~*OS Contest-3 -- Voting Round*~ CLOSED

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Hey Guys, Finally the OS's are here for you to read and vote. 😃
So, we have 4 entries and our theme was
"Honeymoon." 😳

Now let us go through the RULES quickly without wasting any time:
  • You have to vote for 2 entries maximum.
  • Each entry is numbered. Mention the number in order to vote.
  • 3 things you have to keep in mind while voting- the story, scenes, creativity..Since a lot of thought goes into it!
  • Thing that you shouldn't vote on the basis of-your friends' entry! I know most of you'll would recognize your favorite writers' works but VOTE for the OS's and not for your friends😉
  • Contestants can vote too, same Rules apply! You can vote for your own work too😉
  • Last date to vote - 5th July' 14.

And do comment about the OS. The writers love them. 😊

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1. U R My Honey M Ur Moon...lets Go For HoneyMoon

Arjun: Arohi London chalte hain honeymoon k liye..
Arohi: Arjun tum paagal ho gye ho...
Arjun: manali..
Arohi: Arjun...koi sun lega to kya sochega..
Arjun: yhi sochega ki kitna pyar h dono me..
Arohi: nhi ye sochega ki Arjun Singhania 60 ka hone se phle hi sathya gya..
Arjun: me toh 60 ka hone k baad bhi nhi sathyaunga..vo to sochega ki Arohi Arjun Singhania ko apne pati ki feelings ki bilkul kadr nhi h..
Arohi: oh hoo.. tumhe to bhut h na tumhri ptni ki feelings ki kadr..
Arjun: h tabhi to honeymoon plan kr rha hun..hmari shaadi k baad tumne hi to kha tha ki Arjun jo log honeymoon pr jaate hn vo kitne lucky hote h..
Arohi: Arjun vo 25 saal phle ki baat h..
Arjun: to kya hua agle hafte hmari 25th anniversary..silver jubliee pr to log vaise bhi shadi ka license renew krva lete h..hum to sirf honeymoon pr jaa rhe h..
Arohi: Arjunnn.. muh k dant girne ki umar me tum honeymoon plan kr rhe ho...sharam nhi aati..2 bacho k dada ar ek bchi ke nana ho tum..
Arjun: to ye kha likha h ki dada ya nana honeymoon pr nhi jaa skte..
Arohi: hmare chote bete jai ki 3 mhine baad shaadi h ar uske honeymooni ki planning ko chod kr tum khudke honeymoon ki planning kr rhe ho..
Arjun: to uski shadi 3 mhine baad h ar hmari to agle hafte hi h..
Arohi: Arjun..
Raj: hey dad to decide hua khn ja rhe h aap log..
Sia: yes dad jldi decide kr lijiye phr shopping bhi to krni h..
Arohi: tum dono ko pta h..
Jai n Archie: aur hume nhi..
Jai: infact mom Aria di rohan jiju Ria Palak aur Aayan ko bhi pta h..
Arohi: kya...
Arjun: haan..isme chpane wali konsi baat h..jab jayenge to vaise bhi sabko bta kr hi jayga ya tumhara bhaag kr jane ka irada tha.
Arohi: ARJUNNN..
Arjun: kya Arjun..bhai mene socha bchon ko zyada pta hoga ki konsi jgh best h..
Arohi: Arjun is umar me koi aisi baatein krta h kya..
Arjun: iss umar se tumhara matlab kya h..me abhi bhi jwaan hun..chahe meri dono bahuon se puch lo..btao Sia Archie apni mom ko..
Sia: yes das aap to aaj bhi Raj se zyada fit n handsome h..
Archie: bhabhi is rite..Dad aaj bhi bhut charming h
Arjun: suna..acha chlo Arohi ab jaldi bolo khn jana h..tabhi to bche tickets book krvayenge..
Arohi: me khin nhi jaa rhi..
Aria: aise kaise nhi jaa rhi aap..dad kya akele jaynge..
Arohi:Aria..
Aria: hum apse ye nhi puch rhe ki aap jayngi ya nhi hum puch rhe ki khn jaana h..
Rohan: Aria ek kaam krte h hum hi decide kr lete..Mom to btayngi nhi..
Jai: yes..Paris
Archie: nhi Switzerland
Sia: Goa
Raj: mountains..mom ko mountains bhut pasand h to..Manali
Aria: Kashmir..
evry1 : ya Kashmir..
Arjun: paagal ho kya pta h is mausam me kashmir me kitni barf padti h..hmare guthne jaam ho gye to
