!! how she handles so much hotness without faintng..

arey Attitude dekho chore ka...dil hi le gya...
this is not a new thing..mujhe toh har Arjun se pyar ho jata..bande ki personality hi aisi h...meri kya galti,, hehehe

shit yaar.. kya har Arjun ka...ULLU hona zarori h..
yhn hmari ladki uske ishq mein dube ja rhi h,,aur use khabar hi nhi...
bechari vo apne meeting wale 2 minute bhi na bita payi..

haww...Arohi jhooth bhi bolti h...par koi na..no one in her house deserves the truth..sab sab ke sab nihayati besharam h...

Purvi is so nice and supporting..n Shefali toh h hi best friend..
bechari ka popat kr diya Jay ne...

Arohi ka Haal-e-dil..!! senti kr diya ladki ne..
Arun ko mere samne lao..maar maar ke akkal thikane na lga di toh...
ab aap hi btao ye bhi koi baat hoti h...ab itna bhi kya busy h ki Arohi ka pyar nhi dikhta...

aww..5 weeks baad uska naam iya toh hmari ladki emotional ho gyi... is Ullu ki toh... utho jaago aankhein kholo...Arohi ki mohabbat ko dekho Duffer ladke...

oh ho smart Arohi..topic bna diya haal e dil ko...
resignation letter...ufff ! why ppl dont even give chance..try bhi nhi krte h aur give up kr dete h..
itna pyar h phir bhi itni asani se jane de rhi h.. kya kar sakte h..h toh Arohi bhi Ullu hi...

ab aayega Arohi ka hot hot avatar...Purvi Shefali ab tum hi in dono ullus ka kuch kar sakti ho...Janta tumhare sath tum aage badho...


yeh Arjun kitna non emotional h...paisa paisa paisa..krta h...itna paisa kma kr jaoge khn jab kharach krne ke liye koi nhi hoga...
pyar ki toh kadar h nhi bas note ginvalo..

Arjun ki nazro se Arohi ka chotu sa pr true and honest description...dil le gya bhai...ab itna bhi ullu nhi h...balki Ullus ka King h ye...

aankhon mein pyar dikhta h pr us pyar mein pan naam nhi dikhta h...
uska Haal e dil smjh gya pr ye nhi samjha ki she loves u IDIOT...!!!
aww.. he feels someone is more Lucky than him cz that person have Arohi's love...
abhi ise kon samjhaye ki vo tum hi ho.. Arohi's deep honest selfless love is only for her sadu boss Arjun..the love for which heart aches is just in front of his eyes...he needs to grab it...

Precap...oye hoye..Jalne ki boo aa rhi thi.. ;)


aiting for next one...but FFMW pehle...

n love u <3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey nyc start plz update soon...
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Mera itne bade comment k baad bhi no update...
Itni badi saza kyu mujh masum ko?
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Ch#3

"What If Cinderella had option of two Prince? Lets Wonder!


"Oh my God",Arohi whispered staring at her reflection in mirror.Purvi rolled her eyes:ab ye aesa dramatic change bhi nhi.its just...
Arohi turned to face them,pointing toward herself:just?
Her casual sikrt & shirt was replaced by pink summer sleeveless dress,reaching to mid of her creamy legs with matching scarf tied around her neck.Her spectacles were removed,da soft makeup making her kohl eyes incredibly beautiful.Her silky hairs were straightened,to her relief covering her square neckline.

Arohi in disbelief:tum logo ne mujhe kya se kya bna dya hai.
Purvi pushed da 3 inches heel sandals toward her,reminding her to wear:humne kuch nhi bnaya Arohi.
As Arohi stood wearing the heels,Purvi lookd her appraisngly from head to toe and softly added:koi bhi kisi ko kuch nhi bnata.tum ab bhi whi ho jo tum thi,you are just presenting yourself differntly to world.aur is mein kuch bhi galt nhi hai.
Purvi:ab jaldi jao Arjun sir k cabin mein.I cant wait to see his reaction.



