PYAR KE DO PAL PART 3 NEW NOTE PG 24 - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
haffiii soo butiful i never saw dis
luved it
Arjuhisis thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
aaah the poem is posted here tooo
beautiful hafffieee
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Posted: 13 years ago

Finally managed to get through all those chapters!

I am absolutely speechless.. I hav no words 2 describe ur writing..

Ur use of words, description, the depiction of emotions and everything is amazing di..

U engaged me in reading the update so much that even I didnt realise when it ended..

The flow of the story is amazing!! nd the storyline jus gets better and better..

I jus love the way you showed Arjun as being so caring, loving and understanding nd still being prepared to fulfill his promise..

Nd the scene with Arohi listening to his messages on her phonne brought tears to my eyes.. you described it beautifully that it made me feel as though i was there..

But Arohi cant be dead.. they both cnt die.. thats not possible.. there has to b another way.. there always is..

cant wait for u to continue this.. update soon nd i am so sorry for the delay in reading nd commenting.. I knw i promised a long comment buh this is all i can give right now.. sorry

x

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Posted: 13 years ago


Embracing The Death

Styx, the river that symbolizes hate

A boundary that separates life and death

Inhales the soul, abandons lifeless body behind

But can death consume love?

Love that is beyond life and death

Love that can melt a stone-hearted being

A love that rejuvenates and gives new birth to someone

Love that can overpower such strong feeling of hatred

Is it possible for Styx to take away my soul?

We may have two bodies, but we are one soul

Soul that is intertwined by love

Love that is so pure, so serene, so blissful

Love that knows no bound of life and death

Death may conquer my life, but it can't conquer my love

Our love that is unbeatable, simultaneously the death is inevitable

Though I can confide, love lives an eternity

Yeah sure I can't turn away from the death

Yet, I'll be alive through her

Making my presence in her every essence

What if we can't make new memories together?

Our cherished memories will always keep me by her side

The time has arrived; I have to leave her behind

Then why every moment my heart is calling her name

Her beautiful face is flashing in front of my eyes

Why is it so difficult to say bye to your love?

Indeed it is painful than my death

I glanced at her one last time

To store her lovely feature in my heart forever

I was perplexed by the look on her face

Her eyes that says all to me, were void of any emotion

I was lying in her arms helplessly, watching her turn into a lifeless stone

My eyes were begging her to come into her senses

And for her one smile, so I can leave at ease

Then I see death is pulling me in its embrace

But how can I leave her like that

I wish I could choose between love and death

Neither I could have look back; my death will not wait too long

In my new journey, two hands were waiting for me to hold them

The touch of her hands were so familiar

And when my eyes meet with the beauty

I found the answer to my unexplained death

The death may win over my life

But our love overruled the death ~~


~~ Dedicated to Anu di

~~ Reflection on PKDP

~~ With Love Shona ❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago
here u go di I posted it srry for being late...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey shonapeare !!!
again im saying this, i love the poem !!!!!
its amazing !!!!!!
love you !!!!!


Edited by DarkDove - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
u r too cute Haffie Baby...my sweet Barbie Doll...luv u n a big hug...n not to forget miss u a lot ~~
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Angel.KMH.AK

u r too cute Haffie Baby...my sweet Barbie Doll...luv u n a big hug...n not to forget miss u a lot ~~


aaw thanks shonapeare 😳
love you too and a super big hug !!!!
i miss u a lot too ...
Arjuhisis thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Kaise Kahein hame PKDP se Kitni Mohabbat hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
anu di im misi u so much i no i have no rite fterall im nt commentin since soo many update bt still i have promiseda lng coment n i wil d tht
bt fter my xams
nyways update sooonnn luv ya!!!
n m missn pkdp

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