Arohi: hum khin nhi jaa rhe...
Aria: mom ye hmara gift h aap dono k liye ar aap na nhi kr skti..plz maan jaiye na..
evry1: pleez..
Aria: hum masum bchon ka dil rkhne k liye maan jaiye na..
Arohi looked at Jai: Masum..?
Aria: abey shaitaan kam se kam abhi to masum shkl bna le..
Jai: oh haan..mom plz..
Arjun: cmmon Arohi..maan jao na
Arohi: acha theek h..
Aria: yeahh chlo jldi decide krte h khn jana h...
Arjun: SHIMLA..he looked at Arohi...hum Shimla jayenge..
Rohan: okay me tickets krva deta hun..
Ria: naaani...aap mere liye vhn se gift layngi na..
Palak n Aayan: aur Daadi hmare liye bhi..
Arjun: zrur laynge kyu nhi laynge..
Sia:oh god Archie Aria di jldi chliye bhut si tyaria krni h..
evry1 left..
Arohi: Arjun tum bhi na..bche kya soch rhe honge..
Arjun: kch nhi sch rhe honge..abhi mujhe jana h ready hona h afterall mera first honeymoon h..he winked her..
Palak: haww.. chachu dadu ne dadi ko ankh maari..
Jai: Palak...eyes close..sry to disturb u vo bike ki key rh gyi thi..
Arjun: emm..haan vo ye lo..
At AIRPORT..
bye mom dad...pahunch kr call kr dena..
Arjun: so finally hum honeymoon ja rhe h..
Arohi: Arjun dheere bolo..
Arjun: Arohi jaaneman ab to chill karo..ab na yhn na tumhara beta h na bahu h na pota poti ya koi aur..
Arohi: thank u..
Arjun: 2 din baad hmari shaadi ko 25 saal pure ho rhe h to mujhe itne saal jhelne ki khushi me gift to bnta h h..
Arohi: haan vo bhi h..
Arjun: acha g Shimla pahunchne do dekhna vhn ki ladkian kaise mujh pr fida hoti h..
Arohi: budde ho gye ho..uncle uncle bolengi..
Arjun: me abhi jwaan hun..tum ho budhiya..abhi dimaag na khao mujhe sone do..
Arohi: budda..
In Shimla..
Arjun: hi m Arjun Singhani n ye meri wife Arohi Singhania..hmare naam se booking hogi..
Mnager smiled: yes sir..plz this way
Arjuhi opened the door to find a fully decorated room
Manager: sir ye apke bchon ki trf se chota sa surprise...apko pura tour planned h..aap jab strt krna chahe bta dijiyega..Enjoy ur visit Sir..
Arohi: bche bhi na..
Arjun: bilkul mujh par gye h..Smart n Intelligent..
Arohi: plz mere bchon ki burai mat kro tum par gye h shakl dekhi h apni..
Arjun: issi shakl pr to tum pichle 25 saalon se fida ho jaaneman
Arohi blushed..
Arjun kissed hr on cheek: chlo bhuk lagi h..
Arohi gasped: Arjun..
Arjun: oh..tumhe btaya tha na hum ladke jo bolte h hmara matlab bhi vhi hota h..schi bhuk lagi h..chalo neeche restaurant me kch khate h..
Arohi: to mera matlab bhi vhi..vhi tha
Arjun: haan haan chlo tumhre saare matlab pta h mujhe..
The next 2 days they visited various place..
In Kufri they hired horses to go till valley..
Arjun: bhai do ghode chahiye..
Arohi: Arjun paidal chlte h..Ghode ka kya bharosa ger diya to
Arjun: Arohi tumhe dar lag rha h..
Arohi: nhi..nhi to
Arjun gv hr a look
Arohi; thoda sa..itni barf h uska par slip kr gya to..
Arjun; arey budhiya nhi krta betho tum..
the man made both of them sit on their repective horses..
Arjun: bhai inka naam kya kya h..
bhai: jee jispe aap bethe h uska naam h heera ar jispe memshb bethi h uska naam Raju..
Arjun: dono bhai h kya..
bhai: nhi nhi..jija sala h..
Arohi: kya..
bhai: jee Raju heera ka jija h..vo aage vali ghodi uska naam racho h..heera ki behn ar Raju ki biwi h..
Arjun: vaah vaah aurto ko dekhlo..dusre k pati k bhi upr chadke beth jati h..
Arohi: ARJUN..
bhai:bas sahb ghoda yhin tak jayga..
Arjun: chlo theek h..
Arohi: Arjun dhyan se chlo gir jaoge..itni barf h
Arjun: me nhi girtaa budhiyaaa...ee n he slipped dwn
Arohi: kha tha na..ouch n she also slipped dwn
both stared each other n burst out laughing..
Arjun: phle me khda hota hun..ee ee n he agn slipped
