FF...ITHEFAQ SE PYAAR{prt4 pg5}COMPLETED FF!!! - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: nandini90

*haila*....shaadi ho gayi??!!!.....omg.....tht was fast enuff....well it shud be i guess...i know its a shrt ff...hehee.....waise..am glad ur bak now!!!!....

and tht was such a cute thing....i mean...prem taking biiig decisions in such shrt span of times......lols....
and now.....not again...the buddha here also.....koi iss taklu ko samjao...tht prem is not a baby tht he doesnt even know how to choose a gurl....haha....
cont soon yaaar....ahev yu planned to updt weekly??!!>.i guess yaa...hehe...
luv nans



hehe... lol... shaadi ho gayi... hehe... but door door tak no suhaag raat... ooops*** i shudnt hav said that... prem acted on impulse...and good for him... kya karu taklu ka jaan??/ tumhi kuch bataao...
yea... m thinking weekly wud b beta... this one i hope to finsh off befor i go...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: fijiana

hey nice update yess shaadi ho gayee but do update soon



sure wil update soon.... wait a bit... wil b bak sooooooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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tooooooo goooooooooooood dear mujhe apne ff padha padha ke paagal kar diya hmmmmmmmmm
ok dear do cont ssonn i will be waiting
very nice a big round of applause for u
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome continue soon....👏🏻
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

tooooooo goooooooooooood dear mujhe apne ff padha padha ke paagal kar diya hmmmmmmmmm

ok dear do cont ssonn i will be waiting
very nice a big round of applause for u



🥰🥰🥰... haila... thanggguuu.... hehe... wil update soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooji123456789

awesome continue soon....👏🏻



wil surely update soooooon.... wait ma dear a bit
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Loved both parts and am looking forward to next part!
Continue soon!
?xXx?
Sunayna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanggguuu iqbals4ever and sunayana
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys.... next part is up

PART THREE




prem tried a lot to get out of the house and comfort heer... she was alone in the road. he knew he couldnt just tell his parents about their marriage right then... he needed time to break it... they may get angry... till then he had to find a place for heer to stay safely till then... he had promised her happiness and his presence... he couldnt do anything just now... she would understand, he was sure...

in the evening, prem managed to booby trap his family with a lame excuse and shook of preet who wanted to join prem to go out... prem rushed his car to the cab to see heer was sleeping... she must not have eaten anything, while he was having his mother's hand made delicious food... his mum wasnt as healthy as before but she wanted to make lunch for him.... he felt bad for heer. he paid the cabby and took heer's bag into his car. he took her into his arms and that must have made heer wake up. she opened her eyes and were startled to se herself in prem's hands...

prem: kuch mat kehna....

heer smiled... he had a way with things.. and she liked it... he placed her in the side seat and drove. she was becoming confused.

heer: hum ghar nahi jaa rahe??? tumne baat ki??? bauji nahi maana???

prem explained to her that her was scared to tell his bauji just like that. the man is very hot-tempered and he doesnt want to make his father angry the minute he came home. he kknew it was a lame thing to say. he assured her that he would break it to the family soon. meanwhile, she could stay in their hotel.

prem drove upto a grand hotel with name JUNEJA HOTELS... he booked a suite room for her. he took her bag up and lead her. he locked the door to the room after they were safely in. the room was more like an apartment minus the kitchen... there was the hotel restaurant for that.

heer sat down on the bed and opened her hair. prem felt bad...

prem: heer...muje maaf kar do.... tume iss tarah...

heer smiled and stood up. she walked upto him and took his hand...

heer: maafi mangne ki zaroorat hi nahi hai... main samajh sakti hoon....

prem tried to smile back too... but couldnt. he just grimaced... unknowingly his hand went upto her face... he touched her cheeks... she felt his touch and her eyes closed... she liked his feel...

suddenly prem's fone buzzed and he took it out... preet's call...

prem grimaced again..."haan haan... main aa raha hoon... half an hour... stop freaking idiot... m coming... okay...okay!!!"

prem turned to heer with apology in his eyes...

heer: koi baat nahi... tum chale jaao... main adjust kar loongi...

prem: main raat ko aaunga...

heer longed for that to happen... but she knew it was difficult for him... she shook her head...

heer: nahi prem... aaj hi tum london se aaye ho... tumare ghar se nikalna mushkil hoga aur sabi shak

karenge... main reh sakti hoon... tum fikr mat karo...

prem left with tears in his eyes... but he was grateful too...even if he really wanted to come over at night and stay with her, he knew it was difficult task to accomplish... he left with a heavy heart...
both wept that night...
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for weeks this happened... prem worked full time in the hotel heer was living... being his family's hotel, he was the MD... but that dint help him stay with her... but he made excuses to go out and took heer with him. but mostly they were seperate... they talked all night through phone... but missed each other's presence like hell...

heer, who was at first composed and calm about the whole thing... she was starting to get annoyed... she couldnt bear his distance with her... she became increasingly sour...nearly a month later, when prem called heer in the morning she lost her patience..

