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Anupa28 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AmnaIsh

Well well well...😲
anu darling - i have to say this chapter was absolutely FAB, fantastic, electrifyin...i absolutely loved it🤗
the opening paragraph ..was tooo f'n good that it gripped my attention and drove me into your update.! 😳
just fab..the way you described their raw desire, their passion, the possessive love...too good darling...i love you for this update and it left me wan'ng for more...😳😆



Guruji...I can't believe it...you liked it as well..I was really very apprehensive about you not appreciating it but agar apka ashirbad mil gya hain to kya kehna...Love yu Amna for this...you know how much it means to me..muahhh
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

WOW


HOT

ANU LAGTA HAI WEEKEND ME BAHUT PRACTICE KIYA

JIJU KO HAMNE PASS KAR DIYA HAI

LOL!!! so true
waise donu ko full marks milne chaiye😉😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Di why did you stop for??!!! 😭 WHYYY??!!!!!!
"….she shrieked with utmost temptation as she had livid vision of his hands exploring every inch of her body. " > When reading this I was like 😲 OMG OMG OMG! 😳 (All I'm going to say hahaha)
😍 awww Arjun brought her a dress... hehehe 😉
"Love is definitely not only about physical intimacy but it is definitely the way to express one's feeling" > it most defintely is heheheh 🤣
"forced back the overwhelming urge to scoop her up in his arms and take her back to his bed and give in to the pool of pure desire." > I dont think Arohi would have minded if he did that, neither would I lol 😆
Damn it Gauri is back... 😡 but Arohi was right no damage can be done this time! (fingers crossed no damage is done) 🤔
Seriously Di I was constantly blushing ☺️ and smiling 😃 whilst reading the update.,. it was HOT 👍🏼! Loved each and every part ❤️... the way you described each scene was amazing! Hats off to you woman 👏! Love it!
Please please update soon 😃
Thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! The kiss! OMG the kiss was fantabulous! The way you described it, the intensity and passion. MIND BLOWING DI! If this is how hot their kiss was, how hot will their love making be! Great update!


Side note..have a wonderful time on your trip, we're going to miss you and your wonderful writing. Greedy me would love another update before you go, but I know how busy you must be so I won't push. Be safe and have fun!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: salmankh1

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! The kiss! OMG the kiss was fantabulous! The way you described it, the intensity and passion. MIND BLOWING DI! If this is how hot their kiss was, how hot will their love making be! Great update!


Side note..have a wonderful time on your trip, we're going to miss you and your wonderful writing. Greedy me would love another update before you go, but I know how busy you must be so I won't push. Be safe and have fun!



Coming from the queen of hot scenes..I am really honoured..Thanks Raman

But that is the prob...I have certain limitations and I thinks I have exhaust myself ...I will try to do another update before I go but It all depends on time ...


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

PAR MUJHSE COMMENT KARE BINA RAHA NAHI JA RAHA

SO I THOUGHT I MUST ADD MY TWO BIT TO IT, THOUGH IT BE A BIT REPETITIVE

HE GOT A NEW DRESS FOR HER, THAT MEANS SHE IS ALWAYS IN HIS THOUGHT, HE KNEW SHE WOULDN'T HAVE ANYTHING APPROPRIATE TO WEAR IN THE EVENING AND HE DID NOT WANT HER TO FEEL ASHAMED - HE IS SO CARING

HE IS SO OBSESSED WITH HER THAT EVEN THE WAY SHE ADMIRES THE DRESS REMINDS HIM OF THE WAY SHE MAKES LOVE, PASSIONATELY - THIS IS TRUE LOVE

SHE HAS GROWN UP SO MUCH, BECOME SO MATURE, SHE CAN UNDERSTAND HIS EMOTIONS WHILE LOOKING AT HIM AND FEEL HIS PAIN - SHE WANTS TO COMFORT HIM, BUT NOW AS SHE KNOWS SHE LOVES HIM, SHE WANTS HIM TOO, THE CHEMISTRY IS SIZZLING BETWEEN THEM AND JUST A SPARK IS NEEDED TO GO UP IN FLAMES

