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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: shreya_arjuhi


so sorry dear but this time it will take little time.
bloody cold grrr :(((


ok...😭
take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

thanks kinju.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: shreya_arjuhi


thanks u🤗
sneha's comment ok dear, but what about yours?



it's a very joyful update didi can't express my happiness in words 😊
your reply to Broken_Hearts:
isn't your two days are over?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Congrats for the new thread!! 😊 Great going!! Loved this part too!! ❤️ ❤️ I love Arohi!! She's a cutie!! Arjun is a bit stupid lol!! 😆 Awesome update!! :) Thanks for the pm!! n Update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
OMG just nw i noticed tat i haven't commented on tis part😲
main kitni stupid hoon it ws such a owssom part

Congo on new thread jee u totally deserve it👏👏👏
loved ter concern abt eachother after dat hot kissing session☺️
specially arjun's concern towards arohi

god tis shanaya main kitni baar bolun i hate her i hate her i just hate her to da core🤬

i too loved tat fan cleaning scene so much😳
imaoo arjun kissed her again☺️
but arohi was rite in her phase arjun shud take quick decision abt his attraction towards arohi

when I looked at arohi I m reminded of young Aliya... its sad
😕ye kya tha
i hope tis little dooriyaan vil make both of tem to realize eachothers importance in ter life😳
continue soon nd sorry for the late reply dear... i didn hv a clue abt it sachme😳
love u 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Deepika06

OMG just nw i noticed tat i haven't commented on tis part😲
main kitni stupid hoon it ws such a owssom part

Congo on new thread jee u totally deserve it👏👏👏
loved ter concern abt eachother after dat hot kissing session☺️
specially arjun's concern towards arohi

god tis shanaya main kitni baar bolun i hate her i hate her i just hate her to da core🤬

i too loved tat fan cleaning scene so much😳
imaoo arjun kissed her again☺️
but arohi was rite in her phase arjun shud take quick decision abt his attraction towards arohi

when I looked at arohi I m reminded of young Aliya... its sad
😕ye kya tha
i hope tis little dooriyaan vil make both of tem to realize eachothers importance in ter life😳
continue soon nd sorry for the late reply dear... i didn hv a clue abt it sachme😳
love u 🤗

thank u so much🤗
Edited by shreya_arjuhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68

Part 17-

In a evening when arjun was about to leave from his office, he saw vicky was waiting for him outside, he asked to manager what this guy doing here? Watchman replied dont know sir he was trying to go inside but I stopped him and said nobody enter in without permission from that time, he is waiting here...how long? asked arjun. Since afternoon sir. Ok send him in.

Watchman nodded ok sir, watchman send him in finally.

He knocked at arjun's cabin...

Come in.

Vickey came and sat front of him with poor puppy face...

Arjun glared him, u were the one who sold the house? Vicky was about to say but he said in a loud voice, are u really a friend? Vicky lowered his head. And tell me What are u doing here, u sold the house, u both monsters hit me and then tried to blackmail us now what else?? It seems u like taking advantage of arohi's good nature. Do it again and I won't leave u. people like u should be eating prison food.

Vicky started crying by keeping hand on his mouth in a girl style of weeping.

Arjun got surprised he asked, are u crying??

Jini doesnt know about the world but because of me she's been disowned.

Arjun rolled his eyes and was feeling so embarrassed by him, he ran his fingers on his hairs and peek outside to make sure nobody listening his stupid cry, otherwise what would they think?

Vicky continued she has known hardships because of me, through our baby is developing fine.

Arjun shouted again u dont have right to cry. So stop it. he turned and took step to go out, but Vicky fell on his legs and held them tight... forgive me plz... forgive...

Arjun was losing his balance, he caught the wall pillar and struggling to make his legs free from him, leave me u moron... I said leave, get off...he was feeling his pants falling. He hit him by foot and left the place by taking a deep breath.

He again went ahead to his car but his manager told him that ayesha wants to see him in her cabin. He nodded and reached to her.

U know about the press conference about our movie right? Asked ayesha.

Yeah.

I hope it goes well, I m kind of scared.

Don't be' everything will be fine.

Your wife is coming too right?

He nodded but not sure.

