A KARANIKA SS:'Had It Been So!'' continued part 3 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Rimpi_kmh

wow mansi awesome update...👏

kritika n karan's pain😭

.''im sorry...im not worth you...you should get someone better...i will never hurt you again''

''he came closer and closer until their lips touched and broke into a kiss...''😳

mansi plzz jayda rulna mat huma😔

thank you😳...i know it was sad😭
i had to make it sad though kyunki main emotions dhikana chati thi and this was the only way i could do it😉 but i tried making it leveled with the kiss😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
OMG Mansi, OMG!
If only this would happen! 😒
Lovely update!
But make it longer next time! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Safina.

OMG Mansi, OMG!

If only this would happen! 😒
Lovely update!
But make it longer next time! 😆

thank you safu🤗
cant resist but wanting more😆
i know i tried remembering what i put before but i couldnt😔
dont worry next one will be longer😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
precap:

karan:''tum challi gayi thi iss rishte ko bhool ke aur main reh gaya wahi''
kritika: ''tumne roka nahi iss liye yeh pyaar ho paya nahi''
karan: ''can we still become friends?''
kritika: ''maybe not!''

the burning rage of fire between them
the barrier that stops them
will it break or become deeper?

Edited by mansi1424 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mansiii...omg...!!!!! i cant believe u actually continued my ss.. and dat too so amazingly well.. u know, its not like i cudnt finish writing this ss, but writing any further about karanika would have just made me sad..the memories i have of them are so beautiful and the way they both have been behaving these days is so weirdly annoying, that i just cudn't find the courage to pen down words lest i'd cry..!!! thankuuu so much for continuing this..luvvv u girl..:)) i felt so bad that i cudnt continue this especially coz of madhu..she always had a word of encouragement and appreciation for dis ss..madhuuu..see, finally ye ss continue ho hi gaya..all thanx to mansi..yayyy..much luvvv... continue writing dis..now, i am looking forward to reading this..mwahhh..<3 <3 :)) :**
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hetikkaaa thank you thank you so much...i missed u alot mostly because of your writing...i was gonna tell you that i continued it but i thought u would be mad...i know i cant write as good as you but i did it for everyone wanting more from it...i thought maybe you would
Never come back and you really made my day...your a good inspiration :)))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG tis s outstanding thank u so much for continuing it🤗
i too missed hetu's ss but its k i cud feel her pain n m so glad u r creating da magic again😳
all three updates wer so damn good especially da last one😳
ter spoken and unspoken emotions at da iftar party was so nice👏
one doubt😳karan: ouch!..bas kar...heres your chicken waise bhi sakth😕 tha@red wat is tat mean😳see am nt tat good in hindi sorry fa da trouble😆
tat kissing part
precap:just friends😛
plz giv da next update soon waiting fa it eagerly😃
love u🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...deepz...

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">OMG tis s outstanding thank u so much for continuing it🤗
i too missed hetu's ss but its k i cud feel her pain n m so glad u r creating da magic again😳
all three updates wer so damn good especially da last one😳
ter spoken and unspoken emotions at da iftar party was so nice👏
one doubt😳karan: ouch!..bas kar...heres your chicken waise bhi <font color="#CC0000">sakth😕</font> tha@red wat is tat mean😳see am nt tat good in hindi sorry f
a da trouble😆
tat kissing part
precap:just friends😛
plz giv da next update soon waiting fa it eagerly😃
love u🤗</font>


Sakth means hard and the other meaning is strict so he was saying the chicken is hard and she is strict.
Don't worry i was slow in hindi too it took me a while to learn it because first my family is Gujarati and second i live in the u.s...
you will learn soon 😉
And thank you your comments inspire me to write more...better and better
Love you too 😳
Edited by mansi1424 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Hmm tho madam ne comment kiya...yeh comment hai ?...thumps up ki queen
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansi1424


Hmm tho madam ne comment kiya...yeh comment hai ?...thumps up ki queen

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