"helloooo...", prem crooned over the phone... he was becoming increasinngly romantic... that must have triggered off heer...

heer: muje abhi ek baat bataao... tum muje ghar le jaa rahe ho ki nahi???

prem was startled at her stern tone...

prem: of course jaan... aise kyu pooch rahe ho???

heer: mujse ye judaai aur sahi nahi jaati... kuch bhi karo... muje kal se tumare saath tumare ghar me rehna hai

prem was totally freaked out...

prem: kal??? but heer.... main ky kahu sabko???

heer; muje nahi pata... tum muje le chalo nahi toh main hi kuch karke tumare ghar main ghus jaaungi... ab ye doori aur sahi nahi jaati mujse...

prem: main koshish karunga jaan... main bhi chahta hoon ki tum mere saath hi raho... par haalat hi kuch aise hai ki...

heer: tum sabko ataao ki main tumare dosth hoon...

prem: nahi kar sakta... unfortunately i talk to preet about everything... he knows my friends... all y friends and also that i dont have girl friends...

heer made a strangling noise... she wasnt going to take no for an answer this time...

heer: okay tum kuch mat karo... main hi kuch karti hoon.... sur jab tum muje kal apne ghar main dekhoge toh chaunk mat jaana...

saying this heer cut the call.... she started thinking... from wat prem had told her, his mother was not well... she couldnt do the house works much... even though the juneja parivaar was one of the richest in the country, they dont have many workers in the house... she was struck with an idea!
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heer took a cab later that afternoon to the juneja household... she took that particular time because only gayatri, prem's mother would be there. she rang the bell. an elderly man came and opened the door... he must be the man who looked after the household jobs... ramu kaka... prem had told her there was only a gardener and a man to look after the house... a girl comes daily to clean the house and that was it.

heer: kya main maa ji se mil sakti hoon???

the man nodded and told her to sit inside. in a few minutes an elderly but graceful woman came down. heer stood, gayatri motioned her to sit and she herself sat.

gayatri: kyu aayi ho beti???

heer hesitated... she stood up again...

gayatri: khadi kyu ho??? bet jaao...

heer: nahi maa ji... main kuch maangne aayi hoon... aur uske liye main apke saamne bet nahi sakti

gayatri: kya maangne aayi ho??? aur kaun ho tum???

heer: mera naam heer hai... is duniya main akeli hoon... {she thought, sorry prem}... main ek kaam ki talaash kar rahi thi toh kisi ne bataaya ki yaha ek cook ki zaroorat hai... maine cooking courses kar li hai...

gayatri took into heer... she was very innocent... she knew she could trust her... she liked this girl with petite figure and wide eyes... she felt a kind of closeness to her...

gayatri: oh... sab mere haath ke khana pasand karte hai... isiliye kabhi ek cook ko rakhne ki baat sochi nahi... main chahti hoon ki kisi ko rakh le jo achche se khana banaaye... ek kaam karo, kal sunday hai na??? tum aake lunch bana do... agar sabko pasand aate hai toh main tumhe rakh loongi...

heer: jee maa... sorry...

gayatri smiled: maa ji hi bulaao beti...

heer smiled too and took leave.
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NEXT DAY...

prem was very irritated... it was sunday... he was asked to stay home till lunch that day by his mother. it was almost lunch time. he was trying to get heer on phone since early morning... but he was sick listening to the "switched off " message.. he just wanted to get out of the house and find wat hapened to her... was she ill??? he was so worried...

"PREM...neeche aa jao beta... lunch ka time ho gaya", gayatri called him...

he walked downstairs in a grim expression... everyone were already seated across the table... the tale was filled with food... different dishes... all those he liked and yet have never seen together before... he wondered how much strain his mom had put in to make it all...

prem: maa... aap itni kyu kaam kar li??? aapko toh rest ki zaroorat hai na???

gayatri smiled: ye sab maine nahi banaya...

everyone together: toh phir...???

gayatri: pehle khaa lo... uske baad batayenge...

they all ate the food... it was more than delicious... in a very less time all the plates were emptied and everyone were licking their fingers...

preet: khana toh lajawab hai maaa

harman: haan bilkul.. kisne banaya??? kisi ne bhi ho uske haath main jaadoo hai

lalit: bataao gayatri... kisne banaya ye sab???

prem was still thinking over the taste of the food he had just eaten... it was ethereal... just like heer's smile... heer....

gayatri: HEER..

prem was startled that his mom took out his thoughts and said it aloud... he was iin even more shock as the lady of his dreams came over and stood in front of them.

gayatri: is ne banaya ye sab...




...to b contd...
teme if u r shocked like prem... hehe.... comments dalo jaldiiiii

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