Arjun came back to home but found it dark, he inserted his extra key and entered in but surprised how arohi is not at home as its late at night. He searched for any note she left for him but disappointed to not found anything.

Then he took his phone for calling her but stopped by thinking something, he wanted to talk to her, wanted to ask where is she, but couldn't dial her number. He threw the phone away and came out, his eyes were fixed on the road and at the same time giving glanced to the wrist watch.

Arohi changed in arjun's T shirt and pants, and was tossing and turning on bed not feeling sleepy, she got up and switched on the lights. Saw lots of books and trophies on the shelf...and many posters of him on wall, honor student? Him? He must have loved school. She looked at her cell phone, he must have came back to home but not called yet? Then her mobile rang and she picked it in one bell, hello...

He shouted arohi do you know what time is it? where are u?

Why are u yelling? I m at your room.

What? My room? He peeked under the bed and behind the curtains, where is she? he asked are u playing a joke on me?

Why your wall is plastered with so many award? Its tasteless. You think u r the only one with awards?

Awards?? Are u at my house? Why are u over there?

Actually dadi and mom invited me and as it was late at night they insisted me to stay. Hey there are lots in this glass jar. Did u make it?

Why would I make that? Shanaya made that for me, for my middle school graduation day.

Arohi's face fell, oh I see. She took a photo frame and said there is a picture here, where'd u go to take this? She asked smilingly. What's up with the shorts u r wearing? she giggled, whats going on with your hair?

That was taken in 6th standard. that was the fashion back then and may be your hair was even funnier. he smiled and sat comfortably on bed with keeping pillow on his lap.

She giggled and took another picture from the diary, hey there is another but she is looking like a girl but her hairs are all cut?

She must be our little aliya, she is my younger sister.

You have a sister?

She is not around anymore, she went away, she had a terminal disease. She'd get two shots everyday, but she never cried, because dad told her that if she cry she wont get better, and so she never cried... arohi was lisning his every world silently and feeling his pain. She noticed the heaviness in his voice while telling about his little sister.

Not even once, she never cried in a hope of getting better but she wouldn't get better. Why father was like that? Why he couldn't take care of her? Why he gave her false hopes, at least he can let her cry when that was ok to cry, when she was just a child.

She was feeling to be with him right now, wanted to hug him and wipe his pain. She said your father too was probably crying to himself.

He laughed sarcastically... No he is kind of a strong man, different person, he never cried...whenever I cry to see aliya in pain shanaya was the only person always cry with me. when a nine year old boy or girl cries and to trying to have them stop crying do you know what they need most? ICECREAM. I bought icecream for her whenever she cry.

Arohi was silent... he asked arohi are u asleep?

No I m not.

Then why aren't u saying anything?

What can I say?

He was expecting her to say I want to come back but when she didn't say he asked by himself arohi should I come to pick u up?

Huh...?

He doesn't want to show her he is missing her so he said because u have to make breakfast, clean and do the laundry.

Dont talk about food, u r not eating at home from last few days...u have always house works for me right? I must really be a made to u... bye and she hung up the phone.

Arohi... arohi... listen.

Arohi was not able to sleep, starring at the glass jar and reminding the day when they both were drinking beer and he was talking about someone special' when he was saying how it feels when someone who is really important for u going away?? And then the day when he was practicing for proposing and next day that article about him and a mystery girl... and that ring which he threw on the garden. The day of party when shanaya was asking in a bossy tone do u like me and he said yes I like u a lot and pulled me and kissed front of everyone. Is this means arjun loved shanaya? And that ring was for her? She looked at her finger and the wedding ring then shook her head and went to bed.

Arjun was also thinking about her, what is wrong with her, why she started yelling on me suddenly, ho kya jata hai ise achanak.

Next day arjun was searching something to eat?? Just then arohi came... he had a big smile to see her back but he hide it and asked- how u stay there without asking me? u should take my permission before.

She rolled her eyes yeah right but dont u think u r forgetting something, we decided to keep away from each other's ways.

I was thinking about this and I think we should tell important things to each other. Ok so from now tell me when and where u r going.

Fine but its for you also. Why u r not going? No shoots for today?

I hv shoot but I will go late u know I m a star, and also I decided to do only some selected movies...

