OS:::LOVE HAPPENS ONCE - Page 2

jaya tum nato karanika ki yaad dila di.😭

Di i am speechless...

Beautiful OS jaya...
First, i just wish k aisa rea main hota...but then, they are just our wishes...
newaz...i love this os dear

the emotional breakdown of arohi was so wel-written...
loved how u make a connection between the street light n life...
n arohi asking herself what was her fault, where she lacked...a normal n realistic way a person would blame herself after breaking up with a relation u paid so much attention for years...
loved how aru say i m strong n went to wish him bday...
the remmberace that she decorated that place n she used to hold parties for him...was truly heart-wrecnchnh n that natasha...i hate that girl...urghhh...
aru left n her frnds spot her breaking down on a road...
ajun too approach n seeing aru like that, his heart bleed n i love how he say, u are not going anywhere before she faint in his arms...
loved this happy ending janab...
awww...moun band karne ka accha tareeqa hai..haha...
n i m glad they make up...
wonderful work janab...do write more...

luv ya
ana🤗

ye story tune kahan se build up ki?

You have written it so well Di... The pain,emotions were perfectly described...

Superb jayadi u r a rockstar:-)

kisi ki yaad aa gayi😭

but har kisi ke kahani ki ending aisi nahi hoti

truly ...loved it ..hw nice if it becoms true...

kittu ki yaad agay... yesday year ithna accha raha...chodo ...