SS: Ek Bheegisi love story NOTE p16 (02/10) - Page 8

I m faint n in dreamland after reading this story
I want I want more
Oh goddd sheetalll
Last para n pics dammm hot
Feeling like bhini bhini miti ki khushbuuu
You are superb

I cherished each and every word of this SS and the last part took took to the peak...now will be eagerly waiting to read your next beginning. Hope you see a new start very soon...it even felt why did you took this long to give us taste of your writing and was angry of that...however good things come slow and i applaud all the pushers who made you write..

u have made me 'speechless' in real terms...i m so in love this..specially the last part<3 tum kahan thi ab tak????????? u definately have to rite more on arjuhi dear...nw im going back to read it again;) thnx fr the pm n waiting fr more such pm's frm u:p

Whoho! Dy r hubby n wifey. Awsum. Aye haye i feel lyk dancing on rain nw,bt seriously i hv experience rain dancing once upon a tym. Dis story brought so many memories to me.

Di,i want a full on romantic intense typ ff frm u nw.

This last part was like a crescendo of a musical piece... It was the perfect reunion of two souls in love... The rain dance part was wonderfully described:):)

That was simply beautiful...

I hate u sheetal for hiding this beautiful talent of urs all these while
I really really hate u for that - u don't know what we have been missing all these while - u really don't know what a beautiful writer u r - hate u hate u for being so late in coming out of your shell
Thank God u have broken all the barriers and have showed the real u to us

Wonderful wonderful start and ending
The last pic was super awesome - I am sure this pic has gone a long way in inspiring u with this story
Beautiful writing sheetal - very well written
COMEON SHEETAL UNLEASH THE WRITER IN U - eagerly waiting for ur next story sheetal

Originally posted by: mansi_47

Resvilk edit later .
It's match time for me .
I know u r waiting for my aweesome comment hai na 😆 😳

Lol kidding 😳 😉

we won! and yes im waitin for ur awesome comment 😛

Originally posted by: aparna4karanika

Awesom

thanks aparna... glad u liked it 😊

Originally posted by: AAKMH2

wow wow wow

wht a sheetal sheetal love story <3

finally rain again pulled deir souls together at same place

about da previous updt
jay to hmesha hero hi hota hai. .itna bda kaam kr dikhaya.
deir honesty,deir innocene. .just lyk angles.
dt cnfessn scene. .i missd my punjii
u realy wrote beautifuly.. i cn pitcurze each scene.


whn u ended last updt on mentng aru mangalsutr..i gt scard 4 a bit

bt dn i realzd aru to sirf arjun ki hi hoti hai

da moment,da feelng whn dy realzd eachothr precense . . .aww real soul mates.

wht can be more romantc dn dance in rain wid ur love

da descriptn was realy so r6antc,so beautful. .

& da kiss . . . tumhara hdden talent samne aa hi gya

simply amazng story,. . . bt 3 yrs dy ddnt gt time 4 eachothe? buht na insafi hai.
chlo ab inka honeymoon package krao . .kisi rainy place par.

m waiting. .nxt ss jaldi start kro.. u r amazng writer aur u hv no right to stop ur self so k3p writng
love u

thanks mahi ji 🤗 i love you dammit! 😆