SHE HAS BECOME SO CONFIDENT, SHE HAS REALISED THAT PHYSICAL INTIMACY IS A WAY OF EXPRESSING ONE'S LOVE OPENLY AND SHE IS READY TO DO THAT AND HAS NO HESITATION IN TAKING THE FIRST STEP. HERE ARJUN IS THE ONE WHO IS RUNNING SCARED - HE THINKS IT IS LUST AND NOT LOVE. HE IS AN IDIOT AND HAS TO BE HIT ON HIS HEAD TO MAKE HIM REALIZE IT

I LOVE THIS CONFIDENT AROHI, SHE IS NOT THE NAIVE 18 YEAR OLD INSECURE GIRL WHO BELIEVED EVERYBODY EXCEPT ARJUN. SHE IS CONFIDENT OF HER LOVE FOR HIM AND IS NOW FIGHTING FOR HER LIFE, HER CHILD, HER MARRIGE AND HER LOVE. SHE WILL NOT LET ANYBODY GET IN HER WAY. BEWARE GAURI, AROHI IS ON THE WAR PATH AND YOU STAND NO CHANCE AGAINST HER. ARJUN IS SCARED THAT SHE MAY CREATE MORE PROBLEMS BUT I HAVE FULL FAITH IN AROHI - SHE IS NOT TO FALL FOR ANY OF GAURI'S TRICKS

AND NOW LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST - WHAT A KISS
THEY SHOWED THE WHOLE WORLD THAT THEY ARE IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER AND THAT THEY CANT THEIR HANDS OFF EACH OTHER - THE HEAT THEY GENERATED WOULD HAVE BURNT GAURI TO CHARCOAL

YOU HAVE OUTDONE YOURSELF IN THIS SCENE ANU, ONE COULD FEEL THE SPARKS FLYING FROM THEIR ENTWINED BODIES, THE CRAVING, THE NEED FOR EACH OTHER. FOR ARJUN SINGHANIA THE SUAVE BUSINESSMAN TO INDULGE IN A PUBLIC DISPLAY OF EMOTIONS SHOWS HOW OUT OF CONTROL HE ACTUALLY WAS

AND NOW THE IDIOT IS FEELING GUILTY, HE NEEDS A SOLID WHACK
AROHI IS FIGHTING FOR HER FUTURE AND HE IS STUCK IN THE PAST

ANU
WE WANT MORE OF IT, KI DIL ABHI BHARA NAHI
EK LAMBA WALA HOT UPDATE BHI KABHI DENA

wah wah wah wah - kya comment likha hai yaar - muaah to u punam
luved it
i must say u should defo start writing an ff
at least to start with give us a OS yaar
luved the way u analysed this update
I HAVE BECOME AN ARDENT FAN OF UR COMMENTS PUNAM
Edited by Arjuhisis - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

PROMO



Hi Arohi….nice to see you…." Gauri said in her sugar sweet voice.

"Really…..I am surprised….can't say that I feel the same for you" Arohi tried to end the conversation. She left the room, her temper rising.

"Arohi…can we just talk for a moment" Gauri said following her.

"Ok fine..tell me quickly what you have to say" Arohi pushed the door in to an empty music room. She was expecting an encounter with Gauri but not tonight.

" Believe me Arohi...You have reasons to hate me but I sincerely feel sorry for you….when Natasha told me that you were falling into Arjun's trap again I had to come to Greece just to see you….I have tried to make contact with you at the villa but with the tight security I just couldn't get through…Mikhael told you you were coming to the ball so I came just to talk to you"

"What trap are you talking about…I don't get you?"

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Posted: 13 years ago
resrved
another new trap of gauri - sure our strong aru will not fall in her dirty pit AGAIN
she has already learnt a lesson from the previous experience
HATE GAURI - her sugari sweet voice sounds like the HOWL OF THE WOLF, or WHAT DO I SAY - MY DEAR FRIENDS HELP ME WITH SOME BAD NAMES TO DESCRIBE THAT DEVIL's VOICE
LUVED THE PROMO ANU
pls update soon

Edited by Arjuhisis - 13 years ago
kitanithuy thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
another twist again 😲. how arohi react after hear gauri said ????? hope she don't think wrong about arjun again .
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Posted: 13 years ago
haa new trck...aru wnt fall n ds...

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