She shrugs yeah sure, star hunh...

She was not pretending but something bothering her badly after the last night, she wanted to go away from him for some time, she completed her work and went to meet sid, after the meeting sid insisted her to drop she agreed but all the way she was silent thinking about the last night they knows each other since 9, sid was noticing some tension on her face. He asked what happened arohi?

Arohi quickly jumped on her seat and turned to him, might arjun taught shanaya how to ride bicycle?

No I m the one who taught her how to ride.

She smiled big, really? Thats a relief.

Hey I m going to the press conference for arjun's movie, would u like to come?

Hmmm... ok. Why he didn't invite me she thought.

Here arjun was trying arohi's no again and again to invite her for the music launch and conference but her mobile was in her purse. Finally when he was getting late he left for the hotel with ayesha.

When arjun stopped his car at the parking saw shanaya there.

Hey shanaya u r here?

Yes after all I hv designed the outfits for the movie, I hv a invitation...she said showing him card.

Just then arohi and sid stepped out from the car they were at distance from them, arjun and shanaya saw them but they didn't. when arohi was walking one car came in speed and sid pulled arohi to him for saving...she fell on his chest and held his hand tight... blood rushed to his spines by seeing arohi with someone so close, he stepped ahead to them but his manager came and asked for coming with them, shanaya was equally hurt like him, she wiped her tear drops and went inside.

Wow its so big na? arohi saw his posters and said hmmm looking good.

Yeah its a biggest five star hotel of mumbai.

Jini and vicky came to arohi and gave her the pass of special VIP seat...

What is this? She asked.

This is a special seat for u? arjun gave me to giving u.

Why he gave u?

He gave me a chance if I work properly he will recommend me in his company. We r so sorry arohi but we will pay you back soon.

Arohi happily took the pass but that was single and sid was also with her, so she took seat beside him, not at the place which arjun reserved for her.

All the time at the music launch and conference his mind was on them, the incident snatching his peace of mind. The stage was so big and lots of media present there, after all its a big budget movie, they were also showing promos of the movie in big screen, The question and answer session started but his attention was on them, why they are sitting together?? Why arohi was not at the front seat I kept for her?

Edited by shreya_arjuhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shreya superb update

Arjun is jerk 😡
my Arohi is not ur maid yaad rahlo Arjun 😡
I love their phone convo 😃
want to see jealous Arjun(jealous Arjun is my all time fav 😉)
can't wait for next update
update soon Shreya otherwise be ready for my non stop WA msgs 😆
Edited by --Anjali-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
For chapter 16

IMFFU's First chapter without jini nd vicky
most irritating character 😡
aise hi acche wale updates dena with out them 😳 big hugss for u

as usual awesome chapter ... some scene r very nice .

jo haal dil ka idhar ho raha hai , wo haal din ka udar ho raha hai ...☺️

dont like sanaya 😕


Why u always talking about her that way? what's your problem with her? she is my friend.

She twisted her nose yeah off course. Btw why u came late?

Excuse me? we agreed to keep out of each other's business. Didn't we?

Funny? When did I ever interfere in your personal life? I was only worried about making dinner at the late night, I don't care where u go and whom u meet, so don't worry about me and do whatever you will. She threw the remote on couch and went upstairs, he was stood their with weird feeling... why she talking like this. 😔😔😔



imagining the dream where she was at shanaya's home and threatening her... u bloody bitch dare to meet my husband and I will kill u, then she jumped on her...this thought brings a smile on her face, then she opened her eyes and shook head... but what if that bitch throw me out from this house... then she imagining herself with her bag, arjun and shanaya kicking her out and smilingly waving hand in bye... then they closed the door, she again shook her head no... why he always doing this with me, always giving more importance to that bitch...😆



Arohi...

Let me finish arjun...

Enough, U higher me only for doing works of your house not fulfilling your personal desires, u don't love me, u don't give me respect, always treating me like a maid, for u shanaya your friend is above from everything and me nothing...but don't forget I am also a human I hv feelings, I have heart, mujhe bhi bura lagta hai, mujhe bhi dard hota hai, I m alone but not weak, I never let u do this to me, don't u dare touch me again.



Edited by payal_4 - 12 years ago

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