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Posted: 17 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: shabo24

OMG, WONDERFUL WONDERFUL WONDERFUL!!!

Wait, I didn't introuduce myself did I? I'm Shabo! *shakes hand* Call me Shabz! You are a very VERY talented writer! Amazing part! Loved how them mey, thier conversation! Ohhhhh romacne blooming now between Preet and Suki???? Interesting!! LOL do continue!!
Shabz

😳 thank you!!!!! i think im turnin red!
hello there shabo *shakes hand bak* alrite i will call u shabz with ur permission now! im rinki...new here first fic in this section nd im rlly rlly glad that u liked it!!! awww thank you i dnt think im all that good of a writer! haha im glad u liked the meeting nd stuff! well u'll have to see to kno if romance is workin btwn suki nd preet! they haven't "MET" yet face to face at least so we'll see what happens!!
will cont asap! would u like me to pm you wen the nxt part is up??
rinki!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!👏

thank you!!!! im happy that u liked it!
will cont asap!!
look out for it kay?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowww yaar....kiya baat hai rinki.....ur ff rocks.....and i luv the characters in it.....its just awsome...and thanks for the pm.....
i am in luv i am in luv i am luv wid ur ff....can't wait for the next part.........specially...bhoooot....its adorable...
luv iqra
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54

omg love it quickly continue!!!!!!!

i think preet and heer sister are playing a joke on premeer 😛
update quickly!!!!!!!!
Pawani<3
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: blushpink13

wowww yaar....kiya baat hai rinki.....ur ff rocks.....and i luv the characters in it.....its just awsome...and thanks for the pm.....

i am in luv i am in luv i am luv wid ur ff....can't wait for the next part.........specially...bhoooot....its adorable...
luv iqra

lolz thnx a lot iqra...im glad u liked it...haha im glad u like the ppl or else it wouldnt have been fun if u dnt like the ppl ur reading abt huh? ur welcome its no prob ill do it again if you would like me to?
haha nd the fic luvs u bak too 😆 dnt wrry am workin on it wil post it asap lolz yup the bhoot is sum1 adorable lolz
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: pawani

omg love it quickly continue!!!!!!!

i think preet and heer sister are playing a joke on premeer 😛
update quickly!!!!!!!!
Pawani<3

hey dear thnx for the sweet comment! am rlly glad u liked the parts
will cont asap!!
hmm nice prediction you''ll find out if that is the real thing!
will update soon
rinki
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57

hey guys thanks a lot for your comments

well for the last 2 days mi internet wasn't workin so i couldn't post the nxt part
ill post it tomorrow because mi brother is sleepin nd mi comp is in his room he'll be pissed if i wake him up so ill work on it nd post it hopefully tomorrow but cant promise cuz i have another idea and started a story which i wont post till this one is done so mi mind is filled with ideas some for this one nd some for the other one so im trying to write the part nd will post it asap!
keep the comments coming in becuz they make me happy nd tell me what you think of mi story!
good nite [its like 12:38 rite now]
lots of love
rinki :]
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Great can't wait!

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Sunayna

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dnt wrry u wont have to
im workin on it rite now nd will post it real soon!!
rinki :]
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59

Part. 3

Heer screamed when the figure started walking towards them like a zombie. Prem held her and tried to calm her down by rubbing her arm but he was too busy with the bhoot to realize anything else. The three were feeling dread in their stomach at the evil laugh that suddenly burst out from the woman. "AAhhhhhhhhh," the three yelled when the woman looked up showing her face, it was completely white with black lips and blood was dripping down her mouth when she grinned, her teeth were blood red. Her voice came in a hoarse whisper,'boo!!' The lightning was shown behind her from the window. Heer saw a necklace around the 'bhoots' neck and realized it was actually Sukriti. She walked in front of the brothers and said, 'Sukhi ki bachi band kar yeh natak'.

The brothers looked on confused and saw the bhoot push her hair back and grin sheepishly. 'Kya didi acha bala mazaak kharab kardiya tumne!' suki complained while the guys looked on at her shocked and surprised. 'Uff tera mazaak toh kabhi bhi khatam nahin hota, ja jakar apni shakal saaf kar!,' heer said just as the lights came back on. Sukriti nodded and left the three alone, Heer led the brothers downstairs and soon they were chatting about their favorite things.

