FF:Sleeping with the Enemy 2(Pt 29pg124)Sept 21

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: shamii16
This past update was really sad!!! Raman Di plzzz bring just a little bit of happiness before going back to the pain and suffering of Arjuhi... And US!!!

Update sooon... Cant wait to read what happens next!! I know for a fact that since Riya is young, they cant just give her to her father!! A child that young needs a mother... At least thats how things are in Canada!! Once the child grows up then they might be given to the father to take care of!! Lets see what happrns with Arjuhi!!!!

Update soooin!!!!!!!!!!! But after KI!!! but not toooi late!!

Hey Shami,

we can't wait for Riya to grow up for our Arjuhi to get together. we want them together now

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salmankh1

@salmankh1

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#502

I'm working on SWTE...hope to post tonight but if not tonight then tomorrow night for sure! I'd forgotten how much fun this Arohi and Arjun are to write for we're they are eachother's throats! Will PM when it's updated. Enjoy your day/night!😛

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#503

i love you di!!!
your tonight na di??

Edited by vrshn - 14 years ago

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salmankh1

@salmankh1

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+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#504

Originally posted by: vrshn
i love you di!!! your tonight na di??

yup my night! I love those faces Varsh!

Edited by salmankh1 - 14 years ago

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590813

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Posted: 14 years ago

#505

Originally posted by: salmankh1
I'm working on SWTE...hope to post tonight but if not tonight then tomorrow night for sure! I'd forgotten how much fun this Arohi and Arjun are to write for we're they are eachother's throats! Will PM when it's updated. Enjoy your day/night!😛

ok di luv u

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#506

they are cute na? i love them too...so i'm going to catch a few hours of sleep and i guess you know how much i love it when this arjun n arohi fight

Edited by vrshn - 14 years ago

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lazyblues

@lazyblues

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Posted: 14 years ago

#507

love it...im here on rite time means...yeah...*dancin*

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addictive_kmh

@addictive_kmh

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: vrshn

please update di

Awww!!!!!...that's so cute
And look at that stork...reminds me of the cartoon that i used to watch as a child where the parents told their kids that the stork bring babies...and almost always the stork used to be drunk and misplace children...hahaha...old memories...
good smiles varshini..😊...u always come up with something new and innovative...just like our writer raman...😊

Edited by addictive_kmh - 14 years ago

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#509

Originally posted by: addictive_kmh
Awww!!!!!...that's so cute
And look at that stork...reminds me of the cartoon that i used to watch as a child where the parents told their kids that the stork bring babies...and almost always the stork used to be drunk and misplace children...hahaha...old memories...
good smiles varshini..😊...u always come up with something new and innovative...just like our writer raman...😊

innovative,it should be the person who made the smiley and i merely use them :)

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#510

i love riya! man...she is just too cute,adorable and priceless !🤗

i just can imagine every scene of the update as though i'm watching it live!😍 Arohi is trying to make riya independent,when i think deep about this,my heart aches,'coz it clearly shows how much she was affected and hurt, i mean she has always been dependent on someone or the other right from the beginning and has been hurt because of that so much so that she doesn't want her daughter to be affected like her, i feel so bad for arohi,its like Arjun's revenge has sucked the life out of her!i know its the same with arjun but still...😭

arjun-riya convo!! god,i just feel sorry for Arjun who has missed the initial three years of his child's life,i loved the way riya occupied much of his thoughts! it was warm a feeling to think that he still misses the feel of arohi around him! hmm...he loved her so much,how i wish he had given her time to explain herself.very true that anger turns even the most sensible pot of people blind. i liked it that arjun got offened when rosa told him off but his smile returned hearing riya's 'see you mister',i love the father-daughter connection! the way his thoughts always drifted to the cutest li'l girl he has met and how familiar she looked was amazing.
seriously di,i dont know if arohi is going to be ealous because of seema but we feel insecure whenever arjun thinks of seema!

the parts i hated the most in this update:
But tonight he'd get to spend some time with Seema. He'd promised her dinner tonight at her favorite restaurant, Saltaire. It would be good to see her.

. Seema took a few steps and walked into his arms. "It has been too long!" "How are you doing?" "Really good." Amar answered. "And you?" he asked looking past her to a tall, good looking guy standing behind her. Seema laughed. "I couldn't be better." "Amar let me introduce you to Arjun, my boyfriend."

