here iam with my comments
ANU, WHAT AN ELECTRYFYING UPDATE
U have done an excellent job
awesome update
To start with I would like to say again that i adore Gloria Aunty - the way she opened up things for aru without aru even realising it - hats off to this lady
Coming to the finger bleeding scene and arjun caressing her the natural way, i really relived the sweet moments of KMH2 - missing it loads dear - thanks for making us relive it
I agree with aru in believing that breaking of glass is ominous - a bad omen indeed - a good hint to aru from the author that manaofying arjun is not going to be an easy job
I hated aru when (even after knowing the truth) she thought that arjun was indeed getting tired of playing daddy and was already planning an exit (atleast for a flash of a moment). She really needs to grow up - but thank God, she realised immediately that arjun was doing this thinking about her happiness.
TODAY IAM TOTALLY WITH ARJUN - I AM ON HIS SIDE - Luved the confrontations - The dialogues of arjun was just great - U had written it very well - all emotions expressed very well anu
I felt as if i was WITNESSING this scene in the study. VERY WELL WRITTEN - HATS OFF TO U👏👏👏👏
NOW MY ARU IS THE LADY ON A MISSION
Luved the last paragraph
"?..?..I will fight for my love?..I will marry you for real and we will have a happily ever after with loads of company for Aayan?.and this is my promise to you?..I will show you how much I love you?.and this time you will come back to me begging for my love?.?..I openly challenge you if you can then prove my love, my passion, my faith wrong?..I love you too much to let you go" Sealing her promise with a soft tender kiss on his lips, she closed the door firmly leaving an absolute bewildered Arjun?.."
Wow what a paragraph to end
Aru is a grown up woman now and as Gloria Aunty rightly said "It will not be an easy ride but she was confident that Arohi will definitely win over her man" - Me too have the same confidence in aru
Brilliant update -⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
thanks for the update and will luv to read more
DIL MAANGE MORE - AAAHA 😳
Edited by Arjuhisis - 14 years ago