Sukriti joined them later on dressed in blue jeans and a white kurta, her hair was wet, some strands sticking to her neck and face. She fell on the sofa next to Heer and looked at the three talking about their favorite colors. Preet looked at her angirly still in shock due to her little joke. He got up and walked out leaving the others to look after him. Heer looked at Sukriti who was playing with her necklace and didn't seem to care and hit her lightly. Suki looked at her expression and then got up rolling her eyes.
She searched all the guest rooms but he wasn't there, she searched every place she could think of but was unable to find him anywhere. Finally she decided to check the roof and luckily saw him leaning against the railing looking at the sky, the rain fell on him and lightning was striking some places far away. She walked up to him, he straightened and turned at hearing the noise of her payals. Seeing her he frowned and turned back to look at the dark city being showered by rain droplets. "Hey," suki whispered quietly unwilling to break the peaceful atmosphere around them. She leaned against the railing next to him and lifted her face up closing her eyes, the rain drops showering her. She looked ethereal with the water sliding down her face...to her neck...and down her body. The white kurta was becoming see-through and attracting his eyes to the cloth sticking to her every curve.
"You know something...i love the rain, when i was born the exact moment i started screaming and wailing, it started raining outside...ma aur bauji kehte hain ki vaheguru ne mujhe ashirvaad diya hai, usse din se jab bi main rohti [cry] hoon, baarish shuro ho jati hai...kabhi toh main rohti nahin lekin phir bhi baarish shuro ho jati hai kyunki main sad hoti hoon...mujhe bahut acha lagta hai baarish mein nachna aur khelna, aise lagta hai ki main phir se ek bachi ban jati hoon! It feels like the drops wash my every worry, everything...it only leaves behind happiness and smiles for me...aur main bahut baar bimaar bhi hogayi hoon iss barish ki waja se...ma kuch kehti nahin whenever i get sick because she knows how much i love the rain and being in it...she understands that its my thing...feels like someones calling me...to come out and play in the rain, and every time i find myself standing in the rain or looking outside my room just sitting there for hours...anyways i wanted to aplogize for the bhoot thing. Frankly it was to get di and jiju scared so they would become closer...i didn't know that you were here and when u saw me i just had to scare all of you...it was so funny to hear di scream cuz she's always calm and quiet...anyway im really sorry hope you can forgive me! Now lets start from the beginning, my name is Sukriti...sukhi for di and suki for everyone else! And yes there is a difference, you'll notice when you pronounce it!" She turned to look at him and sticked her hand out for him to shake.
He was looking at her when she was talking and knew that she was right. She looked so calm and peaceful standing in the rain when most girls would scream and run inside because they're makeup would get messed up. This earned her his respect...he was glad she wasn't a girly girl who loved screeching and squealing, he already had to deal with his girlfriends. When she finished, he just looked at for a while and finally shook her hand tightly. "Im Preet...by the way you better know that i will get my revenge," he told her smiling. She looked at him and shook her head as if to say he wouldn't dare...he just looked right back at her. They spent the next 10 minutes getting to know one another...both felt an attraction towards the other. Seeing her shiver, he took of his slightly wet jacket and placed it on her, she looked at him and thanked him through her eyes...he understood.
They decided to leave before they started getting sick. She turned and was walking when she tripped on the wet floor and started falling backwards...she waited for the ground to meet her back and skull but it never came. Instead she felt warm arms around her back and waist...opening her eyes she met Preet's dark brown eyes. Both were lost...his hand on her waist sent shivers down both their backs at the contact...their bodies were touching and both felt the others heat and warmth. They came out of the moment and leaned away instantly missing the others warmth and touch. An awkward silence fell between them as they walked downstairs to their rooms. Both whispered an silent bye and entered their rooms.
He ran to the bathroom and took an hot shower, coming out in grey sweats and a white sleeveless shirt. He fell on his bed and folds his arms under his head. 'hmm woh ladki waise buri nahin hai...soni kudhi hagi yaar par boldi jada hai [srry mi punjabi suks in writing lolz just imagine him speakin punjabi for a sec] aankhein kitni badi badi hain...achi muskurahat bhi hai...sab kuch acha hai usme...ye mujhe kya hogaya hai? kyun main uske bare mein soch raha hoon...uff please dont tell me im starting to fall for in just 15 minutes...no way man!!' he thought outloud and turned on his stomach closing his eyes as her face flashed in front of him...her eyes big and black looking innocently at him. Lets say he wasn't able to sleep that easily. :]
In her room Ms. Suki was sleeping happily...her dreams though were about a certain guy she spoke to a while ago. She kept on dreaming about when he caught her and the electricution that went through her body at the feel of his hands. Her eyes opened and she sat up hugging her knees. "Kya main usse pasand karne lagi hoon? Bas ek mulakat mein aisa ehsaas kyun feel kar rahi hoon main? Nahin i dont like him...no way...right?" she questioned the air around her.
okay pplz thats all...hope ya'll enjoyed and plz comment!
the love is starting btwn S+P but will they admit it??
tc
rinki :]
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Edited by ~Rinki~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG! Great part, Preet and Sukhi!
That was very cute, i can't wait till the next part!

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