"What's up with you and the new guy?" 'Looks pretty serious." Amar said with a smile. Seema looked back to where Arjun stood. "It is." she said smiling.

i know its stupid but,argh! i just hate seema for no reason. oh wait..there is a reason, she is with my arohi's arjun!! what better reason can i get to hate her?? i just can't wait for her to be kicked out of arjun's life! i know that she have brought her as a sweet and understanding girl,but i would love it if she turns evil and arohi/arjun get to kick her out!

but sadly, i do not feel so much hatred towards amar that's may be because he doesn't force himself on arohi.may be because eventhough he knows that she'll never accept him as her life partner,he stands by her through the thick and thin as a friend. DJ is too cute when she tries to convince arohi to date amar,i know i shouldn't have liked her but because of her character i came to know that arohi was strong at the point to be completely dedicated to her daughter and also that she is still stuck up with arjun (i don't think that she hates the idea of love, but i think she hates the idea of love with some other person other than arjun) *i know its a bit laid back! but even after so much i cannot see them with someone else because theyr arjun and arohi,i mean they are meant to be arjuhi and only arjuhi forever!*

i expected Arohi to know seema,'coz you had made it clear that her boutique was one of the best. but amar knew seema too...i loved the way she said,"That child is too cute." "Last time I was at Armaan she was following her mom around with a measuring tape." "Trying to get her measurements so she could make her dress." *this was the only place i like her*

i hated the fact that Arjun just assumed things that amar is riya's father at various circumstances(i know i cannot blame him either coz the way they talked misleaded him),i thought i felt some jealously,whenever he was with amar(the time seema introduced him and there he was jealous thinking that he was a proud father,and at the park for him being riyas father and later at the party because he was with arohi),he just assumes things and thinks that he is always right,just like the night at the hotel!
i also hated that arjun knew li'l things abt seema (god! i'm so jealous and stupid!!!)

i loved the hit and miss situations between arjun and arohi! and the place where arohi found out that it was arjun without turning around,arjun seeing her visibly stiifen n all was just mond-blowing!! that was my favorite part,the balcony scene!!

other parts i loved:

"That's my girl!" he said against her hair. Arohi stiffened. "My girl." Arjun used to refer to her as that.

As she sat down on her bed and rubbed lotion on her arms, Arjun's face flashed in front of her eyes. Arohi frowned. Where did that come from she thought. As she got into bed her restlessness took over. "I love you Arohi." Arohi tried to push the words out of mind. But she couldn't help but remember the very first time Arjun had told her he loved her. In the rain, after the concert in the park when she had run away from him. She'd loved him so much. She still remembered the feel of his lips against hers as they stood in the rain pledging their love for each other. She'd felt so happy. Like her love story was complete. The man she loved, loved her back. Little did she know the man she loved would also be the one to rip her heart out. Turning to her side she tried to push his image out of her head but that was easier said then done. Sighing as a tear rolled down her face she knew that tonight would be one of those nights that ghosts from her past would haunt her. Closing her eyes she willed herself to fall asleep.

If he had, had a daughter she'd be about that little girl's age he guessed. What would she have been like? What kinds of things would she be doing right now?

okay at this rate i'll be copy-pasting the whole update *except seema's parts..hehe*

and i guess arjun did not hear riya calling amar ,'buddy',and amar had also said at the party that riya turned three last week*okay i'm telling this 'coz arjun wanted to ask seema abt it*.

ugh!! again,i HATE seema!!! can't she understand that he is not interested in her!!

it was funny how arjun sat and thought about all his problems only at night,i know he is busy and all but then he thinks about everything that disturbs him only at night and blames arohi for taking away peace and sleep out of his life,may be his brain works only at nights,i say he is a stupid guy! haha!lol! anyways i loved the way he figured out how riya was his daughter and also the place where arohi knew that arjun will this out soon!

finally the confrontation scene, omg!! i have read it more than 50 times!! everytime i read it my heartbeats become 10x faster! arjun is such an hot headed person,where has his rationality gone?*i know ppl forget their rationality when angry but still* poor Arohi eventhough she hates it,she pleads arjun to not take away her daughter from her! arjun being rude and ruthless,i'm so scared! but on the whole i'm too excited for the next update,can't wait to get a taste of their intense passion ignited again by their anger and hatred!

i loved the most:

arjun-riya connection
arjun-arohi hit and miss meetings
arjun-arohi confrontation
arohi-amar scenes
arohi's motherly instincts and love
arjun's thoughts

i hated the most:

seema
seema
seema
seema
seema
seema

p.s: this is not an unbiased comment! hehe! i am partial here because i hate SEEMA to the core! hahaha! but di...i have let you know what i genuinely felt about this update and i'm soo sorry for commenting late :(

now,i dont hate arjun that much coz i know the fault is equal on both.
but how much you try to show her in good light di...i'm going to hate seema forvever! *unless she tries to bring arjuhi together*

you have no idea of how much effect your writing has over us!

Edited by vrshn - 14 years ago