Arohi heart raced wildly.She stopped at da door:kal try krein? Meeting mein aese bger kisi baat k unke cabin mein jana ajeeb lg rha hai.
Shefali who was enjoying recorded call for Arohi program scolded in warning tone:Arohi! Koi bhi bahana bna kr jao. Raaste mt dhundu bchne k.
Arohi nervously:mujhse nhi ho rha.
Purvi snapped:sb ki itni mehnat k baad ab tum aese peeche kese hth skti ho?
Arohi looked at Purvi and Shefali with guilt.In these three days dy had put all their effort to transform Arohi.Instead of their busy schedule they roamed from market to parlour,giving her confidence & hope.
Purvi softly:jeetne k ley kheylna pdta hai Arohi.
Pointing toward herself,Shefali & her playing calls:we all want to know..jb ye Cinderella pehla kadam bdhaeygi to aage kya hoga?
Shefali too stood up and hugged Arohi from behind:and we all are sure..buht acha hoga.
Arohi gave them a nod,after a quick nod she left her cabin.

She waked out in corridor,ignoring da arrows of gaze she got from staff.The gazes were not negative,dy all love their cinderella.Infact it was a hardship to not to.But da curisoty & excitement of her loved ones was making her nervousness worst.No one knew da complete truth but all was sure da reasone behind hr dramatic change in.avtar.

Taking da elevator with quick steps she reached to top floor.But instead heading toward cabin,remain rooted to spot.The flattering of butterflies in pit of her stomach were increasing by each passing moment.

The wicked boyish whistle made her head turn in opposite direction.Saleel gave her appraising look,teased:kiske katal ka irada hai?
Arohi:Arjun Sir.
She quickly added getting his raised brow:aa..Arjun Sir cabin mein hein?
Saleel:haan hai to sahi..par buht busy hai.koi zroori kaam?
Arohi thoughtfully:buht zyada busy?
Saleel sat on desk:hmesha ki trhan.
He leaned closer:par thodi deyr tk ek special guest aa rha hai meeting k ley to pagal bhi ho rha hai.
When Arohi looked at him he added in a hushed tone:yes i know pagal to wo already hai, par abhi thoda zyada ho rha hai.
He grinned as Arohi lips stretched in beautiful smile.Only Saleel could dare to speak about Arjun in such manner.To world he was his asistant manager but he shared a very close relation with him.

Peon interrupted:Saleel sir Arjun sir aap ko foran bula rhe hein.
Saleel walked in his cabin in hurry while peon walked in opposite direction:phool to mein bhool hi gya.
Arohi walked back to elevator with a disappointed sigh:abhi sahi waqt nhi lg rha.
Her gaze went up to celling,inquiring her God:kya kbhi mera sahi waqt aaeyga bhi?
She was so lost in her thought dt she didnt realized how she bumped in something hard and lost her balance.
"duae sunne k ley line hmesha busy pr naa shukri ki sza foran tyar"
Her eyes sequeezed in fear to hit da marble floor but than in next moment she found herself sound & safe in two strong arms.

The first & only filmy scence of her life so far.Good Start!

She lifted her eye lids slowly to meet da arrested gaze of her saviour.The well dressed man,in simple words can put as every girl dream.Tall,fair,handsome with beautiful eyes & silky hairs.But he was not her Arjun Sir! Her faint sigh of disappointed was followed by Saleel cough.Her head spin in his direction & she instantly pulled herself away finding Arjun sir standing next to him.

He readers made her sure, Shock is expected. But she was confuse.The real reason behind Arjun sir shock was her new roop or she was in a man arms?

Saleel broke da awkward silence:Welcome Mr.Aryan Sinha.
Her heart raced,so this was da 'zroori' guests.Stoling a glance at Saleel & peon worried face her fear get confirmed.He walked closer to them.His each step sure,confident like a proud lion.He extended his hand in greeting which Aryan accepted in a friendly manner.Noticing Aryan gaze again flowing to Arohi,Arjun guestured in his typical boss style:mera staff..sorry for the trouble.Welcome.

