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sourabhi

@katrina_petrova

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: aparna4karanika
omg dey waited tilldeir death??
n arohi died b4 arjun??
omg omg ds s truely great !! salute to deir unlimited n
unconditional love !!
ds s wat we cal KITANI MOHABBATH HAI

Hmm till their death😭

n arohi died b4 arjun

Thanx😳

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sourabhi

@katrina_petrova

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: cos_luv
oh my god it was awsum...👏...
d concept was awsum...⭐️...
m out of words...
cant belive u wrote...
m proud of my sis now...👍🏼...
i wish u ll bcum a gr8 writer...
wish u all d best...❤️.
d best part i liked is wen he left his home finally for arohi but arjuns badluck...😍
but d climax was AWSUM...👍🏼
Luv Ya sur...

thanx di

glad that u liked it

if you r out of words to itni saari words kaha se aayi??? You have been very productive mam🤣

oh so u were not proud of me b4😭

hehe writer part dunno abt it

hmm I know sometime you have to give very big imtehaan

thnx di luv u too😳

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sourabhi

@katrina_petrova

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Hey Guys I was thinking of writing another SS (short story) should I do it?

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: katrina_petrova
Hey Guys I was thinking of writing another SS (short story) should I do it?

what a question sourabhi - pls write as many OS or SS or ffs - u will always have dedicated readers - so no more questions - write it asap please

Edited by Arjuhisis - 14 years ago

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

of course sur!! what sort of question is that??

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sourabhi

@katrina_petrova

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

what a question sourabhi - pls write as many OS or SS or ffs - u will always have dedicated readers - so no more questions - write it asap please

so sweet thanx

my FF update tonite and my SS tom..😃

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SHAHAD971

@SHAHAD971

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Just came across your ss today...awesome!!! A very nice concept though.
Great job...and thanks a lot.

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Du_Nish

@Du_Nish

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Wow⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 7-stars out of 7 for the concept 👏👏👏👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 out of 7 for yor style of writing, I could empathised the character.As I am a lover of latin soap,I could have imagine the scenes the way Arjun and Arohi was and mostly it reminds me my favourite novel ''by the river pedra i sat down and wept'' on the river theme and their second chance👏👏👏I might write a full OS on how I felt while reading this one😆

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ There is everything in it, the regret when love is gone, a life in the romantic age, the loneliness,her memories that became his inspiration.

A life is gone but the feeling in his heart is still the same as when he was 17.

And like they say,a life partner is needed to hold your hand in your old days when all duties are fulfilled and here comes Arohi,

Brilliant genuine truly based OS.

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arjuhi_kmh

@arjuhi_kmh

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Omg this is so gud
Luv the concept
Best os eve!!

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zach

@zach

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Sur Behna...you have written a truely touching os !!!!!!!😭 Cry

Its very emotional...hmmm..one mistake can be so devastating...Arjun should have listened to her and believed in her completely. she was so strong throughout...accepted him with her whole heart (despite being a girl in a very conservative society)...waited for him so patiently. i guess any 17 yr old guy probably would have made that mistake (considering the circumstances and age). hmm..even then i would say Arjun's dedication to her after losing her is commendable.very, very, very tough thing to do...hmm...feel bad for him Cry

Loved this line :
I have faith in you, I have faith in our love and I know that we would unite someday

also loved the poem lines in the end.

Very well written, behna. keep it up. 👏

thanks for pm'ing.

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