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Posted: 17 years ago
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Its early morning..
heer opens her eyes and stares to listen that it is raining outside.....
she lies there thinking about the night before how prem kissed her on the cheeks..😊
heer gives a big smile and blushes under the blanket when she realises....
heer-OMG!
not the clothes...they all going to be wet by now!
she puts on her shoes and a robe to cover herself...
and runs down the stairs fast as she can to go outside to get the clothes before they become soaking wet...
prem comes out of his room to see why heer was shouting...he looks at heer running down the stairs and runs after her thinking theres a problem
prem-HEER!
WAIT!..
prems gets a hold of heer and asks her whats the matter
prem-whats wrong...where you going?
heer-the clothes..out....i need to get....let me go prem
he lets go realising hes holding onto her..😉
prem-i'll come with you
they run outside and grabs the clothes as fast as they can....
heer-quick prem we need to hurry!
on the slippery floor heer twists her ankle and before she could fall prem holds on to her....they both stare at eachother...blushing heer doesn't know what to do she moves her face and walks away....
prem is standing behind heer and her arm pulling heer towards him....confused heer tries to get away but everytime she tries prems grip becomes stronger...
heer-prem....the clothes...rain...please😊
prem-shhhhh.....heer forget about them...
prems hold closer and kisses heer forehead...
heers heart starts to beat really fast now....she closes her eyes..😳😳
prem then slowly starts kissing her cheeks and slowly kisses her neck....
heer pushes him away and turns her face away...😳😳😳

guys you gona have to wait till next tym to know what happens next😆

hope you liked my fanfic😃
please comment whether its good or not...



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tanyaaaa26 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its really nice so when u gonna update next huh? 😆 i really wanna now more so do update soon dear 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank you 😳
well your going to have to wait... 😉 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey i liked it but which one is it i mean the first part when prem kisse her she's remembering. luved it
luv iqra
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Posted: 17 years ago
#5
very nicely written..please continue! 😊
insomnia thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#6
rele gud 👏 ---hey dosn't the creators of the show read these threads???it's way way btr than the crap they rite...
P.Kamaljit.Sean thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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vey nice pz continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice ff... 😉
continue soon... 😛
will be waiting 😃
keep up the good work 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow another ff,great atleast ff mein we can imagine premeer romancing each other,so please please do update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice one yaar plz update soon...i m waiting ...plz do it soooooooon... 😃
this is for u... 👏

wid luve
PARTH 😊

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