Arohi held the side railing n stood up:me to chli budde ab khud khde hote rhna..
Arjun too stood up with the help of railing: e budhiya ruk..
Jai: bro bhabhi..Dad ne pic bheji h kufri se..
Sia: dikha dikha...aww...dekho kitne cute lag rhe h..
Raj: hmmm
Jai: me di ko send krta hun..
Sia: theek h..
They went to Ridge road..
Arjun: Arohi tumhe pta h ye yhn ka sabse wide area h..
Arohi: hmm..yhn pr vo famous Ridge Church h..
Arjun: hmm..
Arjun:yh coffeee bhut tasty milti h..
Arohi: tumhe kaise pta..
Arjun: vo me apni gf k sath aya tha..
Arohi: kya..
Arjun: arrey vo Dhillon ne btaya tha..vo to aata rhta h na yhn
Arohi: hmm
Arjun: ab chle budhiya..
Arohi: chalo..
they went to Church n prayed for their kid's happiness n for each other..
they went to the famous Hanuman temple of Shimla
Arohi: aa Arjun bander
Arjun: toh mil lo itne time baad apni behn se milkr use khushi hogi
Arohi: Shutt up..
Arjun: hath do apna..
Arohi: kyu..
Arjun: do to shi..
Arohi rested hr hand in his hand..he put some bundi in her hand n forwarded twrds the monkey..
Arohi: Arjun kya kr rhe ho..
Arjun: shhh.. the monkey came n calmly startd eating frm her hand..
Arjun: kch keh rha h tumhe..yhn bander kisi ko kch nhi khte..
Arohi nodded n looked at monkey who was enjoying his meal..
They went to Mall Road for shopping..They did alot of shopping for kids there..
Arjun: ye govt ka kya chla jayga agr yhn pr vehicle chlne degi to..
Arohi: Arjun choti si Road h agr yhn pr vehicle chlenge to log khn chlenge..
Arjun: haan ruko yhn bethte hn..me thak gya
Arohi: kha tha na meine budde ho gye ho
Arjun: chup kro tum..
Arohi showed him tongue n sat beside him..
Arohi: Arjun..dekho vo vhn fruit cut krke de rhe..
Arjun: ruku me lata hun...
they ate frm one plate..n thn moved ahead..
They both were sitting on a bench near the clock tower at Mall Road eating ice cream...
Arohi: Zindagi k ye 25 saal kab guzr gye pta hi nhi chla
Arjun: Business aur bachon me hi life uljhi rh gyi..khudke spne pure krna ka time hi nhi mila..
Arohi: par hmare bchon ne dekho hmare har sapne ko pura krne ki puri koshish ki..
Arjun: madam todha credit apne is bechare pati ko bhi de do..
Arohi: tum to meri puri zindagi ho Arjun..tumhe kya credit doon..
Arjun stared at Arohi for a while: I Love U Arohi..thnks for giving me uch a wonderfull life.
Arohi: I Love U too..ye Zindagi humne ek sath bnayi h Arjun..
as the clock struck 12..
Arjun: Happy 25TH Anniversary Budhiya..he kissed on her cheek n took a small red box from his pocket..there wer gold kangans in it..
Arohi: aww Happy 25TH Anniversary ot u too..Buddhe..he kissed him on his cheek n forwrde her bth hands..
Arjun's phone rang..it was Raj calling
Evry1: Happy Anniversary MOM DAD...
Arjuhi: thank U...
they disconnected the call..
Arjun: so Mrs. Arohi Arjun Singhania ready to spend nxt 25 years with this buddha..
Arohi: yes Mr. Arjun Sibghania..par mere hubby ko buddha sirf me kh skti hun koi ar nhi..u knw m so possesive..
Arjun smiled..
they both were sitting on airport waiting for their flight bk to Chandigarh
Arohi: Arjun kya kar rhe ho..
Arjun: Maklodganj ke baare me dekh rha hun..
Arohi: kyu..?
Arjun: hmre nxt honeymoon k liye..
Arohi: Arjun stop it..
Arjun: kyu Arohi tumhe yhn mazaa nhi aaya hmare honeymoon par..
Arohi: Arjun tum kitne besharam hote jaa rhe ho..
Arjun: tumhe to me besharam hi pasand hun na..
Arohi: lekin sirf mere liye..
Arjun: sirf tumhare liye..
Arohi rested her head on his shoulder..
Arjun: vaise Nanital bhi acha h..
Arohi: Arjun..
Edited by -MohabbatMahal- - 11 years ago
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DISQUALIFIED DUE TO PLAGARISM