Her gaze lowered,her stomach knotted in guilt & embarassment.
Aryan was not able to hold back his grin any more:I realy cant belive this.
To their shocked guess he explained to Arohi:tum cinderella ho?right?
His happiness was clearly visible in his cute dimple:jb mene last week cinderella ka program sunna..pehli baar. Mujhe lga k tumhi ho.tumhari awaz.. Mene kbhi socha bhi nhi tha k tum se dubara mulaqt hogi.
As Arohi stared his face with attention,da realization strike her.Aryan tried to remind her:college mein youth festival tha..kuch ek saal pehle. Jahan tumne ganna gaya tha..aur mene tumhe 1st prize dya tha.
Arohi lips broke in smile:aap guest of honour the.
He laughed:yeah..
Than he gestured to his own self:lgta hai zyada hi handsome hogya hun..jo tumne pehchane mein itni deyr lga di.
His gesture was so friendly & comfortable dt she cant stop her laugh.She shook her head in No.Aryan in disbelief:infact change to tum lg rhi ho..you are looking so beautiful.I mean..pehle se bhi zyada.
Maybe it was power of Arjun gaze dt made her look at him.And made her smile vanished.
Aryan unaware of all the tension was rejoicing his surprise:dunya sch mein buht choti hai.
Arjun gave a nod & with a forced courtesy signaled to his cabin:chlien.
Aryan:haan.
But instead of taking steps with Arjun he looked at Arohi & flashed his charming smile.She tried,but her lips refused to stretch under Arjun impatient gaze.With a haste'chlti hun',she walked away.

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Arohi:sb buht buht bura hogya,aur wesa to bikul nhi hua,jesa tum ne kaha tha.
Purvi embarassed:mene tumhe akele milne ko kaha tha Arjun sir se,chaar logo k beech mein wo tumhe keh bhi kya skte the?
Shefali applying nail paint:tu Arjun sir ko chod,doosre wale k bare mein bta? Wo Aryan Sinha hot hai kya?
Jay sudden voice surprised her:tumhe us se kya?
Shefali teased her jealous boyfriend:wo sir ka hone wala partner hai..to itna to pta hona chahey naa?
Jay mocked:hone wala hai..abhi hua nhi hai.
And he shifted his attention to Arohi:peon ne bola tumhare janne wala hai..btao kese?
Saleel & Sanchit joined too:hme bhi btao?
Arohi:mein Aryan se ek saal pehle.
Saleel waved a hand interrupting her:Aryan k bare mein nhi..tumhare dream man k baare mein.
Arohi face turned pale.Her friends rescued her:konsa dream man.
Sanchit teased:jis ghade ki bewakufi ki sza hme mil rhi hai.tumhari qatil nigah ka nishana hmare dil par to lg gya..pr kya use bhi lga?
Jay pressed:kesa reaction milla..yahi hai wo,ya office k baad us se milne jaogi?
Saleel took out flower from her pot & offered her in flirtrious manner:us I.S.D ko bhool kr ek chance hme nhi mil skta?
All confused:I.S.D?
Saleel proudly:Idiot, stupid, duffer.
Arohi laughed while Purvi snatched flower from his hand & kept it back:ye ek research..Arohi ne explain kya tha naa meeting mein?
Saleel annoyed:par callers ko to apne suggestion k results to chahey hoge naa?
Purvi & Shefali in:uske ley apko intezar krna pdega kal k programme ka..bhoolna mat.
Their laughter ceased on their boss sudden appearence.They were shocked,because it was not everyday dt Arjun Singhania farwell his guests to gate.
Aryan looked them apparisingly:you have impressive staff.
Arjun:yeah..


