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Posted: 13 years ago
anu di ...
Am frm mob so res
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Posted: 13 years ago


Its tooo to handle anu dii...

Have u done a special research on Kissing dii?????????

I wonder how cud u define a scene wid so many emotions...

Ufff...dis update was very very HAWWT dii...bt d only bad part was dat Gauri...I hope Arohi teach her a good lesson for d damage she had done to Arohi n Arjun...

Ok in 1 word, dis update was extremely HAWT...totally loved it...plz update d next chappy fast dii...
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Posted: 13 years ago
maine shayad res kiya tha. will write it here itself.
Super duper update anupa once again. passionate romantic, arjun is seeing her love through actions and is seeing the real love in her eyes, though he is scared it cld be an illusion, but soon he will know it isnt. loved the sofa scene and the ball dance ❤️.
Gauri - haaye jalne wale tera muh kaala, ab kaunse mission par aayi hai? but this time arjuhi are too smart for her and will make her beg for forgiveness.
loved it anupa, is this last update until you come back?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kavyasam

maine shayad res kiya tha. will write it here itself.

Super duper update anupa once again. passionate romantic, arjun is seeing her love through actions and is seeing the real love in her eyes, though he is scared it cld be an illusion, but soon he will know it isnt. loved the sofa scene and the ball dance ❤️.
Gauri - haaye jalne wale tera muh kaala, ab kaunse mission par aayi hai? but this time arjuhi are too smart for her and will make her beg for forgiveness.
loved it anupa, is this last update until you come back?



I am planning to do another one before I go...but it all depends on the timing...if not then after I come back...

Thanks a lot for liking it..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anupa28



I am planning to do another one before I go...but it all depends on the timing...if not then after I come back...

Thanks a lot for liking it..

yayayayay
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

cooled down a bit

so i thought of giving in my comments before i read the update once more and u guys know what will happen instantaneously ☺️
to start with the update in totallity was just MIND BLOWING ⭐️ - hundred stars to u for that
To generalise, i must say the this update clearly depicts the passion of arjuhi towards each other - their longingness to become one is imminent now -
this update reveals the burning desire in arjuhi to be in each other's arms
luved arjun for being considerate enough to buy her a beautiful outfit for her for the charity ball - he really wanted his would be Mrs.Singhania to look pretty and feel beautiful
luved all the intense moments shared by arjuhi in this update (dont want to dig it in depth - we have all understood that u have become an expert in writing romantic updates)
luved the way in which aru confronted gauri and mikheal - she forcing arjun for a dance, she kissing him first and then asking for a repeat kiss - wow everything was just great - aru is aru - definitely a strong lady on a strong mission
luved aru's confidence when she said "but trust me Arjun she won't be able to do any damage" - there is now no looking back for her - iam desperately waiting for aru to quench her thirst by taking a revenge - would luv to see aru in action against gauri - the devil in my aru's life
HOPE ARU TEACHES GAURI AND MIKHAEL A REAL LESSON FOR WHAT THEY HAVE DONE TO MY ARJUHI'S LIFE
Luved the update - great one indeed anu
take care - dont strain urself in writing another update before travelling -- if possible, give us a short update before u leave - otherwise its completely ok with us - we will wait for ur update till 22nd october


ANU

PRIYA HAS REALLY SAID IIT SO WELL
SHE HAS HIT THE NAIL ON THE HEAD WITH ALL HER COMMENTS
JUST LOVED THE WHOLE UPDATE
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Posted: 13 years ago
Such a superb update Anupa...!! a very passionate too...
Arjun is giving in little by little, tell him take cool, his woman loves him...
Anyway what are you planning with gauri's comeback ...? Hope Arohi puts her back in her place...
Expecting a another update soon ...Thanks and TC...
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Posted: 13 years ago
PAR MUJHSE COMMENT KARE BINA RAHA NAHI JA RAHA
SO I THOUGHT I MUST ADD MY TWO BIT TO IT, THOUGH IT BE A BIT REPETITIVE

