After Heer find the truth ... my version

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Hey friends,

Some haywire thoughts, some unsaid words, some wishes, and some expectation that we all have in our hearts now that we know heer knows the truth. So here is my version of what will happen when Heer finds the truth.


Heer cannot believe what she just saw. She wants to run to Prashant, hold his collar and ask him why he played this dirty game with her. Why he used her like this and destroyed her life. But all she could do was drag herself out of the room and from the house, for she was not even able to breathe in a house full of monsters.

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She is walking on the road, lost and disgusted when images of Prem flashes in her mind. All those times when he had tried to tell her about the truth and she had soo madly refused to listen to him, and degraded him and his sincerity. Tears of pain and guilt rolls down her eyes, which she doesn't even bother to wipe. Flashes of sangeet crosses her mind when Prem was hysterically holding prashant and asking for the truth and when he had said MM is not well and this is all a game of two people with the same face. She remembers how Prem was humiliated, and how no one including her believed in his truth, and tears start rolling even more fiercely. And as if her feet refused to support her any further, she almost falls on the ground. But right at that moment two strong and powerful hands supported her and protected her from falling. She looks up to see her savior, only to find Prem – her Prem, the man she had loved all her life, holding her strongly, looking deeply in her eyes. His own eyes, sad and wet. The redness of his constant pain and tears was evident in those hazy eyes, and she closes her eyes at the sight of this pain soo evident in his look.

"aap …" was all that she could say in the midst of her overflowing emotions.
"I saw you leaving the house and followed you … Rano told me you were going to Manmeet's place and I didn't want to leave you alone." And for the first time, Heer breathed a sigh of relief. Thank god, Prem was here, for all she wanted at this moment was to be held by him.
"mujhay maaf kar dijiyay …" her hand was still in his and she looks deep in his eyes … guilt evident from her expressions. "please mujhay maaf kar dijiyay. Main nay aap ki kisi baat pay yaqeen nahi kiya. Har baar aap ko bura bhala kaha. Aap say nafrat ki, aap ko jhoota bola … janay kaisay kaisay ilzaam lagayay aap pay …. Main .. main …." She choked with overflowing emotions and those unsaid words …
"nahi Heer … mafi tu mujhay mangni chahiyay … main nay tumharay liyay itni mushkilain khari kar deen … agar main wo sab na kehta .." and before he could say any further, she places her hand on her lips. They eyes meet and this time their feelings were more prominent than ever.
"kuch na kahiyay …. Aap agar wo sab na kartay tu mujhay sach kabhi na pata chalta. Kash mein aap ki baat pehlay maan laity to aap ko sab kay samnay wo zillat na uthani parti …" Heer breaks down and starts crying like a baby. Her falling tears takes away all the remaining senses of Prem, for he couldn't see her broken and shattered like this. All of the sudden he pulls her towards him and she willing steps into his secure and warm arms. Moving her arms around his waist, she holds him tight and close, and cries like a baby. Her tears wetting his shirt and almost touching his chest. He could feel her trembling body and despaired emotions, and without further ado, moves his arms around her to hold her tight and close to him. This was the first time she was truly in his arms, and he felt his world completing with her nearness. His own eyes gets wet and tears of pain to have almost lost her, and happiness to have found her trust back starts rolling down his beautiful eyes. He closes his eyes and tightens his grip around her further. She felt his affection and love and closes her eyes with the satisfaction of being loved with such purity and chastity.

