SS: Ek Bheegisi love story NOTE p16 (02/10) - Page 9

Originally posted by: cooljaya11

I m faint n in dreamland after reading this story
I want I want more
Oh goddd sheetalll
Last para n pics dammm hot
Feeling like bhini bhini miti ki khushbuuu
You are superb

aww jaya... thanks for the sweet comment 😊

Originally posted by: nature2

You are superb

thanks dear 😃

Originally posted by: piamist

I cherished each and every word of this SS and the last part took took to the peak...now will be eagerly waiting to read your next beginning. Hope you see a new start very soon...it even felt why did you took this long to give us taste of your writing and was angry of that...however good things come slow and i applaud all the pushers who made you write..

Hope this phase of updating will follow with next stories too😉 will be check everyday for your next PM

thanks a lot dear... your comment is very encouraging 😊

Beautiful end, lvd it, really amazing..

Originally posted by: kkian

u have made me 'speechless' in real terms...i m so in love this..specially the last part<3 tum kahan thi ab tak????????? u definately have to rite more on arjuhi dear...nw im going back to read it again;) thnx fr the pm n waiting fr more such pm's frm u:p

so sweet... thank you! ab tak mein likhne ka saahas jutaa rahi thi 😆

Originally posted by: moonkmh

Whoho! Dy r hubby n wifey. Awsum. Aye haye i feel lyk dancing on rain nw,bt seriously i hv experience rain dancing once upon a tym. Dis story brought so many memories to me.

Di,i want a full on romantic intense typ ff frm u nw.

done 👍🏼

Wow..this part was really superb..
Luved how they meet n they dance with each other in public..gosh they're so adorable...

Really aweesum..

edited on page 11 itself ..!

very nice ss...
bhegi bhegi si love story...
i like arohi's character...

Originally posted by: zoya_naziya

This last part was like a crescendo of a musical piece... It was the perfect reunion of two souls in love... The rain dance part was wonderfully described:):)

Will eagerly wait for your next package:):)

P.S: If your fingers are itching, control mat kariye... Likhte rahiye:)

this was what i had intended... thanks for mentioning it 😊