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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi :-) welcm to d forum.. N do updt soon
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Hey Dear

I loved your Intro ...really intriguing 😊 please continue soon.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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welcome to the forum
bring it on
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG ! I can't believe , i've got so many comments =) Sorry i m being lazy haha , i am in SPECIAL DAYS (They hurt) and i am very much in pain . Bas i'll start writing . Per confuse hu agr jaise plan kia waisa na hua toh 😕

Anyways here you go with promo (Its sucks) #readatyouronrisk😆

'I hear someone breathing hard, she must be here itself'. 'You go in that direction and I'll go in this one'. She controlled her breath's as tears made their way out of her eyes. She looked here and there, trying to search for some help but the fear made her freeze. Her heartbeat racing fast . She bend down to hide properly in the bushes .

She shrieked hard when someone grabbed her arm and harshly pushed her and pinned her to the wall. 'Where would you go huh ? Didn't I told you that you can never defeat me. Never! Do you get it?'. Arohi cringed at his disgusting touch.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow nice promo yaar. Really its interesting n stop judging urself.
Sabne mujhse bhi yahi kaha tha to meine aapko kah dia.
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nice promo...😊
stop being lazy !!!!!😡
waiting for the updt!!!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome promo cannot wait to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 1 - The Murder

'I hear someone breathing hard, she must be here itself'. 'You go in that direction and I'll go in this one'. She controlled her breath's as tears made their way out of her eyes. She looked here and there, trying to search for some help but the fear made her freeze. Her heartbeat racing fast . She bend downto hide properly in the bushes .

She shrieked hard when someone grabbed her arm and harshly pul her and pined her to wall. 'Where would you go huh ? Didn't I told you that you can never defeat me. Never! Do you get it?'. Arohi cringed at his disgusting touch. His breath falling on her face which made her feel disgusted to a high level.

She tried her best to push him but she couldn't , he was more dangerous and powerful then her . She loosed all her hopes at once , fearing what would happen if she gave up now . How her life which is already a mess , will be even more. She closed her eyes , not in fear , but to be dejected with her ownself , for not being too strong to defend herself . Tears continued to roll as the man cupped her cheek hard .

'You are going to get a punishment for what youand your so called friends did to me and my brother.

He neared her dangerously , with blood shot red eyes. Arohi took in big gaps of air, her mind wandered around her friends , the innocent one's who are in a problem only because of her . waiting for her that she would rescue her one day , the only hope left in them was Arohi's arrival . NO ! Never! She will not give up , she will live atleast for her friends . Managing all her strength she hardly kicked the man on his Main point .

He was taken aback , releasing Arohi , his face color changed and he felt harsh pain . Arohi smirked, the man bend down , his eyes wide , Arohi kicked his head hard which caused him to stumble upwards and she kicked him hard on his chest . Yah she was the one now to rule on ! Bang On ! Girls Power!. With a final kick on his leg . He fell down not being able to stand as Arohi hit him on such places that the pain will take a while to subside. She tepped on his one hand . He scrunched his eye's and Arohi took his gun's and his mobile and anyother thing handy . When she was pulled again by his other partner . Damn ! She hit him with her elbow on his stomach and immediately turned around , moving backwards when finally with no other option she took out the gun and pressed the trigger and shot him on the legs . It was hard for her as she always hated blood and killing . She hated violence and never such killed even animals and felt pity for the one, who gets shot or killed and cursed the one to do that but now she was in the place . Her hands shivered . She loosed herself and ran away as fast as she could and finally near a beach she dropped her self on the cold sand and cried her heart out . She was better enough in her home . She cried and cried for several hours with sudden situation's that she faced , She thanked god for her sudden strength and vowed to make HIM owe for what he did to her and her friends . Gathering her up she with heavy heart started to walk aimlessly , she cant go to her house as she knew they would definitely be hiding there . The night was getting cold. Hungry thirsty and tired and cold she finally fainted into the cold chilly whether .

Arohi found her self in a dark place , big looping trees which seems too scary . Cold taking a toll on her , her skin frozen. Her steps heavy . She continued to walk and walk , too scared .

Weird noises surrounded her. The dark night seemed to deep and long .

She felt as if in fear she would die .

As bats flew up on her she shriked hard and ran and ran when she saw a big scary mansion .

Old rusted grey paint . it look like a castle .

The gates so edgy and pointy with what ? Blood on them !

Arohi's face changed to white as she noticed a dark looming shadow walking towards her , limping away.

His eyes red , his frame large .

Arohi in fear moved backwards when she fell into the water , she started to sink away , she opened her mouth to shout but the irking green water rushed into her throats she with heavy steps ran toward the sand when the shadow jumped into the water , which caused the water drops to drench her already wet face.

He neared her . ' You killed me Arohi , I loved you now its my turn' .

