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cherry227

@cherry227

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

awesome one maahi!!!

it had a eerie feeling to it yet a certain kind of mysterious sensuality... makes one feel that arohi is a spirit or a figment of arjuns imagination... i love this painter with poetic words...

"husn meri kamzori hai..." wow

there is a certain kind of forthright honesty in arjun... he felt like painting her and he immediately expressed it... arohi utnihi ek paheli lagti hai! as if shes a closed book and hes an eager boy who's dying of curiosity to read it ☺️

fabulous writing 👏 miss you so much maahi 🤗 next part jaldi update karo

aise hi likhti raho... 4 months kab nikal jaayenge humey pata bhi nai chalega

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Ana

@..oneOone..

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Hey mahiii...
Iike always...this is us just so fab yaar...
The start was great...two boys general discussion n arjun consudering himself lucky...
Haha...but his luck caught him and he fell for the charms of the girl...
Woap, arohi discription itself was seductive yaar...luved the way u described...
So arjun is now off to make her pic...n aru agreed...
Fab...i need 2nd part soon janab...

Bw...why do i feel that aru is a bhoot here...hehe...like she said husan khatarnak bhi ho sakta hai...

Conr soon...

Luv ya
Ana

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Yaar yeh Emoticons jitne bhi dalu kam padenge aj toh 😕 kya karu 😕

Mahi you are Awesome ness ki Hadh yaar 👏 Lods of hugs & kisses to you for this ❤️

Wow ...*bows down* you are incredible 👏 you always create different magic with each update & story & you are back again loved reading this 😃 you Rock Yaara 👏 but i want next part nowww ...Pleaseee 😭

your Start man ...i was like 😲 yeh kya ho raha hain 😲 LOl i thought as usual jay & shefali lad rahe honge & Arjun is listening to his Cribbing 😆 But meraa popat 😛

hats off to you dear the way you have started this was mesmerising 👏 Arjun The Painter ...& hsi views his attitude came out brilliantly 👏 he loves to capture Beauty ...& Now the phi-nominal flawless beauty is in front of him & he is about to caputre it in canvas but your discribtion & detailing gave me goosebumps too...having a wired scary feeling with every passing line aisa kyun 😕 yeh kya hain ...its a horror story kyaa?????? 😕

Goshh!!! you made me crazy with the detailing & awesome discription of Arohi 👏 she is sooo beautiful ...& Extremely Sexy ...I just loved the way you have discribed it ...it was sooo sensuous. ...plus her looks & get up ...Omg she is sooo hawt 😊 but Somewhere it scared me too ...kya hain yeh 😕

Arohi ke baba ...aise kaise woh itni badi jagah use aise mausam mein akeli chod ke gaye 😲 i am having ajeeb feeling plus the title ...I JUST WANT NEXT PART NOW 😊

Pleaseee Update naaa 😃

i am loving thiss ...please contiue jaldi se

Love you Sweet heart

Pranjal.

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cooljaya11

@cooljaya11

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Omg ye arohi kahi bhoottt to nahi
Anyway
White sari n arohi , it's always butterfly in me so bicharaaa painter arjun kese Bach Sakta he
Oh meri Cham Cham mahi now update next n I inform me first huh

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Sreya Roy

@sreya19roy

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Awesome awesome awesome start Mahi...I'm absolutely loving the whole scary n mystery feel that this OS is giving...this bhootiya angle is really very interesting to read n I'm super excited to read it 😃

Bt I wonder Arjun ka kya hoga last mein if Arohi actually turns out to be a ghost...as of now she seems to a nice-nice wala bhoot (if she is even a bhoot at all). This is really funny to imagine u know, Arohi n bhoot 😆

Continue soon Mahi n thanx for the pm 😊

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Mona Malik

@M00NA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

''Forbidden Desire'' awesome title 👍🏼❤️❤️

ok start ki kuch lines...conversation mujhy laga arjun aur us k friend ki hai😆(n thnk Mahi wo un ki nahi thi )

Arjun+Painter= more and more romance...intense romance...waise romance ka R to hai hi arjun k name mai 😳...

Age 24 🤪

ok frankly speaking mujhy ootty ka nahi pata tha...google kiya 🤣😳...

MEHFIL+HUSAN hehehe mujhy laga tumhare is OS mai arohi us mehfil ki jaan hogi...ufffmera filmy mind 😆😳...

As a gentleman bt a desire awoke in his heart;to gt atleast a glimpse of owner of such beautiful voice....jahan desire ho wahn gentle nahi hota 😛😉

Her tone suddenly so deep:husan buht khtrnak bhi ho sktaaa hai...mujhy ye arohi kuch theek nahi lag rahi

tumhari bnaun?His desire just slipped from his mouth....hahaha Arjun control🤣

was just going to paint a woman 1st time...dangerous but xciting 😉

MAHI for me this story is new...i hv never read anything like this b4...

so m expecting sooo much from this stroy...

i liked this concept...❤️

arjun ka new avatar

n arohi ka well i dont know😆 ...but i liked d way u described her...pure soul...

plz in next update do write about arohi ka hale dil ...

and next update main OS PLSHHH complete karna...dont want tto read this os in parts...

over alll mast re entry with mast ⭐️OS...

thnx MAHI 🤗...❤️ u

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aparna velayudhan

@aparna4karanika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Areyy ye aru kaun hai??
N the title itself gvng me vibes dat ts a ghost story..
I hope my aru s nt a ghost..
Bt her dialogue.. Bana sakthe tho banao..s still scaring me..
Pheww i cd find sadness n pain in her voice.. "mere baba bhi nahi hai..
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Means she ws waitng fr her baba,,bt y d hell she s aline in her home?? N mahi if she s a ghost,den hw wl arjun marry her (dey dint even start feir love n here am asking abt marrige lol)
Haha anyways mahii awesm start yar...
Now update soon baba

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Rimpi_kmh

@Rimpi_kmh

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

superb update👍🏼

bt a arohi atma hai kya???😵 o white sari n all feature to bahut darawvni hai,

kitna ajib hai, koni baba uska bati ko n8 ko asi jaga pa akala jorka jaiga.😕

a spirit n human ki story ha na,this why iss story ka name asa hai.okk jaldi sa ab nxt part update karo.

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florine_20

@florine_20

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

he mahi pata hai bohut late comment kar rahi hu.

awsome start. heavy rains, dense jungle and a devine beauty.
Mr painter ye UK nahi hai. bachke rehna.

chal mahi ab jaldi next part update kar.