Arjuhi OS#25: Seekho Na (Happy Bday Mahi)Completed - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
DEAR ANA I WANT TO ASK MANY THINGS FROM YOU

FIRST I WANT TO COMMENT ABOUT YOUR THIS OS

ITS BEAUTIFUL , YOU HAVE SHOWN VERY BEAUTIFULLY EMOTIONS OF A HOUSEWIFE WHO LIVES AMONG A JOINT FAMILY , YOU HAVE ALSO SHOWN THAT SOMETIME WHEN SHE HAVE TO TAKE CARE OF FAMILY OR HER CHILDREN SHE FORGETS ABOUT HER HUSBAND AND WHEN TAKING CARE OF HER HUSBAND SHE FORGOT ABOUT HER IN LAWS AND CHILDREN
HUSBANDS SHOULD ALSO HELP THEIR WIFE IN TAKING CARE OF FAMILY IF A HOUSEWIFE IS TAKING CARE OF HER IN LAWS , IT IS ALSO A DUTY OF A HUSBAND TO TAKE CARE OF HIS WIFE'S FAMILY AND HE SHOULD NOT GET INVOLVE IN HIS OFFICE SO MUCH THAT HE TOTALLY FORGOT ABOUT HIS WIFE OTHERWISE HIS WIFE WILL FEEL NEGLECTED, UNLOVED , UNCARED, UNSECURE
HUSBAND SHOULD TAKE SOMETIME FROM HIS WORK TO GIVE HIS WIFE MANY ROMANTIC MEMORIES SO THAT HIS WIFE SHOULD NOT FEEL UNCARED AND UNLOVED
YOU HAVE WRITEEN A VERY GOOD THING IN THE END OF YOUR OS
(In between the routine tough life and especially while staying in between a
joint family, Husbands need to take out, snatch out few moments for the one
person whose whole world revolved around them, just so to make her feel wanted,
needed, loved)

I ALSO WANT A HUSBAND WHO WILL UNDERSTAND ME , WHO WILL GIVE ME SOME OF HIS TIME , WILL SPEND SOME TIME WITH ME AND NOT ME MAKE UNCARED AND UNLOVED BY GETTING IN SOO MUCH IN HIS OFFICE WORK

SECOND THING
HOW HAVE YOU WRITTEN THIS OS I MEAN TO SAY THAT WHAT ARE THE STEPS TO WRITE A THIS TYPE OF GUD AND BEAUTIFUL OS LIKE YOU
I THINK THESE ARE THE STEPS :
1: FIRST YOU HAVE THINK THE CONCEPT YU WANT TO WRITE
2:HOW MANY WORDS SHOULD BE THERE YOU HAVE DECIDED
3: THEN I DONT KNOW AFTER THIS
HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHHEHE


KEEP IT UP
AND SOORY FOR LATE COMMENT
BUT I AM DOING 3 YEARS COURSE IN ARENA ANIMATION AND 3 YEARS B.A. COURSE IN IGNOU SO I AM ALWAYS BUSY IN MY COMPUTER HOMEWORK OR IN STUDYING FOR MY EXAMS WHICH IS ON 8TH DECEMBER MY RE EXAM IS BECAUSE I HAVE PASSED IN 4 SUBJECTS BUT FAILED IN 5TH SUBJECT SO THATS WHY I HAVE TO GIVE REEXAM FOR THAT FAILED EXAM THERE SO I AM BUSY IN THAT ONLY FROM MANY DAYS THATS WHY I HAVE NOT CHECKED MY INBOX I HAVE TO READ 156 PMS I DONT KNOW WHAT WILL I DO


