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Madhusmita das

@moonkmh

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Oye hoye ari,so romantic. So cute yaar.

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TeekhiMishti

@TeekhiMishti

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: kavyasam
With you is where I belong.
And with you is where I'd rather be than everywhere else.
Cause in your eyes, is where I find my paradise.
And in your arms is where my treasure is.
And I'd rather have you for a second in time,
Then having Someone else's love for a life time.

Ek pal ki zindagi ek dil ki duniya

Mil jaye zindagi ki saari khushiya

phir tumse hi shuru aur tumhee pe khatam hogee meri duniya

👏👏 awesome .

not mine...i just modified something a bit which i found online😛

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channi_star

@channi_star

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#73

such a sweet poem!!

luv arjun for nt lettin her quit her job...such kinda guyz rarely exist!!!

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TeekhiMishti

@TeekhiMishti

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: channi_star
such a sweet poem!!

luv arjun for nt lettin her quit her job...such kinda guyz rarely exist!!!

Hahaha they surely do 😉

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#75

everything you described felt so magical!!
you know what?? because of writers like you,i' not able to imagine any romance without arjun and arohi!! *i dont know if its good but i take that in a way :D *
just out of the fairy tale story!!
wish everyone lived this dream,how cool will it be??

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saira

@sezo

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

hi, thanks for pm,s will try to catch up on your other ff,s soon promise.

this was one of your best peices if not the best yoyu have don e tat i have read. loved the poem at the end, its so true how you states the heart grows fonder the longer you are apart, rwally liked your catchy title, its what made me read your of first in my pn list.

just like to add fabulos ans loved each peice better than the last.

thanks again

saira