Arohi stood rooted to the spot when the shadow jumped on her .

Arohi shouted to wake to a luxurious house.

It was a dream? It was? Sweat beed making their way on her face as she suddenly felt too hot . She breathed hard , pushing her hair back she closed her eyes.

When she felt a pair of hands on her shoulder . She shriked and turn around to slap the the person , but the person held her arm in his strong secure hand. 'Who the hell are you ?' asked Arohi mistaking him to be one of the men to harm her . 'Hey ! Chill ! I am pratiek'. Arohi narrowed her eyes at the ever so smiling guy , it was hard for her to not to doubt that men , since all those came along were bunch of moron's. 'Who pratiek?'. Arohi asked in stern voice mainting as rude style as possible and not to forget - the distance. 'Oh hell ! you forgot , remember the charity function for the kids , in which you participated.' Arohi stared him keenly still not trusting him - his face was known . 'Ermm ! It was my mother's wish to hold a charity function for the kids of XXX orphanage which my dad accomplish happily' .

Oh he is the son of that kind man and woman those who were so happy to donate as much as amount of money to the kids . Some where she loosen a bit , sensing no danger . 'We met there! Miss Arohi remember ?'. Arohi looked keenly to his face again . His face glowing , with those big brown eyes , his eyelashes sinfully long , thin nose , broad cheeks with fine jaw and rough violet lips. He was handsome and looked a decent man too.

Arohi remembered that night when she was into the charity function , oh she loved to help those kids as she knew what was not to get the love of families . Being a fine MBA she eraned enough salary to use and enough saving to donate a bit . That night when she was happy , her life seemed to be very happy , finally breaking all her ties she and her friends who shared the same complicated life of ebing tanunted not being loved from family - couldn't take ran at a very young age . Reaching the success together all three were now cool int there settled happily careers - five years to when they ran.

She happily clapped as the host announced that they have earned enough amount to go with the kids of orphanage , she smiled happily for the kids . She felt so connected to their hearts. Parents they are such a treasure but some parents lost in themselves take their kids for granted . Not all parents but the rare truth is that - there are some .

Soon the vharity finished and the people started to enjoy around as it was also the marriage anniversary of the old couple .

Then she met prateik , he seemed to be a very matured , polite and decent man .

Later that night tired Arohi , waited for a cab as she couldn't bring her car .

It was heavly raining but there was no sign of a cab . The road was clearly empty .

Dark clouds covered the shining moon .

It was sinfully dark , due to heavy raning the road looked like a pale corridor of some hanted house .

The sound of wind , leaves blowing gave shiver to Arohi .

She was a weak girl at heart , very weak In nervousness she looked here an there .

Fright ness visible available on her face . Her heart beating at fast race - No ! This was the feeling that Arohi most of the time gets when she sense something bad .

She made a silent prayer and she took her cell phone out - No network . Oh god her life? This night proved to be so bad. She decided to walk a little , may be she can find some help. She walked and walked , several minutes passed . She was tired . her house seemed far away due to heavy raining the road was pale .

She passed by a small society and asked for help there was not gate keeper . The society seemed to be a poor one . Old houses , rusted building's. Colony can be the word. She saw an old man running as fast as he could . She rushed to him and stopped. 'Hey ! I am actually stuck here , can anyone help me , to drop to my house?' the man widen his eyes . 'Beta ! What are you doing here . Today is Lunar eclipse and much to horror is the bad whether not good for us , go home as fast as you can . No one will help you , all are coward .' Saying this he ran away into his old house , and shut his door as fast as he could .

Arohi stood there still. Only the moving of air could be heard .

She feared , feared for her life .

She decided to walk , staying still was not going to help.

Be brave Arohi Be brave ,. She consoled her thumping heart.

She walked again .

When she heard the shallow breathing .

Her eyes wide she stood still .

Her heart seemed to stop at violent pace.

She immediately turn around .

There stood Mr.Pratab Mehta . The man who was a shame to the name of society .

Arohi looked him in horror .

He limped towards her , his eyes rageful his every step dangerous .

His mind filled with red haze revenge .

'Miss Arohi! What a perfect timing . You me and no one' he laughed in a way which irked Arohi and scared her to an extreme extent. 'Now ! I am going to take a heavy revenge of what you did to me . You , you little brat humiliated me in front of the whole world. You ! Because of you , my wife left me , I am not able to show my face . I am not going to leave you' .

Arohi was scared , she had no power of speaking . She realized he was drunk and more dangerous , he held a fine bottle of alcohol in his hands and smashed it on the road .

Which caused Arohi to jump backward no ways , she was not going to let this man ever near her again . NEVER !

without a second thought she ran as fast as she could .

On the pale road .With not light , horror like atmosphere she ran .

Her whole world shook apart , her past haunting her .