Edited by -MohabbatMahal- - 11 years ago
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3. Tum Hi Ho

Sitting on a beach she was starring the beautiful view front of her, she was on her honeymoon but has to roam the awesome place alone as her husband is busy in work here, she was watching couples walking front of her holding hands lovingly, a tear rolled down on her cheeks by the thought of being alone here on her honeymoon, she is regretting her every moment with a person who never loved her back. They got married one month ago; She has so many dreams which shattered in pieces when he declared that he married to her just because his parents wanted this. She tried a lot but didn't able to broke the wall he made around him. Arohi was very happy when she came to know Arjun Singhania is her would be husband, she had a crush on him since she saw him first time in her college, he was a guest speaker and as being a youngest successful entrepreneur they called him to motivate the student of college. He was looking dam hot in a black suit and dark blue shirt underneath. Every girl present there drooling on him but Arohi was more impressed by his words. A young man but a motivational words like a much experienced person.

Arohi's happiness has no limits when her parents told her about him. She started dreaming all the time. He was her first crush. Every moment of her life she dedicated to him.

They met two times before marriage but Arohi wasn't in a state of mind to comprehend his disinterest. She was lost in her own happy world. Now again her heart broke when she come to know why his husband chosen this place for honeymoon because he has some business related work here. He was postponing the date of honeymoon and finally when arohi was happy after coming to her honeymoon this truth revealed front of her.

Today they completed one month of togetherness which she wanted to celebrate with a romantic date but her workaholic husband have other priorities which are important more than any date. Work always comes first for him.

she walked away from beach as those romantic couple were like salt in a wound, Arohi was lost in her own world of miserable thoughts, blocked away from the entire world of outside, just she and her bedardi heartless sanam., She was walking on road without noticing the vehicles around. Suddenly a fast car arrived towards her.

Arjun was busy in meeting, he has 6 continue meetings since morning when he finished them switched on his mobile and found 15 missed calls from Arohi. He called her back but her phone was switched off, he doesn't know that her phone was crashed. He tried many times but every time same response. He was worried now, he quickly rushed to his hotel room but Arohi was not there too.

His tension started increasing; he called on her mobile again but still the same response. He asked to hotel staff if they have seen her anywhere but got disappointed to hear their answer in no. God Arohi where r u? This is a new city. Its not our shimla ab kahan dhundu tumhe? He took out his phone and asking to people by showing Arohi's pic if they have seen her around, his forehead started sweating, he was so worried for her because first time she came Malaysia and also not acquainted with anybody here. Where can she go?

He gathered some strength and started searching for her again, luckily one taxi driver recognized her. Yes I have seen this girl, she got accident.

Accident? Where is she? Vo..vo thik toh hai na?

I m sorry I don't know much, some local people took her to the near hospital.

Thank you so much. Without wasting a second he rushed to the hospital, he was panting because of running all the way; he asked to the receptionist restlessly, where is my wife?

What?

I mean Mrs Arohi Singhania. Where is she? Is she OK?

Sir she is in ward no. 28

Thanks, he ran towards her room and took a sigh of relief to see her. He walked to her where Doctors examining her.

How's she doctor?

oh don't worry she is fine, I think she fainted because of dehydration, u should take care of her, after giving him prescribed medicine slip doctor left.

Arjun looked at her but she turned her face with a pout.

He sat near her and placed his hand on hers she quickly pulled it back and kept above her stomach, he again reached for her hand and this time held tight.

what the hell do u think u were doing? Kya zarurat thi aise bina bataye jane ki? Do u have any idea how worried I was.

Oh u were worried? For me? Really Mr singhania.

Arohi plz stop behaving like a child. Answer me what I am asking, He shouted.

Why arjun? why u came here? don't waste your precious time on me plz go. She turned her face again.

He took a deep breath and called her name.

She was angry on him and he knows it's not that easy to make her understand his situation.

He cupped her face, Arohi I know I missed your calls but I was busy, u should understand na, aise bina kuchh kahe akele nikal aayi? Thank god u r fine but agar tumhe kuchh ho jata toh?

Aap busy hote kab nahi hain Arjun? Aur agar mujhe kuchh ho bhi jata toh kya? Kya fark pad jata aapko? Plz stop showing this fake care. I know I m nothing for u just a forced wife. U doesn't even love me. Arohi's eyes were glossy but she controlled her tears to not let them come out. Arjun was silent, her painful eyes accusing him for being the reason.

He said to her that he doesn't love her but his heart was unaware what the real feeling he has for Arohi. If he really doesn't love her then why he was so restless and worried when Arohi was missing. Every minute passed like a year to him.

