Earth's Final Conflict a Prem Heer sci fi FF ( Chapter 8 on page 18) - Page 9

Thanks for the update. Looks like prem and heer are on for some major trouble but prem. Is very intelligent he will definitely find a way out. It shall be interesting to read ph adventures... Bye and keep updating. Really lob ur work

Originally posted by: -secretlove-

Thanks for the update. Looks like prem and heer are on for some major trouble but prem. Is very intelligent he will definitely find a way out. It shall be interesting to read ph adventures... Bye and keep updating. Really lob ur work

Thanks for the comment. Yes, Prem and Heer's journey will be interesting.

Thanks to all of my readers, because of you this story have crossed 1000 views. You all give love to all of my stories. Your support always inspire me.

Awesome fab update

Originally posted by: preciousrose26

Awesome fab update

Love prem heer scene and their convo

Waiting for next part

Thanks for the update link

Thanks for liking Prem Heer scene. I will try to update soon.

Hi Shuridh

Ch 5 pg 11

Amazing update. 😃
The dialogues are superb.

So Premeer are likely to be framed - now it's a question of if they have the intelligence to figure out the weapon may be faulty. - I mean it is according to the guy (forgot d name) who handed to Prem.

It's nice how you projected thoughts running when there was convo going on btw PH.
That's kinda cute 😆 and nice.

Oooh what else I could say ... I think either Prem or Heer will realize on time before using weapon it's not gona work or they may solve the issue w/o using it.
I dunno how you'll arrange the scene but I'm guessing it's likely to go in that direction.

😆

Let's see if I'm right.

Originally posted by: mijanur

Thanks to all of my readers, because of you this story have crossed 1000 views. You all give love to all of my stories. Your support always inspire me.

we love the positive attitude you carry when you interact with fans 🤗
That's very mature - keep that up.

Originally posted by: AASUS

Hi Shuridh

Ch 5 pg 11

Amazing update. 😃
The dialogues are superb.

So Premeer are likely to be framed - now it's a question of if they have the intelligence to figure out the weapon may be faulty. - I mean it is according to the guy (forgot d name) who handed to Prem.

It's nice how you projected thoughts running when there was convo going on btw PH.
That's kinda cute 😆 and nice.

Oooh what else I could say ... I think either Prem or Heer will realize on time before using weapon it's not gona work or they may solve the issue w/o using it.
I dunno how you'll arrange the scene but I'm guessing it's likely to go in that direction.

😆

Let's see if I'm right.

Thanks for liking this chapter Athi.

Originally posted by: AASUS

we love the positive attitude you carry when you interact with fans 🤗
That's very mature - keep that up.

Thanks to all of you. Deshians are one of the most decent and friendly fandom in the whole india forums, I can tell this on the basis of my experience in if for seven years.

Chapter 6 will be updated now