Jane tu ya jaane na- FF Update( pg 26) - Page 19

Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93

hey just read ur ff
great story, its very interesting,
i wonder who the green eyed girl is lol
do continue soon

i'm writing it as we speak..

Update 13: takleef

New Entry

Prem: Sonam Shah?

Sonam: Prem!

She goes over and hugs him tightly.

Sonam: kaisa ho tum?

Prem: main to teek ho magar tum yaha kya karahai ho, last time I heart you were in Australia.

Arman comes over and gives Sonam a hug.

Sonam: Bhai

Arman:mere choti si guddya.

Heer is watching them curiously and wondering if she should come and introduce herself.

Gayatri: aap sab janta hai, ka hume party raki hai, magar aap nahi jaanta ka kis liya, yeh party raki ha. Mera beta Prem aaj jawan ho cho ka hai. Vo sab chul samal saktha hai, whether business ho ya parviaar or badle mein vo kabhie kuch nahi mangta. Aur aaj mein yeh announce karna chata ho ka.

Prem beta yaha aao.

Prem looks at her confused and goes up to the stand.

Gayatri: Arman aur Sonam, yaha aao please.

yeh dono humari business partner ki beta aur beti hai, the shah's.

For 2o years, we have been working close together aur aaj mujhe khushi horahi hai yeh announce karne ki, ka is dosti rishta dare mein badal jayege.

Arman, Prem and Sonam look at Gayatri confused.

Gayatri: mein yeh chate hoon ka Sonam is ghar ki bahu bane, Prem ki biwi.

Sonam looks a bit take aback but returns with a smile.

Prem looks at his mom with a mixture of emotion.

Heer stands there frozen to her spot, unable to move. She feels as if she has been paralyzed. Blood seems to rushing throughout her body.

Heer looks at prem but Prem does not return the look.

The crowd starts to cheer but Prem is unable to react.

Heer feels that she should not be here and thus runs out the door.

She is running so fast that she doesn't realize that she has bumped into someone.

Preet: Heer hum kyun itne jaldi mein ho, marathon race karna jarahai ho.

Heer: nahi mein voh…vohh

Preet spots the tears in Heer's eyes and his playful expression turns into a concerned look.

Preet: are you ok??

Heer: mein teek ho, I just have to get home, I'm late

Preet: kana kaka jao na.

Heer:nahi mein teek ho, shukriya

Preet: ok bue heer

Heer runs outside and breaks down.

Heer: yeh mera saat kyu hota hai, mein kya pyar ki layak nahi hoon. kya koi karabhi ha mujhe mein.

usna mera saat yeh saab kyu kiya.jaab vo jaanta tha ka uski shaadi paka hoye thi, to mera saat itne dokha kyun.

She doesn't realize that a car is rushing towards and honking the horn.

Just before the car is about to squish, someone holds onto to Heer's hand and pulls her out of the way.

Heer opens up her swollen eyes and looks at the dark figure.

Prem: Heer!

tum yaha, what are you doing, you almost got yourself killed. I can't keep saving you.

Heer: please meherbane karka mujhe mat bachao.Tum khushi hogi

Prem: yeh sab kyu kehrahai ho.

Heer: sach hi to kehrahi hoon, tumhe koi fark nahi parta agar mein jeeyu ya maru.

Prem puts his hand in front of heer's mouth.

Prem: please don't say that, why are you crying?

Heer: tumhe kya?

Prem: I was under the impression that we were good friends and that I could talk to you.

Heer: you were right and I was wrong..to want more.. look at you and look at me, what was I thinking.

Prem: sedi si bhaat, kyu bhaat ko guma ka jarahi ho.

Heer: jab tum jaante ho to kyu itne sawal

Prem: kya

Heer: kuch bhi nahi

Prem holds onto her tightly,so tight that red marks appear on heer's arms

Prem:nahi batana paraga

Heer: Kuch bhi nahi ha

Prem: Heer(shouting)

He pulls her closer and look into her eyes with intensity.

Prem: why are you backing away from what you want?

Heer; I don't know what I want?

Prem: you do and you are running away from it.

Heer: I hate you, leave me alone

The words sting Prem like a bee.

He lets go of Heer so fast that she almost loses balance.

Prem starts walking in the other direction. A car is coming towards him

Heer: Prem…car..move please

She starts running towards him and pushes him.

Heer: aab meina tum bachaya.

Prem: kyu???

Heer: kyuki mein tumsa pyar karthi hoon

Prem looks at her unable to speak.

Prem: I……love you too

Prem pulls her into a tight embrace. Slowly he slides his hand down to her waist and tightens his grip.

Heer is melting away. He reaches up towards her lips and moves his hand, brushing her wet lips with his hand

He comes close; about to kiss her but instead he reaches for her cheek and kisses her.

Heer is afraid of all the feelings.

She thinks: I don't know what tomorrow holds but tonight, I want to save this moment forever.

Her tears fall onto Prem's cheek. Prem goes to her eyes and kisses her tear.

Prem: emmm namkin, bilkul tumhare taara

Prem gives his mischievous smile again.

Prem phone rings and he goes to answer it.

Arman: Hey..kaha ho tum man

Prem: ahh just outside, ya I'm coming don't worry.

He turns off his phone and smiles again looking back at Heer.

he whispers:tskk tskk tskk, bechari Heer.

-END

comments: ewwww ya sorry for this chapter sucking so much, but its because I haven't updated in months and didn't really know what I wanted to write..No precap for this chapter, sorry for it being so short.

salma u decided to continue this one...i'm glad....good update...poor heer.....but i didnt get the last part.....why did prem whisper -bechari heer.....is he playing around with her?

its been long time thats why i'm asking - is this the ff where Heer loved rahul but rahul loves meher and heer works for prem?

Originally posted by: angel82

salma u decided to continue this one...i'm glad....good update...poor heer.....but i didnt get the last part.....why did prem whisper -bechari heer.....is he playing around with her?

its been long time thats why i'm asking - is this the ff where Heer loved rahul but rahul loves meher and heer works for prem?

thats the one

Hi
how r u sis?
i just read this whole ff its awesome.last update was great but i m lil confused is prem playing around with heer?😕.plzzzz continue soon.
add me to the pm list Thanks.
luv
Fatima

ok big big big big big apologies I am last
ask anyone I am know for that all the time especially sandy LOL
amazing (thats my famous word) I luved the whole chapter Prem and Heer declaring their love
awwwwwwwwwwwww

~aashifa~

thanks guys..

wow.........you decided to update after such a long time........

hy nice update bt im a lil bit confused by prem's last dialog y he said BEECHARI HEER any waz awesome update nd this time plz dnt take long time 2 update next part do update asap