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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: payal_4

I like this part more then previous ...


i love jealous arjun , my fav 😳😳

hmmm😆😆

he has developed feelings for her , more then hate , care , their is jealousy to see her in someone's arm.. superbbb shreya 👏


sid saved her ...that scene was little filmy ... but ohk ... its good too read arjun's reaction.




Arjun was losing his balance, he caught the wall pillar and struggling to make his legs free from him, leave me u moron... I said leave, get off...he was feeling his pants falling. OMG shreya u r tooo tooo much , He hit him by foot and left the place by taking a deep breath.

u love jini ,vicky more then any character

no not at all i love arjun only thoda thoda arohii bhi but more arjun😳😳



Then he took his phone for calling her but stopped by thinking something, he wanted to talk to her, wanted to ask where is she, but couldn't dial her number. He threw the phone away and came out, his eyes were fixed on the road and at the same time giving glanced to the wrist watch.


Arohi changed in arjun's T shirt and pants, 😳 and was tossing and turning on bed not feeling sleepy, she got up and switched on the lights. Saw lots of books and trophies on the shelf...and many posters of him on wall, honor student? Him? He must have loved school. She looked at her cell phone, he must have came back to home but not called yet? Then her mobile rang and she picked it in one bell, hello...

He shouted arohi do you know what time is it? where are u?

Why are u yelling? I m at your room.

What? My room? He peeked under the bed and behind the curtains, where is she? he asked are u playing a joke on me?

Why your wall is plastered with so many award? Its tasteless. You think u r the only one with awards?

Awards?? Are u at my house? Why are u over there?


She must be our little aliya, she is my younger sister.

You have a sister?

She is not around anymore, she went away, she had a terminal disease. She'd get two shots everyday, but she never cried, because dad told her that if she cry she wont get better, and so she never cried... arohi was lisning his every world silently and feeling his pain. She noticed the heaviness in his voice while telling about his little sister.


He doesn't want to show her he is missing her so he said because u have to make breakfast, clean and do the laundry.


She was not pretending but something bothering her badly after the last night, she wanted to go away from him for some time, she completed her work and went to meet sid, after the meeting sid insisted her to drop she agreed but all the way she was silent thinking about the last night they knows each other since 9, sid was noticing some tension on her face. He asked what happened arohi?

Arohi quickly jumped on her seat and turned to him, might arjun taught shanaya how to ride bicycle?

ye arohi bhi na , kya kya sochti rehti hai 😆



Just then arohi and sid stepped out from the car they were at distance from them, arjun and shanaya saw them but they didn't. when arohi was walking one car came in speed and sid pulled arohi to him for saving...she fell on his chest and held his hand tight... blood rushed to his spines by seeing arohi with someone so close, he stepped ahead to them but his manager came and asked for coming with them, shanaya was equally hurt like him, she wiped her tear drops and went inside. 😳😳😳


All the time at the music launch and conference his mind was on them, the incident snatching his peace of mind. The stage was so big and lots of media present there, after all its a big budget movie, they were also showing promos of the movie in big screen, The question and answer session started but his attention was on them, why they are sitting together?? Why arohi was not at the front seat I kept for her?

👏👏👏



omg so long comment😆😉
loved it thanks for taking time for me and giving a lovly comment🤗
Edited by shreya_arjuhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: payal_4

now ur happy shreya ??? 😳


hw r u nw ?

yes very happy😃
feeling much better😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

very nice update shreya -

thanks priya😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

Totally awesome too good

thanks pinky😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Rimpi_kmh

lovely update shreyu 👏

omg!!Vicky ...konsi duniya ki prani hai yer,,,,,😆

arjun missed arohi,awww bt didn't tell her cuz of ego😛

sid..i liked this guy...becuz of him arjun was jealous😎

arjuhi ph convo..was cute..❤️

waiting for next part...love u!!!!🤗


thank u so much for the lovly comment.🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Bablylovely20

Aweee awesome update :-) and vicky i hate that guy dont knw why :-P. I loved arjuhi's phone conversation it was so cute and when arjun told abt shanaya arohi's all excitement gone bt dumbo arjun didnt understand it, i like the jealous arjun it was fun :-P. Plz gve the next update soon

thank u bably🤗
hmmm everyone likes jalous arjun😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: mysticlover

First, I'm angry at you!! You didn't sent me a pm for the 17 chapter!! 😔

sorry dear but i haven't sent pm to anybody that time😔

But I read it anyways n I loved it!! 😃
Oh!! Arjun is jealous!!! Wooo!! [:D/] are Vicky n Ini turning into new leaves??? I hope so!! I don't like them but still Arohi considers them her friends!!

yes because she is a soft hearted girl.😃
yes fanlly arjun jealousy part is up😆


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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
lovely shreyu... m loving the way story is shaping
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
awsmmm...yaar i wanted to read more...
awee tht bedroom scene was just awsm...
i hope nw thy realise thr love soon...
nd confess it...
by god cnt wait more...shreyu...aisa na kar jaldi update de wapis...
i want to see thm toghtr...wo b jaldi jaldi...plzzz
awsm 1...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
You are an awesome writer!!! 👏 👍🏼
I am loving the whole concept more and more with each chapter!!!

Plzz do keep updating!!!

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