Beshram Dilbar&his Blushing Bride-ch.4pg.25UPDTD - Page 11

MAHI VE, how did i miss this update

Originally posted by: ara_000

aftr reading d update for d vry 1st tym i am feeling lyk slapping both jay nd shefali...!
Wat d hell they jst said to our arjuhi..!!
Arghhh 😡
my poor arjun...!
He actually said dat he is happily married nd dat stupid jay came nd said all crap things nd made him think dat whether he is saying d truth or not nd on d other hand shefali...!
Dumbo,who has said her to tell all those stupid stuffs to our newly wedded arohi...
Stupid stupid stupid 😡
but i am happy dat arjun nd arohi both r not paying dat much attention to their friend's words...ya may b some small talks btwn them r making them think of their friend's words but me sure their love will conquer all nd dat nly happened atlast where they could not sleep witout saying 'i love u' to each other...
Ahhh i jst love them ❤️
mahiii,loveee u baby ❤️
muahhh :*
kya update di tune...ekdum jhakkaswali...hayeee i am totally in love wit dis story...
Nd Moona,awsum banner yaar...i jst loved it...!👍🏼

friends to hote hi help k lye hen 😆

his experience 😉

Oaww itni tension mt lo honey..abhi to.start hai

I realy happy u like it dear

Thank u for beautifuk cmnt

Originally posted by: aparna4karanika

mahhhiii frst f all am really really sry fr nt cmntng on previous update.. Ts just bcz i ws soo bc wth my danc competition..i knw u'll be katteess with me fr dat..bt seriously am sry jaan :* i hope u'l frgv me,,
N trust me its just dat i cdnt cmnt bt i neva missed any update.,i daiky cm to ds forum..anyways now my cmnt..
Last update was fantastic...so passionate n romantic its just awessmmm...ts nt nky besharam dilbar n blushung bride bt a blushing reader too..
I ws blushung d whole while readng it..how beautifully u write romantic scenes. D nervousness,d shyness..i cd feel arohi's emotions.. Bt arjun s really desperate.. Yes dey knew each other bt shadi ke pehle raat main hi ithane heavy love?? Well if arohi s okie wth it,den i dnt hv any problm..
Now i knw y u said d last line on last update..
Hmm so d problm s deir frnd's advice.. Idiiots.. Sab ki zindagi aise nahi hoti.. Ofcourse marriege s nt an easy thng ! Bt if love is true n stong,den it Hahacn overcm every hurdles.. N i hope arjuhi's love wio win ova deir dbts n insecurities..
Lovely update my doll..continue soon

Arwy wow appu jiu mood men lgg rhi hen

Haha...hope u win...win 1st dn I ll tk ur class

Thank u so mu,h fr each word if ur cmnt..mean alot ro me

Originally posted by: Deepika06

By god ghaar aathi hui ye update ka bhaarish shuru 😃 I want to tell u something I just lov tis story to the core I really dono hw many times I had read tis update just loving it 👏 ⭐️ 👏 morning toh raath se b zyadha hawt hai yr 😳 tey wre so comfortable wit eachother ⭐️ tis arjun is so so besharam first uski vajase late hogai ab b arohi ko pareshaan kar rahihe 😳 arjun:pagal aur b ache shade hojaygi 😳 😳 😳 aur arohi b kam nai hai she too naughty on her side loved hw she fooled arjun by running out of their room in the midway of their romance session 😆 shefali and jai shud b newly tagged as dumbo couples stupids 😡 bichare arjuhi toh akele phasgai agar purvi and salil b hoti atmosphere wud b quite better 🤢 but some of ter dialogues wre too hilarious!!!shefali:mtlb kya?in husbands ko jhoot bolne ki itni aadat hoti hai k wo khud b apne jhoot ko sch hi smjhe lgte hen jai:aur zara sa bed ki duty se break lo pakka yekeen hgata hai k koi aur ladki hai,10 bacho ki maa ko b tum yehi kehta sunoge k mera pati ne mujshse pyar nai kya 🤣 🤣 🤣 arjuhi's last phone convo ws sweet haan beech beech may tey got some glimpse of ter friends words but finally ter lov won tey cant even sleep without saying lov u to eachother ❤️ hope arjun wears tat white shirt while picking up arohi frm her home 😉 killing banner super hot ossom creation Moona:-) waiting dear update the next part soon lov u 🤗

Love u yaar...thank u fr mkng me.smile wid ur words always

Thank u so much for beautiful cmnt

Originally posted by: M00NA

killer update mahi...

''wo subha to bewaja ho

k guzre bin tumhare jiski raat''...⭐️..

morning was too good😉😳...

mahi u r an amazing dialouge writter👏...

''she quickly got up & pulled da heavy curtains to block them''...aww😳

''He teasingly:pagal aur bhi acha shade hojaeyga.''🤣😳

jay shefalidono pagl hai kya....acha huwa purvi n saleel nahi the......

''aur zra sa bed ki duty se break lo paka yakeen hojata hai k koi aur ladki hai..infact i tell u something,10 bcho ki maa ko bhi tum yehi kehte suno ge k mere pati ne kbhi mujhse pyar nhi kya...🤣🤣🤣hilarious...

last para arjuhi convrstion were so cute...

n thnk u so much m realy glad taht u likedd banner😳...

tc🤗

Pr aap k banner se zyada nhi 😳

Oh cm on I lobe it...u r simply best

Glad u enjoy daupdt..thanks fr lively cmbt

Originally posted by: mysticlover

these two are so cute and innocent!!!

how they got affected after listening to their friends' talks!!!

i really hope they tackle every problem and let their love win every time!

this arjun is so naughty!! he teases poor arohi so much! :)

Thank u fr ur wirds achu dear

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

MAHI VE, how did i miss this update

loved it dear - i loved everything about the last 3 updates -

mahi, pls yaaar no major MUs pls - i cant take it - my aru is very very innocent - i hate jay and shefu in this - why are they giving unwanted advices to arjun and aru - hope arjuhi dont listen to any of those advices

loved it mahi -

Thank u priya darling

Haha nt big mu..bt a sprinkle of spice 😉

lol pata chalta hai jay-shefu ke beech kitni understanding hai lol pakka shadi shuda lagte hai... haye i wish ye dono unke ke jaise idiots na nikle... pm ke liya ty.. oh btw title bada hi suit karta hai arjuhi pe PERFECT! continue soonest!