She realized she was very slow infront of him and those heels were not helping a bit .

She immeditaly took them out and threw on his face . She took her turn toward the forest. Sinfully dark with long looming trees , with damage leaves . Sand , stones coming in her way , bruising her feet. But she gave no damn and ran for her life . But then she couldn't she got stuck into those scary branches of trees and tripped.

That man jumped on her , trying as hard as he could to touch her on unformal places. Arohi wriggled in his grip tried hard to push him but no use, She was still a nave girl . But no , not on any cost she could surrender . She pushed him with her might and tried to run when he caught her leg and harshly dragged her , which caused her knee to get bruise. She cried shouted , tears forming in her eyes , Her short red dress ripped from places , when the man hovered over her again tried to kiss her . She noticed the gun in his pocket , she took it and immediately pushed him and pulled the trigger and shot him right on his heart . For a moment the world around Arohi stood still . She looked at her hands . She killed , she bloody killed someone . She looked at him , blood ozzing out from his chest and then he fell and DIED. Arohi covered her mouth gun fell from her hand and she stepped backwards . This was not what she want. No , she was killer , a murderer . Arohi kneeled down and cried she kicked he man , and hit with her small fist . Helplessly she pushed her hairs back . Rain not helping her either .

She took a shovel from behind and dig with her might and soon threw the body and covered it with sand . She noticed the shine of the sea behind the trees and cleaned her fingerprints and threw the gun in water . She would never let anyone know about it . She has suffered a dreadful past , but no she would never harm her future. She sat near the stone and cried several hours. Shouting and screaming in pain that hovered her heart. 'Why God why? Why always me? Am you favourite puppet to test all kind of problems? You never gave me the love of parents and now when I almost started to live happily , you turned me into a big stamp of killer. Why? That man who my parents wanted me to marry on age of 16 . His horrible lustfull looks irked me . no one ever cared that how I felt when I feel those eyes on me? At that time I ran away , to live happily but'?' . After pouring her heavy heart out she ran to the road side and she found a cab and reached her home . That night was not easy for her , she could still feel the touch of that horrible material in her hands. She felt her hands were filled with blood. She felt disgusted of herself, But no she did , what was for safety . And she did best. But somewhere guilt lies.

'Hello?' she heard the sound of prateik . He reminded her the day where all her problems started- The Murder ! 'Hey I think you are not fine now , so just take rest , I'll bring some food' . Arhohi nodded and thumped her self into the comfy soft bed . She closed her eyes. Tears thretaning to come out . She whimpered. No words escaped from her mouth.

'Tadaa! Here I am with food' He smiled and sat by Arohi. Arohi looked at him ,he was a carbon copy of her . She was the same naughty , happy , bubbly girl before that murder. 'So , eat' I moved my hands but no I couldn't they were bruised. Prateik looked at her hands . He thinned his lips and made a morsel and asked her to eat . She looked him and he assured her with his eyes. He made her eat with his own hands. After finishing she took a cold bath and came outside. She found no one in the house. She heard prateik's voice from kitchen. 'Oye ! main yaha hu!' He yelled . Arohi slowly moved into his kitchen

He was washing dishes . He looked at Arohi's expression. 'Kia karu , Akela rehta hu na !' Hi bit his tongue and ruffled his hairs and smiled shamelessly. Arohi chuckled a bit. She came and sat by the dining table. 'Ah ! Thankyou so much , tumne meri help ki. I am sorry muje ab jana hoga.' . 'Kaha Mr. Mehtab Mehta k pass?' he asked in a stern voice. Arohi's eyes widen . How does he know about Mehtab , brother of Pratab .

Prateik stared at the confused eyes of Arohi . She stood immediately and grabbed a knife . Was she wrong in judging him? Is he a crime partner of Mehta's? If so then she is ready to commit one more murder to save herself and her friends. She would go to every extent.

Prateik turned around to find a stunned scared Arohi with knife in her hands . She immediately put on a stern face so she won't give an indication of being scared . He knotted his eyebrows and smiled sarcstally which made Arohi's condition worsen.

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Ignore the typos's and grammer mistakes .

Actually i am scared because i have NEVER tried thriller\dark .

I use to write for m friends the light romantic one's on any couple but dark is something very hard .

Its hard to get all the scenario perfect to match .

Uff i hope i was able to do so .

If any problem then koi bat nahi agey i'll improve 😆

Abhi to starting hai na .

Please comment ok because i have very busy schedule plus Ramadan.

Still i grab time to write upar se no response toh.. 😭 I'll helplessly discontinue then =)

and i hope the update made sense 😆 . and about Arjun well filhaal he will come late but he will come 😳

So bye



Edited by Anvesha. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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absolutely awesome totally loving it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow nice start yaar.
Its osum n thanx for da pm

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