PLSSS KEEP WRITING THESE BEAUTIFUL AND AWSEOME AND RAPCHIK OS SS FF

Edited by arunsunita_gm - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Ana diii
Sorry for late comment I was in Arjuhi dreamland
Ohh my goodness!!!
Thank you so much for writing this OS
This one is amazing ❤️
This one straight to goes my favorite list
I can understand Aru's feelings... She needs Arjun's love and his time... These are not big things to expect from Arjun and thank god he realized it in time...
The way he whispered "Shona"
Hayeee 😳
And happy ending yayaya!
I am going to re-read it!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
And I want someone like Arjun in my life
This Arjun Is mine Ana di ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Actually I dont hv words for write ups ..they r tht beautiful
a perfect eg for people who think tht after marrige n kids life becomes boring its you whomake it boring ..try out new ways to make each other feel special...n dont avoid each oter bcoz of work n take out time for each other ..I love d last para including tht note ...everything ws perfect ..I love ther bengoli talks ..tht ws cute .. 😊
Edited by aurpatel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
very nice one-shot..👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
wat else can be better than this bday gift..!!!
amazing would be a short wrd for it...
it was so simple..so different..so genuine n so realistic os..
ye toh har married ladki ki kahani h..
it was so suljhi hui story..
Bengali Arohi..oye hoye !!
the startng scene was so descriptive..
a normal sunday morning..
Arohi's respose to Arjun's teasing was exactly like mine..he did chose the wrong time n wrong wrds to tease her..
jab mein kisi ki baat se gussa hoti hun toh mein bhi ek dum chup ho jati hun..no reply back..isliye mere frnds khush hot h jab mein unhe kuch bol deti hun..darne ki baat toh tab hoti h jab mein kuch bolti nhi hun..
aww...Arjun realised evrything soon..
he was missing her too..but he was not at fault too..its life..isn't it..?
apno ki khwahishon..unki khushiyon ko liye kabhi kabhi unse hi door jana padta h..
sab materialistic pleasures ke liye togetherness wali feeling ko sacrifice krna padta h..
wat a beautiful concept u highlighted in this story..!! *bows to u*
aww.. Arjun's failed attempt of taking her out along with him..he is so cute.. mera shona..:*
but sasuma jane anjane haddi bn gyi..hehehe
Tej is so cute n intelligent..
ek hi din ki shopping mein hawa nikal gyi.aur chala tha Arohi ko tease krne..hunh !! :p
aww..Arjun Arohi ke liye flowers laaya..how romantic..
dekha girls dont need expensive gifts all the time..choti choti baatein zyada efective hoti h
i could feel the romance in air..
haaye Arjun being naughty..
the ahem ahem part was beautifully written..all their want of being with each other..feel each other was reflected in each word..in each action..
but shit..they couldn't complete..Arjun fir wrong timing hehehhee
dekha meine bola tha romance is in air..Shefu n his mother too felt it.. :p
under the table wala romance is very cute n romantic..
ankhon hi ankhon mein ishare..haaye
arey re..Shefali ne hi baat bigad di..
kya yaar..!! sab kuch smhte hue bhi very bad..
aur ab ye Masi ke ghr bhi jana h..lo gi krlo baat pr shukr sadda munda hoshiyar h baat sambhal li..khud bhi ruk gya aur Arohi ko bhi rok liya..
ahaaan despo Arjun...ehhehe..he is damn cute..mujhe bhi aisa hubby chahiye...
itne khwaab sajaye lekin fir toot gye..
puri kaynaat inki dushman bn gyi..
he is so sweet father..he loves him immensely..
aa the cute romance outside on terrace..haayee..amazing..o intense...n so craving..
they are so understanding n lovely..
ek ke bolne se pehle doosra smjh jata h..shayad this is wat called a bond of husband wife..
aah finally some alone time..
kya jugaad lgaya Arjun ne..aah bhai maan gye chore ko :*
aperfect day out with the perfect man..aah this is so dreamy!!
mujhe bhi aise dat pe jana h.. :p
n finally a perfect ending to the day..it was so hot..
ahh..i love this dushto Arjun ! *sigh*

wat an amazing amazing os di..!!
m just in love with it..
read it so many times but want to read it again..
off to Arjuhi land :*
thnks for keeping Arjuhi alive in us :)

that hot scene on terrace n

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful di. The bengali taste was awesome.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
A simple story written in most intense & passionate way... ☺️
I was having a huge grin on my face all the while reading this is Os

All the minute details... They behaving like a newly married couple... Their love for their son... That mini outing ...everything was perfect!!
"shonaa.." Hayee...cutest part ❤️

Loved it so much!! Thank you for writing this ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yaar it was really an super...duper...amazing update😉👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
AWEEE that was so cute!!!! I love it when Arohi takes initiative :) Great OS! and congrats on hitting 25 OS's. I've read each and every one and I can say that they were all suuper amazing! Great Job once again!

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