Arohi took his silence as a proof that whatever she is thinking is true. She is just an unwanted burden to him. So finally being tough she made a decision. She want divorce. This will be good for both of them according to her.

She decided to talk to him when they will go back to the hotel.

Both were silent, not talking with each other and lost in their own thoughts, Arohi was thinking how their family will react on this. The decision is very tough for her but she want to see him happy and if he want freedom from this unwanted relationship then she is ready to do it.

Arjun knows he is on fault, so thinking, how to fix it up, he got an idea and started working on it. He was preparing a surprise for her; he is going to disclose his feeling. He feels for her but sometimes some people needs a hit for realization and this incident proved the hit to him.

At the evening Arjun prepared the room with colored candles, rose petals and heart shaped balloons. He wanted to give her a surprise but he has no idea what surprise her wife planned for him, which would definitely not be pleasant.

Arjun was happily waiting for his wify. He can't forget the time when he was feeling the guilt of losing her. When she was missing, many bad thoughts growing on his mind. He was praying every moment for her safety and now can't risk her life anymore, he can't let her cry and because of him definitely never.

Arohi entered in and found the pleasant heartwarming fragrance. So romantic and peaceful atmosphere. He was waiting for her with his back on her side. She was confused to see all this, her mind was so distracted due to the divorce decision so that she couldn't think for anything else.

She took a deep breath and walked ahead, Arjun smilingly turned to her and was about to say something but she stopped him. Plz Arjun let me say first this is not easy for me but I have to do it, I think this will be good for both of us.

Arohi what are u talking about?

Arjun I know this marriage was compromise for u and u don't feel anything for me so it will be better if...

If what?

I think we should break this relation. Waise bhi iss rishte mein hai hi kya?

Shut up just shut up. He shouted.

Arohi was staring him with wide scared eyes.

Bohot bol chuki Tum ab meri baat suno. I admit I was not happy with this marriage but time can't be same always. Gradually I started feeling for u and I understood this when I felt the fear of losing u. It was like... like... someone snatched my breath. I.. I... don't know but I was feeling as something important gone away from me.

Arohi was shocked she can't believe what she was hearing; this was like a sweet dream for her.

She blinked her eyes with slightly parted lips. She asked to make sure, What did u just say?

Didn't u understand me? OK then, action speaks louder than words. He instantly pulled her to him and pressed his lips on hers. She was shocked and froze at the place. As if her brain stopped working. His lips were warm and soft against hers. He slightly forced her to open her lips which she did and the kiss turned passionate. Their head moved in sync. She circled her arms around his neck while his hand was on the back of her neck.

He released her after few moments of love, she opened her eyes slowly. Both had a storm of love and desire in their eyes. I love u Arohi, he said cupping her face. She smiled through tears as if this was a happiest thing for her.

I love u too Arjun. I love u very much.

He held her hand and kissed them, I m so sorry Arohi, I know I always hurt you but my work is everything to me, I was a kid when my family faced many financial crises even I lost my brother due to lack of proper treatment, from that day I decided I will earn so much money, so that I will not have to lose any other important person of my life, I understood very soon that how much money is important in this world, people respects u because of this, when we were poor nobody came ahead to help us but now when we have everything everyone wants to make good relation with us, I know whatever happened to me, was a past and u are nothing to do with it, but still, somewhere I punished u, I don't want anyone to come between me and my success. But I was wrong, I was completely wrong, u r not separate, we are one...plz forgive me Arohi, give me one more chance.

She covered his mouth by keeping hand and said, no Arjun I m sorry, I should have understand u and your dreams; I was behaving like an immature girl. Both have moisture in eyes.

He kissed her forehead and asked?

Do u still want divorce? He asked pinching her nose.

She shook her head, no.. I just want u. she wrapped her arms around his torso and rested head on his chest.

Btw I arranged this for u how do u like it?

It's beautiful.

I m sorry wify business ki vajah se tumhare liye waqt hi nhi nikal paya but I promise from now in this whole honeymoon week I m only on my beautiful wify's duty.

She laughed and patted his shoulder, good boy.

Both hugged each other tightly, like there is no tomorrow and started their marriage life in a real manner.

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4. Kya Pyar kroge Mujhse?


The talent of Chandigarh best wedding planner was reflecting in perfect choice of flowers & candles.Each ceremony of his weding took place Perfectly...After all he was Arjun Singhania;Perfect.This perfection was cause of his successful,independent buisness in just age of 27.
Locking the door behind he walked inside,confused to find an empty bed.