HE GOT A NEW DRESS FOR HER, THAT MEANS SHE IS ALWAYS IN HIS THOUGHT, HE KNEW SHE WOULDN'T HAVE ANYTHING APPROPRIATE TO WEAR IN THE EVENING AND HE DID NOT WANT HER TO FEEL ASHAMED - HE IS SO CARING

HE IS SO OBSESSED WITH HER THAT EVEN THE WAY SHE ADMIRES THE DRESS REMINDS HIM OF THE WAY SHE MAKES LOVE, PASSIONATELY - THIS IS TRUE LOVE

SHE HAS GROWN UP SO MUCH, BECOME SO MATURE, SHE CAN UNDERSTAND HIS EMOTIONS WHILE LOOKING AT HIM AND FEEL HIS PAIN - SHE WANTS TO COMFORT HIM, BUT NOW AS SHE KNOWS SHE LOVES HIM, SHE WANTS HIM TOO, THE CHEMISTRY IS SIZZLING BETWEEN THEM AND JUST A SPARK IS NEEDED TO GO UP IN FLAMES

SHE HAS BECOME SO CONFIDENT, SHE HAS REALISED THAT PHYSICAL INTIMACY IS A WAY OF EXPRESSING ONE'S LOVE OPENLY AND SHE IS READY TO DO THAT AND HAS NO HESITATION IN TAKING THE FIRST STEP. HERE ARJUN IS THE ONE WHO IS RUNNING SCARED - HE THINKS IT IS LUST AND NOT LOVE. HE IS AN IDIOT AND HAS TO BE HIT ON HIS HEAD TO MAKE HIM REALIZE IT

I LOVE THIS CONFIDENT AROHI, SHE IS NOT THE NAIVE 18 YEAR OLD INSECURE GIRL WHO BELIEVED EVERYBODY EXCEPT ARJUN. SHE IS CONFIDENT OF HER LOVE FOR HIM AND IS NOW FIGHTING FOR HER LIFE, HER CHILD, HER MARRIGE AND HER LOVE. SHE WILL NOT LET ANYBODY GET IN HER WAY. BEWARE GAURI, AROHI IS ON THE WAR PATH AND YOU STAND NO CHANCE AGAINST HER. ARJUN IS SCARED THAT SHE MAY CREATE MORE PROBLEMS BUT I HAVE FULL FAITH IN AROHI - SHE IS NOT TO FALL FOR ANY OF GAURI'S TRICKS

AND NOW LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST - WHAT A KISS
THEY SHOWED THE WHOLE WORLD THAT THEY ARE IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER AND THAT THEY CANT THEIR HANDS OFF EACH OTHER - THE HEAT THEY GENERATED WOULD HAVE BURNT GAURI TO CHARCOAL

YOU HAVE OUTDONE YOURSELF IN THIS SCENE ANU, ONE COULD FEEL THE SPARKS FLYING FROM THEIR ENTWINED BODIES, THE CRAVING, THE NEED FOR EACH OTHER. FOR ARJUN SINGHANIA THE SUAVE BUSINESSMAN TO INDULGE IN A PUBLIC DISPLAY OF EMOTIONS SHOWS HOW OUT OF CONTROL HE ACTUALLY WAS

AND NOW THE IDIOT IS FEELING GUILTY, HE NEEDS A SOLID WHACK
AROHI IS FIGHTING FOR HER FUTURE AND HE IS STUCK IN THE PAST

ANU
WE WANT MORE OF IT, KI DIL ABHI BHARA NAHI
EK LAMBA WALA HOT UPDATE BHI KABHI DENA
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Posted: 13 years ago
Well well well...😲
anu darling - i have to say this chapter was absolutely FAB, fantastic, electrifyin...i absolutely loved it🤗
the opening paragraph ..was tooo f'n good that it gripped my attention and drove me into your update.! 😳
just fab..the way you described their raw desire, their passion, the possessive love...too good darling...i love you for this update and it left me wan'ng for more...😳😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

