NEW ss: 48 hours!! page 18 dec 6th - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
wow it dat was jus amazin
👏👏 luv da concept arjun n aruhi locked in a room 4 48 hours
cnt w8 2 read more
fanx 4 da pm plzz cont soon x 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this one to is great and sure you have to continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
u surely need to continue this!
there is no other way!
arjun and arohi in a room locked for 48 hrs! nothing cud be more interesting than this!
so nvr 4get to pm me 4 ur both os or ss or ff or watever u want to make it becoz watever it is i will be a reader!
update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW ARJUNA ND AROHI LOCKED TOGETHER FOR 48 HOURS AND ALL ALONE
CANT WAIT FOR THE UPDATE
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Love the concept!! Jaldi se update karo meri ma.. Cant wait any longer.. I read ur ss as soon as i cud.. it was so gud nd i am really liking the concept.. Omg! Aru nd Arjun r locked together.. ab aega maza.. expecting a hot update!! Update soon xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omiiiggoddd!!!
Yes...they are locked in 1 room for 2 whole days!!!
48 hours!! 😃
I wonder what they will do 😳
Please update soon and add me to your PM list please!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fantastic plot... pls pm me for updates

varsh- thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Arey yar!!

people i am GUZAARISH...:)


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -vrshn-

Arey yar!!

people i am GUZAARISH...:)


WHAT????? ok i didnt know tht 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys, its a short update but this will be updated again soon, i just wanted to know what you think of the story...



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Arjun decided to stay in until he hears sid walk away and get out of her goddamn room. As anticipated he heard him walk away, he had to get out the room before shefali and romit came up to lock it. He was next to door when he heard, 'what the hell??' whisper from her.

'wait... i can explain' arjun started but as his eyes took a complete image of hers to his brain, it stopped working. 'what the hell' it was his turn to be shocked.

just then they heard clicking sounds ouside the door, 'oh no...' before he could go to the door, the distant sound of shoes said that he was stuck with HER for 48 HOURS!!

he tried banging the door with his foot and hands, with no use!
'dont tell me that we have been locked in??' she shouted.

'i never knew YOU actually had the ability to tear my ear drums!' he snapped.

'you should have tried knowing it before sneaking into my room!' she snapped back. 'let me call the manager' she said.

'you cannot, he is the guide,he and all his staff have gone to the camp site to assist him handling the students.'

she stared at him for a few moments and 'fine! let me call daddu' she said as she reached for the phone.

he let out a little laugh 'daddu?!' and eyeing her stern expression 'you cannot call anyone outside the cottage cannot be called using this line, there wont even be a receptionist here to connect you to the main line' he replied nonchalantly,as he leaned on to the locked door with crossed arms.

'you mean there is no one except us in this goddamn bhoot bunglaw?!' she shouted, he flinched and rubbed his ears,' this is not any 5 star hotel madam, this is just a local cottage,here owners are the employers' he said while she looked at him in complete distaste,this was beyond the limit for Arohi Ahluwalia's temper, she threw the phone into the air which touched the floor in peices,Arjun looked at her bewildered , 'Mr.Bhagwan!! this is the worst thing you have ever done to me' she said looking towards the ceiling which had arjun laughing.

'WHAT IS SO FUNNY ARJUN SINGHANIA??' she shouted once again.

'there is no way sid would have managed you!' he said in between the laughs which she barely understood,suddenly his laughter got stuck in his throat as her words settled in his brain. 'wait...how do you know my name?' he asked.

'you are in my class! obviously i'll know you!' she snapped.

'you said you did not know sid!'

'none of your business',

'whats with this i-dont-give-a-damn attitude of yours??' he asked with a scowl. She did not say anything, taking deep breaths she went and made herself comfotable on the sofa.

He watched her as she looked like she was trying to concentrate on something,he thought that they wanted sid and arohi to be attracted to each other in the two days and that is why they were supposed to be locked, so if i am locked with her for two days? i will be attracted to her?? no no Arjun Singhania hates Behenji's! he tried calming himself but scanning her complete profile from head to toe again, he forgot the track of his thoughts... '...behen ji??' he said not realising that he had said he last line aloud!

'what?? i am not your sister in anyway' she replied instantly which she thought was wrong seeing the smug look on his face.

'you dont want to be my sister? well no girl does' he grinned as he made himself comfy on her bed.

' jerk' she murmered,'hey you are making yourself comfortable instead of searching or a way to escape??' she asked him unbelievably.

' this room does not have any exits other than the door which is locked and the other windows are grilled, your bath room window is the only way possible but if we break it and go out, there might be the risk of animals plus do you even know the temperature outside?? soo this room is the safest place to be in until the others return'

'are you crazy?? what will we do for food?'

'looks like you still did not check your kitchen area, they are stocked for a week' he said as he turnd the pages of a random magazine.

She checked and found that whatever he said was true.

'how do you now all these??' she asked with doubtful eyes.

he was about to explain himself, when her'oh my god! you planned it?? no wonder you came inside and locked yourself up! dont tell that sheetal girl is involved in this too! what was your plan?!',she took a few steps back as if he was going to attack her.

'wait..what are you talking about?? who is shetal?' he was genuinely confused. but she looked like a volcano about to burst, so he raised his hand as if asking her to stop,'let me explain before you start your music' he warned. 'okay..' , 'its quite a story..','i have all the time to listen now' she retorded standing in front of him with folded hands.

It took him 10 minutes to explain everything clearly to her, 'oh the girl's name is shefali not sheetal?', and he laughed, 'you dont even know the name of the girl you live with?',Arohi shrugged still fuming 'I knew that she was dumba** but i never knew that she had nothing for her brain' , Arjun knew what she said was true but no one can insult his friend,not even this new attraction of his,' she woudn't have done that if you had kept your long nose out of her life' he snapped, ' how dare you?! what do you know about me?' she asked back,'from whatever i know about you,i know very well that you are not whom you show yourself to be!' his raised voice and the truth in his words made her move a few steps back,he continued 'you are a freakin chameleon, you are double-faced' as she heard that her face turned white, and within few seconds she was red with anger,'how dare you?how freakin dare you?' she shouted as she launched herself towards him, but he was quick enough to push her back before they ended falling on the bed.She was fuming,'what do you think you know about me?you have no right to talk to me like that! you cheap-retard!',she shouted, He kept walking her backwards holding her stuggling hands under his and her fuming eyes locked into his angry ones. He stopped,when her back hit the wall,she closed her eyes in pain, his eyes came out of the trance their anger had created, thats when his gaze moved slowly over every inch of her face absorbing its beauty,the smooth quivering lips and crease on her forehead essaying her pain, realising that he hurt her, he quickly turned her around so that he was leaning over the wall and she was tightly wrapped in his arms,he was still staring at her as she slowly opened her eyes, he observed the nervousness as she stared back at him with wide vulnerable eyes , but it did not take a second for them to turn fierce, asa he saw that she was pushing him away with both her arms.suddenly realising his position he removed his arm from around her waist, causing her to be thrown backwards, she stared at him for a few more seconds before she turned away and stalked into the kitchen area.



Please let me know what you think of the update,..and guys its me varshini :)

part one: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1950522&PID=48669453&#48669453"



Edited by guzaarish - 13 years ago

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