The word one was so dry,in such a warning tone dy all scattered to their working place with hesitant smile,leaving Arohi alone,usually.
Aryan extended his hand which she hesitately accepted:it was realy nice to meet you..next week mulaqat hogi..party mein.
She gave a nod while Arjun gave vocal assurance:zroor..agr tum aane ka time nikal sko.
Aryan:ofcourse..i will come.tumhare invitation pr mein naa aaun,kese ho skta hai?Natasha ko sath le kr aaunga.
He hold Arjun shoulder,preventing to follow him to outside:No need to bother. Have a good day.
Flashing his charming smile he walked away.

To her surprise she found her Arjun sir still standing there.And when she stole a glance at his face,she found him looking at her.
LOOKING AT HER!!!
Holding her breath she counted da seconds in mind:1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10...
Her heart danced in joy.Than he looked away,taking a abrupt step he stopped he asked in his deadly bossy tone:party ka invitation pass milgya tumhe?
Her heart thundered,she wanted to say hundred words but her lips pressed together & she stared him dumbly.
On his impatient raised eyebrow she finally shook her head in no.
Arjun:to lo..phir kb logi?
With that he walked away while her lips stretched in happiest smile.

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Dressing ka asar hota hai. Duniya wahi dekhti hai..jo use dikhaya jata hai. Appearence k change se attention milti hai. It makes you happy..make u confident.So all of you..must give it a try.
And about da final result...usne mujhe dekha!
Than with a laugh she added:wese aaj to sb ne hi mujhe dekha.

Aur jin callers ka idea apply kya jese..girly colours,knee length,acha makeup ye sb theek rha. Peacock feathers aur tatoos ki zroorat nhi padi..
Thank u so much aap sb k sath k ley...aaj jesa mujhe lga. I just cant put in words...I am.happy..truly happy.

And than she requested in her melodious tone:i want to feel it again & again. Aesa kya krun jo wo mujhe phir dekhe..baar baar dekhe..Will you help me my darling callers?

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"wese aaj to sb ne hi mujhe dekha"

Her teasing voice again ran through his mind & he immediately looked away with a silent groan.He was trying best not to look distracted in meeting but his gaze kept shifting to her again and again.How could he? How could he not? Her change look was a hard blow to him.She is beautiful,truly beautiful.The pink colour dress had made her rosy cheeks more prominent.The dress confirmed one thing for sure,Arohi Ahluwalya has figure of sin.Curvy..tempting..handful..blossom rose,begging to pluck.And now in a blue silk her creamy skin look like invitation hell.

He felt like a fool,a realy disgusting fool.

He turned to oppsite side of room:Tia..brief me on coming week segments.
She explained,but Arjun eyes shifted to Sanchit, Jay & dn all da men sitting inside whom gazes were fixed on Arohi.

He cleared his throat in waning & dn stole a glance of her himself.The shining golden rays peeping throuh da window was giving her look of goodess.Her hairs,her eyes,her lips,her neck.. When he managed to wrench his focus away from her low bodice up,he noticed a dreamy expression on her face. Her kohl eyes were focused on something far far away.Her full pink lips were curved into da slightest trace of smile. Arohi Ahluwalya was daydreaming.In his office,In his meeting.Which he was leading.Realy?He would not be ignored.

"Miss Arohi", A hushed fall in reply of his voice.Her gaze meet with him but da lovely surprise vanished in next moment.
Thanks to her darling callers,she has so many tricks up her sleeve to hold her Arjun Sir attention.She had spent hours before da mirror as she practiced lifting & lowering her lashes in flirtourious manner.And pouting,yaang par taang rkh kr bethna,ek bar mein.jawab.mt dena vgera vgera"


She fixed those big kohl eyes upon him,da force of which stunned him for a second.Then she lowered her lids & lifted them again.And pouted her lips, almost as if she were sucking on a lemon.Is she unwell? Her eyes seemed shiny,deep today.Why was he noticing her eyes?Was it da smoky makeup or her blue dress?Didn't she always wear faint colour dresses?His gaze dropped to her today dress & he was not able to take note of the color at all.He only saw creamy white skin rising in tantalizing swells above her fitted bodice.
She straightened her back & asked huskily:Yes?
With that she raised her brow too.

