ARJUN AROHI FF..'JEENA SIRF TERE LIYE'...thread #1

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Archana

@mysticlover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#791

i was waiting for you to update!

it was beautiful...

i was sad when arohi shouted at arjun and when arjun was going through that pain...

but i got happy seeing arohi is feeling something for arjun even if unknowingly!

and i am scared about sanchit's presence there!

anyways i am so happy to see you back!

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zoya_naziya

@zoya_naziya

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#792

Seher, you are truly a marvellous and a talented , writer...👏

Every emotion/detailing that you depict/describe in your story is very impactful on me as a reader..

There is never a dull moment in your update and each and every update of yours grips me from the start to the end... Main toh dil tham ke baithti hoon ke aage kya hone wala...

The budding relationship between Sahil and Rashi, Sahil-Sanchit's relationship in the past and their dilemma in the present, Arjun's pain, Arjun-Purvi's convo(my heart went out to Arjun in this particular scene), Arohi's present state of mind where she feels at home at such a strange yet familiar place, Arohi's answer to Arjun's question about darr , Rashi's ishq dard hai part and each one of them contemplating on what Rashi said in relation to their own love for their partner's--- every scene was simply superb and perfectly described!!!!!

Ek hi line mein bolun toh update was completely faadu!!!!!

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Rimpi_kmh

@Rimpi_kmh

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#793

awesome update.u r a really fantastic writer👏

I like relationship between Sahil and Rashi.

u know kal main 'jab tak hai jaan' dakh rahai thi tab srk ka memorie loss jab dekha raha tha tab muja tum hari story ki yead agi thi.

flasback part read karka to muja rona agai😭, arjun is so much pain😔

tum mera dil khush kar dia. I happy seeing arohi is feeling something for arjun unknowingly.

NOW next part jaldi dana,waiting.. ...

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shreya

@ShrePreet18

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#794

very nice, we were waiting for this, oh my arohi is compleltly changed. hope she remember everything soon

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cooljaya11

@cooljaya11

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#795

Sehar u promised after 2 days
Now u update 13 th
Now it's 15th
So update time

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Vibha

@...vibha...

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#796

awesome update sehar...loved it❤️
felt bad for arjun whn arohi shouted on him
the person he loved the most said him those hurtful words
arohi too felt bad after shouting...i want her to apologize
rashi-sahil are on track
though sanchit is behaving nice now...i have a doubt he may be trouble for arjuhi in future...as he doesn't loves preety😕
the game part was awesome...arjun denying everyone bt obeying arohi only😳
the flashback scene was emotional one
was happy whn arohi stopped arjun and ordered like he must wait with her in her room👏 felt happy for arjun
i know i was one of them who wanted to see jealous arjun bt not coz of sanchit...it's paining him
do continue soon