PAR MUJHSE COMMENT KARE BINA RAHA NAHI JA RAHA

SO I THOUGHT I MUST ADD MY TWO BIT TO IT, THOUGH IT BE A BIT REPETITIVE

HE GOT A NEW DRESS FOR HER, THAT MEANS SHE IS ALWAYS IN HIS THOUGHT, HE KNEW SHE WOULDN'T HAVE ANYTHING APPROPRIATE TO WEAR IN THE EVENING AND HE DID NOT WANT HER TO FEEL ASHAMED - HE IS SO CARING

HE IS SO OBSESSED WITH HER THAT EVEN THE WAY SHE ADMIRES THE DRESS REMINDS HIM OF THE WAY SHE MAKES LOVE, PASSIONATELY - THIS IS TRUE LOVE

SHE HAS GROWN UP SO MUCH, BECOME SO MATURE, SHE CAN UNDERSTAND HIS EMOTIONS WHILE LOOKING AT HIM AND FEEL HIS PAIN - SHE WANTS TO COMFORT HIM, BUT NOW AS SHE KNOWS SHE LOVES HIM, SHE WANTS HIM TOO, THE CHEMISTRY IS SIZZLING BETWEEN THEM AND JUST A SPARK IS NEEDED TO GO UP IN FLAMES

SHE HAS BECOME SO CONFIDENT, SHE HAS REALISED THAT PHYSICAL INTIMACY IS A WAY OF EXPRESSING ONE'S LOVE OPENLY AND SHE IS READY TO DO THAT AND HAS NO HESITATION IN TAKING THE FIRST STEP. HERE ARJUN IS THE ONE WHO IS RUNNING SCARED - HE THINKS IT IS LUST AND NOT LOVE. HE IS AN IDIOT AND HAS TO BE HIT ON HIS HEAD TO MAKE HIM REALIZE IT

I LOVE THIS CONFIDENT AROHI, SHE IS NOT THE NAIVE 18 YEAR OLD INSECURE GIRL WHO BELIEVED EVERYBODY EXCEPT ARJUN. SHE IS CONFIDENT OF HER LOVE FOR HIM AND IS NOW FIGHTING FOR HER LIFE, HER CHILD, HER MARRIGE AND HER LOVE. SHE WILL NOT LET ANYBODY GET IN HER WAY. BEWARE GAURI, AROHI IS ON THE WAR PATH AND YOU STAND NO CHANCE AGAINST HER. ARJUN IS SCARED THAT SHE MAY CREATE MORE PROBLEMS BUT I HAVE FULL FAITH IN AROHI - SHE IS NOT TO FALL FOR ANY OF GAURI'S TRICKS

AND NOW LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST - WHAT A KISS
THEY SHOWED THE WHOLE WORLD THAT THEY ARE IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER AND THAT THEY CANT THEIR HANDS OFF EACH OTHER - THE HEAT THEY GENERATED WOULD HAVE BURNT GAURI TO CHARCOAL

YOU HAVE OUTDONE YOURSELF IN THIS SCENE ANU, ONE COULD FEEL THE SPARKS FLYING FROM THEIR ENTWINED BODIES, THE CRAVING, THE NEED FOR EACH OTHER. FOR ARJUN SINGHANIA THE SUAVE BUSINESSMAN TO INDULGE IN A PUBLIC DISPLAY OF EMOTIONS SHOWS HOW OUT OF CONTROL HE ACTUALLY WAS

AND NOW THE IDIOT IS FEELING GUILTY, HE NEEDS A SOLID WHACK
AROHI IS FIGHTING FOR HER FUTURE AND HE IS STUCK IN THE PAST

ANU
WE WANT MORE OF IT, KI DIL ABHI BHARA NAHI
EK LAMBA WALA HOT UPDATE BHI KABHI DENA



My My My...what a mindblowing comment...I think you should start a FF youself..and it will be absolutely sizzling...I just love the way you and Priya always dissect each and every lines of it..as a writer i just simply love it..please keep on showering all your love and support all the time..it does make quite a lot of difference...God bless yu sweets and loads of hugs..muahhh

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