For some long, silent, and passionate moments they stayed in each others arms, and then Prem spoke.
"mein tum say bohat pyar karta hoon Heer … zindagi adhoori hai tumharay bina .. har khushi tum say hai … main kabhi bhi tumhein dukh nahi daina chahta tha .. kal jo bhi hwa .." but before he could complete, she silences him with her fingers on his lips.
"aaj tak aap nay kaha aur mein nay suna, lekin aaj mein kehti hoon Prem … mein nay zindagi mein aik hi insaan say pyar kiya hai, aur wo aap hain …." She says will utmost sincerity and truthfulness. For indeed all her life she had waited and loved only him. Her confession came like a life savior for Prem. He couldn't believe she was saying that, but today no one was able to stop Her. She knew Prem would marry Ash tomorrow, and may be this is not the time to tell him what he means to her, but she had to say it. For these feelings that she had for him were his amaanat and she had to do full justice to them. "meri har khushi aap say hai, har ehsaas aap say hai. Aap hain tu mein hoon, warna mera koee wajood nahi …" she was lost in her own world, and saying as if was under a spell, where she couldn't think anything else. Prem's heart soared with happiness and love for her and he moved his hand cupping her face in his palms ..
"mein bhi tum say bohat pyar karta hoon Heer … bohat bohat pyar … mar jaoon ga mein tumharay baghair …" he says with all the passion in the world and this word brought Heer to a standstill …
"khabardaar jo aisy baat phir kabhi ki" she said while placing her hand on his lips … "aap say pehlay mein mar jaoon gi. Hum milain na milain, hum rahain na rahain, hamari chahat hamaray dilon main hamesha rahay gi …. Mein hamesha aap ko chahoon gi … hamesha ….." her voice depicted love and passion and he pulls her in his arms again, this time with the pain of the thought of his marriage to Ash tomorrow. How will he handle it? what will he do? How will he convince Lalit Juneja to get him married to Heer? How? Soooo many questions crosses his mind in a flash of a second but for now he pushed them away, for this was the moment he had waited for soooo long, and for now, all he wanted was to live this moment and feel the love of one person who is not only her true love, but his dewaangi.

Hope u all enjoyed it ... please do leave ur comments.

Love, Kashish 😊




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Posted: 17 years ago
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splendid job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
keep it up
luv iqra
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omgg wowww...

dis was beautifull..had me emotionally overwhelmed..waisey even i am expecting sth on dese lines to happen..its gona be perfect and totali apt
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey kashish it waz just superb , fantastic i m soooooo touched by ur writing that while reading i waz imagining everything in front of my eyes.. its fantastic job yaar.. lemme noe if u write more.. gud job yaar..kep it up.. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: blushpink13

splendid job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
keep it up
luv iqra



thanks iqra ... i am soo glad u liked it. 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sidrah fariq

omgg wowww...

dis was beautifull..had me emotionally overwhelmed..waisey even i am expecting sth on dese lines to happen..its gona be perfect and totali apt



glad u liked it soo much sidrah .... but how i wish something like this happens .... oh i am soooo dying to see heer in prem's arms ... confessing her love for him 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Parth Garewal

hey kashish it waz just superb , fantastic i m soooooo touched by ur writing that while reading i waz imagining everything in front of my eyes.. its fantastic job yaar.. lemme noe if u write more.. gud job yaar..kep it up.. 👏



awww i am touched by ur words P .... sure i will pm you when i will write something else ....

glad u enjoyed it .... thanks for ur lovely words. 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: thesaint148



glad u liked it soo much sidrah .... but how i wish something like this happens .... oh i am soooo dying to see heer in prem's arms ... confessing her love for him 😳


oh no u r fabulous yaar...dis was superb..i dont fink even the creatives wud be able to go into so muh detail as a matter of fact...
and yes dis is the most appropriate tyme for both of em to break down...both emotionally weak, goin thru a tuff tyme..it will be another cene in the history of kis desh if da creatives pull it off...
oh btw u can call me siddy
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Posted: 17 years ago
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o yes siddy ... thats so true .,.. this is the time they both confess and breakdown and just let their emotions and feelings rule over their mind for some time ... let love play its part.

but u r soo right, i have so high hopes from the creatives as well ... i hope they give us a mindblowing scene with every emotion captured perfectly .. sach mein history hi ho ga wo scene!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏👏👏

Beautiful scene...I wish something in these lines happens in actual...It has everything, Prem's character being retrieved, Heer confession and PH milan...

But yaar us khoosat bhudda ko maaro goli na...I am so annoyed with that guy now...



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