His eyes moved in direction of bangles noise & he finally found her-Newly Mrs.Arohi Arjun Singhania standing near da window.

He could feel that "wedding night spell" of which he heared from his married friends.Ofcourse it was a spell...she was looking the most beautiful girl on earth.Even dressed in red heavy lehnga she was looking simpe,pure like some fresh water.Her long hairs were falling in her back.She had removed every jewellery,only red bangles remaining in her soft wrists.The desire to watch her for whole night ran in his veins..a desire so strong.Uncomfortable in his continuous stare she looked away,making magical music in pushing hair strands behind her ear.Finally her mouth opened & her musical voice melt in his ear.
"mein aap ko nhi janti" Well 'shock' was not da enough word to express his state,After all those were da last words anyone could expect from his bride lovely lips.Arjun finally came back to senses:mujhe nhi janti?men Arjun. .
Finally understanding meaning of her deep eyes he added:oh! yes ye arrange marriage hen. par hum char panch bar milley hen.
Arohi raised her heena filled hand & showed him four fingers:shadi k functions ko mila kr char baar.
Confused on her odd interrogation he reminded her:meri mom tumhari mom ki bestfriend thi.
Arohi softly:par hum to nhi hai naa.
Arjun was about to argue when she added:You dont even know my favourite colour.

"favourite colour?" The dashing Arjun Singhania-MBA,successful buisness man found himself speechless on his wife Difficult question.He stared at her deeply with blank mind.His eyes noticed da peeping girly innocence in her womanly charm.Her chin was raised in pride but da nervous trembling of her juicy lips was now visible to him.
His lips stretched in heart stoleing smile:koi baat nhi,time k sath aahista aahista jaan jaeynge.
While talking he took steps to her while she moved back & finally fall on bed in sitting posture.To his relief she nodded in yes & than picked one pillow & extended it in his direction.He watched it with wide shocking eyes as she announced:ok..to tb tk k lye Good Night.

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His eyes were glued to laptop screen,His ears too directed toward laptop speaker but instead of news the sound of runing shower in attached washroom was stoleing his all senses.The way water was taking time in reaching to floor. .3 seconds from her long hairs,4 seconds from her beautiful face to long neck,5 seconds from her silky valley to her creamy stomach..to.He got up shutting his laptop & his wild running imaginations"yahan aese beth kr to aese hi khyal aaeynge,is 'honeymoon' word men hi problem hai"
Losing top buttons of his shirt he walked to grand window.Surprisingly feeling hot in cold night of Shimla.The view of landscape was enchanting,da most beautiful sight of world-Naah not world.His decision changed immediately as her smiling face came in his mind.
He turned,his eyes roamed around da hotel room.Its interior was looking adorable in golden lights.Stylish furniture,comfortable king size bed.His eyes fall on scatterd jewerly on nearby dresser.His eyes cressed them softly.Earings,rings,chain. .Who knew jewelery can be seductive.He picked one of da red bangle,his thumb creased it lazily.Lost in memory of night when it became da most beautiful ornament to him.



Hearing the sound of unlocking of washroom door he immediately kept it back but couldnt able to turned away as she came in sight.Her simple cotton suit was hugging her wet figure.Her skin was glowing like fresh rose in spring.But the most prominent feature of her beauty was her shiny dove eyes,deep inviting ocean.
Their eyes met for more dn a minute,sending gose bumps all over her.

Arjun:Purple?
Arohi looked him in confusion & than looked purple towel wrapped around her hairs.90th guess of her favourite colour in this one month! Colour of her cheeks became more rosy & her eyes twinkled.Pressing smile between her lips she walked to dresser.In disappointment he mumbled:purple bhi nhi!
Drying her hairs she put da towel down.Lost in her own world she applied lotion on her face & neck.He forced himself to look away,feeling enchanted by her each movement.


A sudden knock at door broke their eye lock.He went to open the door.She couldnt able to hear da exact convo of him & bell boy.When Arjun was about to step out of room she called from behind:kahan ja rhe ho?
Aah now forgetting the brush & lotion her all attention was directed to him.He looked her with those teasing,revengeful eyes:aata hun.
With that he left closing the door behind him.