Is this realy happening?
He almost chocked on his word:What about your programme? How is it going?

He watched in state of shock as she lifted her one knee up & set it on other with great patient.And than she drummed her nails on her knee,making his gaze stick to her sexy legs.Which will feel so smooth and silky against him..wrapped around his body.
She answered with a pride:perfect.

Arjun:Realy?
He himself was not sure of real direction of his question.

Sheali in excitement:superb amazing..callers ki to line lgi rehti hai. Naey naey..intersting ideas.
Jay:i love da idea of bike driving..totaly in dhoom style.
Sanchit dreamily:nhi..mujhe baarish mein sari pehn kr dance krne wala idea zyada acha lga.
Tia:ab baarish naa ho to wat krte rhe? Mujhe aag lgane wale prank ka idea zyada acha lga..aese wo ghda kya..uska baap bhi dekhega.
Simmi:aur tattoos aur hair colour ka idea bhi best hai.
Saleel:No hair colour,I love your hairs.
Getting look of Arjun unbelivble shock Sale casualy added:everyone loves natural hair colour.deep neckline ka idea zyada intersting hai.

Tia:naught boy..
Purvi snapped:tum ladko ko aur kuch nazar hi nhi aata.
Saleel:tum jo dikhane ki koshish krti ho..wahi to dekhenge.
Women neckline is
Jay & Sanchit: kam se kam hum honest to hein..jo sch hai wahi bolte hein.
Shefali:to kya hum jhoot bolte hein.


"thats Enough!"he said sharply. Miss Arohi apna programme manage krne k ley kafi hai,apne apne kaam par dhyan do"He stole one more glance of her.Damn!She had caught his eye & then closed her eyes for a second or two, slowly lifting her lashes, fluttering them in unbelivblr speed.How odd.Truly strange.

Purvi:sir T.v channel ka project k bare mein koi new detail?
Arjun thoughtfully:Its nearly done..buht jald.
Saleel:Not yet.
To his challenging gaze Arjun replied with equal intensity:buht jald..I assured u.
The friends hold da gaze for a long moment,dn Arjun dismiss da meeting.
All rosed up from their seat and started to leave da meeting room.He picked up his cell & he looked at her again.one last time.
And she did it again.Her eyelashes batting at rapid speed.What da devil is wrong?
"Miss Arohi..are u ok?"
She uttered with flushed cheeks:I am fine.
She got up while he spoke,da curisioty turned into worry:lg rha hai tmhari ankh mein kuch gir gya hai..mere pass eye drops hein.

He paused,as she stared him in disbelief with her dove eyes.Suddenly sad eyes:thank you.
With that she walked out of door where Saleel was waiting for her,leaving him puzzled.



Precap: He frozed hearing her next words"can you belive dear callers..usne mujhse poucha kya meri aankh mein koi problem hai?

I dont have words to explain how sorry I am.
Life is busy,cruel,demanding.

Its ur Love dt always me to bank.

Thank u so much dear readers for ur comments, ur pms, ur msgs...thank u so much for ur love & belive.it matter alot to me

Dont forget to give feedback.Hope dis part is not too much boring.Next will be completely Arjuhi...



Muaah

Edited by AAKMH2 - 10 years ago
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#48
Maaahive what a surprise jaan

Will read now
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
How can u ever say/ think whether ur update is boring Maaahive
I thoroughly enjoyed reading it
Somehow Iam liking this aryan - I don't want him to be a evil negative character - Natasha ko thum jo bhi chacho kardo - she cannt be anything but evil.
Loving my innocent aru
Haha the eye drops part was tooo cute - I laughed my heart out
Superb update dear
Will wait for the next
Edited by Arjuhisis - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Mahi tu stop kyun karti h ..
This is so tempting...
Loved every bits of it
I just think arohi doesn't need to show off for getting attention
Her simply attracts people to her
N arjun is attracted to that simple arohi
Yeah Aryan definitely cupid banne ga inke bitch m
Jealousy wala tadka humesha chalta h ;)
Update soon

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