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She threw away her hair brush & sat on bed with a frown"do ghante se gayb ho... aesa hota hai honeymoon?"Her happiness had no limit when Arjun declared their honeymoon trip,finally after one month of their marriage.No new buisness stress,no long meetings,no family mess only she & her Arjun-All Arjun,Full Arjun,Complete Arjun...what a delicious treat.But now sitting alone fot hours her heart was sanking.Chain of her thoughts broke hearing knock at door.On opening she received a note.She closed da door & on reading it she didnt took a moment to recognize Arjun's hand writing"At 8,in suit no.6 by pool side."
Her eyes wided in joy,He was busy in arranging surprise for her?Her eyes couldnt able to hold tears of joy anymore"pehle se bta dete to men time se tyar bhi ho jati aur apna khun bhi naa jlati...kitne ajeeb ho tum" Hugging the note to her bosoms she lay back in bed"Kitne ajeeb ho tum aur Kitni ajeeb hun men jo mujhe tumse Pyar hua"

One month before she couldnt even imagine that she will ever able to feel those words.What would you expect from "mom's promise based marriage"? ...A marriage without love?And what kind of "love knowledege" u can expect from a man who spent his life in hostels because of his parents divorce.

Yes Arjun Singhania was exactly what she was afraid of.Her Handsome enchanter was calculated,practical,smart,mature.
No flowers,No poetry,No dancing in rain but.. her lips stretched in smile while playing wid her mangalsutr"publish se pehle hi favourite author ki book ki special copy la dena,raat ko 3 bje bhi ek cheenkh pr doctor ko le aana,pocket men colour palette rkhna...btao aese pyar se pyar kese na hota"

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Arohi surprise had no limit when bell boy guided her inside a well decorated room.The moonlight spread on da pool was peeping through big glass wall,making everything beautiful.Her heart skipped millions beat as her eyes finally settled on him,looking incredibly handsome in his white suit.Welcoming her wid his charming smile he extended chair for her.She sat down,her eyes wided & fingers curled on such Arjun confused on her odd expessions asked:kya hua tumhe acha nhi lga?
Arohi found herself lost of words:nhi..i mean buht acha hai.par aese achank..
She paused while he added:Arohi,studies k forn baad hi new buisness,shadi.buisns k start ka month tha 100% dena zruri tha.otherwise men hr time tumhare sath spent krna chahta tha.
When she lifted up her eyelashes he cleared his throat:aur ye sb achank kahan?aaj hmari shadi ko pura ek month hogya hai.
Arohi eyes shined in surprise:tumhe yaad tha?
Arjun teased:well ye koi bhoolne ki bat hai? par..jis trhan tumne jaagte hi calender dekha to yaad aa hi gya tha.
Arohi joy spread to her rosy cheeks on knowing even her silly acts were object of his attention.After finishing his wine he got up & extended his hand to her for dance :aur celebration to bnti hai..kyunke men tumhe itna to jan chuka hun.
She instantly slipped her hand in his,her eyes were fogged in emotions:kya?
They followed da soft beats of music.He added:chahe IT ki student reh chuki hun..impress phool aur cake se hi hoti hein.

She brust into heartly laugh.It faded hearing his whisper:you are beautiful Arohi.

No poetry,No playing,Just his simple & direct words were able to made her heart flutter like a butterfly.
Arohi:hum kitne hfte k lye rukeynge yahan?
Arjun raised his eyebrow:hafte?
Arohi innocently asked:hafte nhi?
He felt worst when shining in her eyes replaced by sadness.He immediately changed meaning of her words:ab sara Shimla ghumne men to ek month bhi to lg skta hai?..agr tumhe problem naa ho.
She shook her head,her joy was visible in her stretched lips.
"Pink?" Arohi looked him in confusion & dn her hand immedietly raised to her unmatched little bindi.
Arohi teased:mujhe nhi pta tha,London ki university men.MBA men colours pdhate hein?
He twirled her in his arms:well pdhate to nhi,pr mukhe aesi buht sari cheeze aati hein jo books men nhi hoti.i can teach u.

She moved away from him & went to stood near da glass wall.Her heart was beating fiercely in hapiness.This fairytale date was like a dream come true.He too joined her,offering a jewellery box to her.She opened it & was stunned by gold necklace & earings beauty:its beautiful.
He took out it from box & slipped it around her neck:ye first anneversary ka gift.
His fingers softly played with her earlobe while dropping da earing in it:ye mere lye buht zyada special hai.ye meri mom ka hai,unka buht favourite hota tha islye life men kitni hi zrurt pado mene isko smbhal kr rkha.buht special hai ye meri lye..islye tumhare lye hai.
She touched her necklace looking into his eyes.Eyes which had finally answers of her all questions.When his face leaned closer her lips parted on their own.She felt some kind of drug running in her veins when his lips claimed her.The sensation of his touch spread from her head to toe.

Wrapping arms around him she pressed her head in warmth of his chest:I love you Arjun.I love u so much.
She lifted up her head & slipped her hands away founding him froze like ice.Realization hit her like a storm...their relation was just a duty,a promise.She was just a symbol of his love toward his mom.With tears filled eyes she left from there.

Stepping out of hotel gate she sat on empty bench"pehle se janti thi tum mujhse pyar nhi krte..phir aaj itni tkleef kyun ho rhi hai.buht dard ho rha hai."She heared approaching footsteps in her own sobs.Looking up she found two drunks men wid a gun,pointing toward her jewellery.Pushing the one she ran fast as possible,determine to keep his mom precious Nishani safe.She tripped becaue of her sari & fall down on road.Before she got up a man kept gun on her head.

But it next moment da gun had flew away & she was securely caged in warmth of his strong arms.Arju threatened them:hath mt lgana..kya chahte ho?
Pointing knife toward them they asked for her jewellery.Arjun:jewellery utaro Arohi
Guilt was written all over her beautiful face.She shook her head in no.Arjun took out all her ornaments,his watch , cell & gave it to them.The man quickly gt busy in victory of their success.Grabbing her wrist he almost ran toward the hotel.He left her wrist when they were finally safe in their locked room.Arohi whose breath was still disturb because of crying opened her shivering lips:guarda ko complain ki hai..jewellry wapis zrur mil jaeygi.
When he remain stood facing away from her she added:i am so sorry Arjun..mujhse galti hogai mene buht koshish ki thi pr men nhi bcha ski.mujhe pta hai tumhe buht tkleef ho rhi hai..
He turned & barked:haan buh tkleef ho rhi hai.buht tkleef ye soch kr k agr mujhe deyer hojati,tumhe kuch ho jata..
When she looked him wid wide eyes he snapped:haan men apni mom se buht pyar krta hun.dad to mujhe yaad bhi nhi.wahi mere lye sb kuch thi.haan mene tumse shadi bhi islye ki kyunke wo aesa chahti thi.
After a pause he added:haan mene tumse engagement k baad bhi koi personaly contact nhi kya..kuch bhi aesa nhi kya jo log krte hein.Love ka happily ever after to sirf fairy tales men hota hai.asal life men to mohabbat sirf tkleef deti hai..jese meri mom ko di.
Arohi watched him wide eyes as da hard stone mask of was removed from his emotional,sensitive soul:log kehte hein cancer ne mom ki jaan li pr men janta hun dad ki bewafai ne unki jaan li.hmesha se socha tha kbhi mohabbat nhi krunga.Mohabbat bewakoof logo ka kaam hai,hmesha nuksan krati hai,pagal bnati hai..jese men pagal bn gya hun.jewellery?aaj mujhe khud se bhi zyada tumhari jaan pyari thi.agr tumhe ek khronch bhi aa jati to pta nhi men khud ko,is dunya ko kya krdeta.men tumhare sath rehna chahta hun Arohi,mujhe ab apna mkaan ghar lgne lga hai.men tumhe hr khushi dena chahta hun,tumhare aansu mujhse brdasht nhi hote.Naa chahte hue bhi tumhe chahne lga hun.. I love you.apne dar ki vja se mene tumhe buht hurt kya hai I am realy realy sorry.

Arohi threw arms around his neck & he too cages her in his arms.

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She moaned as he showered kisses on her shoulder.She grabbed his wandering hand & lay on her back facing him.She protested breathlessly:hum late ho jaeynge.
His mouth captured her silenceing her further words.Skills of his tounge & his muscular body against her delicate limbs sucking away each ounce of senses.His lips traveled from her chin to neck,making her giggle wid his stuble cheek.Creasing his naked back she protested:aese to hum phir late hojaeynge...itna kuch dikhna hai abhi Shimla ka.
Sucking her earlobe he whispered:youtube pr dikha dunga.
Arohi:ye cheating hai..tumne mujhse promise kya tha.ab bdal rhe ho,iska mtlb hai tum mujhse pyar hi nhi krte.
Arjun raised his head from valley of her bosoms.She stared him wid fake innocence as he glared at her.Than to her surprise he moved away & rested his head on his elbow:i think u r right,pyar nhi hoskta.
When Arohi glared at him he added:mujhe to abhi tk tumhara favourite colour nhi pta..favourite colour,janna,remember?
She smiled,lazily traced da love bite on his chest:mera favourite colour?
He couldnt able to hide his interest:haan..kya hai tumhara favourite colour?

She too lifted up on her elbow & looking in his eyes,whispered:Brown..jb se tumhari aankhon men dekha.
Her laugh echoed around seeing his stunned face which he silenced in his own way.
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Oh my God, the OS's are put up finally
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wow os has uploaded

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wow.. finally!!😃
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