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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks.
Posted: 7 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: AASUS

oh wow Happy Anniversary Meher and Preet 🥳

Shuridh I love this comedy + mystery. Obviously a set up of Preet to chase Rajveer out.
But Meher could have been very straight with her sister instead of going about the round about way of making Preet chase this guy out.

Anyhow this is a fun story 😆 omg the car scene and clueless Rajveer and Meher's replies are hilarious 😆😆

You're too good at writing stories Shuridh - really awesome you're. woah What a Treat!!!

Can't wait to see what is gona happen next.

Though I could see from the way Preet was reacting to the inspector it was a set up - until that moment I didn't figure that out. You kept it very mysterious up until that point. Great job of keeping readers guessing 👏

oh my I wanna know what will be the next scene 😆

Thanks for the review and compliment.
Preet would create more drama.
Posted: 7 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: sadiaharshiti

Great work 👍🏼

Will wait for ur nxt update

Thanks for the review, I will try my best.
Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Part 2 will be updated today.
Posted: 7 years ago
#15

You belong to me

Chapter 2:

"Kaunsa sharat? a desperate Rajveer asked Preet.

"Pahele ye baat tumhare dimag mein dal lo ki Meher sirf mera hein, aur iss liye tum usse shadi karne ka baat bhul jao. Preet told Rajveer.

" Wo to mein bahgut paheli samaj gaya ho , tum kaho to mein passport pane ke baad aglei flight se LA laut jaoonga. Rajveer told Preet.

" Nahi mein nahi chahatu kit um jao, tum to shadi ke din mein jaoge. Preet informed Rajveer.

"To itne din mein kya karoonga? A confused Rajveer asked Preet.

" Tum mere aur meher ke saat gharoge, hume ek driver ka bahut jaroorat hein. Preet told RaJveer in a sweet voice.

"Isska matlab ye bhi hein ki mein Heer ko kutch nahi batangooa. Rajveer asked Preet.

"Ha. Preet smiled at Rajveer after saying that.

"Thick hain boss mera aur mera footi kismat. Rajveer dejectedly told Preet.

Rajveer then took a leave from Preet and Meher and left them alone.

"Preet wo ladka jiska accident hoa hain wo tumhara dost hain na? A curious meher asiked Preet.

"Ha, wo mera dost hain, aur tum ye bhi samaj chuki ho ki jo bhi main kya wo ek natak tha, Rajveer ko tumse shadi karne se rookne ke liye. Preet informed meher.

Meher felt overwhelmed with emotion and hugged her lover.

"Preet ye sab tumne kab plan kiya? meher asked Preet.

"Kal raat mein prem bhai se baat kiarte waqt.

Flashback:

"Preet tu mujhe pahele kyun nahi bataya ki tu aur Meher eik dusre se payar karta hain. Aab dekh Meher ki wshaddi thick ho gaya aur pura situation kitna complicate ho gaya. Prem told Preet.

"Bhaiya main aapko ye baat batnai wala tha, tabhi bhabi ki bachpan ki diost America se tapak pare aur bhabi ne unse Meher ka sahadi fix kar di. Preet informed his brother.

"Jo hogaya to hogaya. Tera bhabi bahut ziddi hain, wo asani se Meher se Rajveer ka shadi todne se raaji nahi hoga. Hume kutch aisa karnma hoga jisse tera bhabhi majboor ho jay Rajveer se Meher ka rishta todne ke liye. Prem remarked.

"Bhaiya mera dimag mein ek hatke plan hain, lekin iske liye aap ka thoda help lage ga. Preet told Prem.

"kaisa help? Prem asked his brother.

"Bhaiya aapka college ka dost haina Yuvraj bhaiya jo ihaka ACP hain unka thoda madat lage ga. Preet commented.

"Wo sab ka intezam mein kar langoo na, aab tera plan bata? Prem asked Preet.

"Bhaiya plan ye hain ki.. Preet told Prem about his plan.

Flashback end

"Wah Preet tum to bahut shatir nikle , aab kya hoga? Meher asked Preet while hugging him.

"Aab hum date karenge shadi ke agle din tak aur shaddi ke din tum dekhogi mera plan ka aasli kamal.Preet told Meher lovingly.

In Wedding day

" Preet tum kaha chale gaye the mere bhai. Shadi tumhara hain lekin sari rasam ka taklif mujhe uthane par raha hain. Ye dekho subhasae logone hadi ragarte mera kya haal kar diya hain.Please Preet aab to mujhe mera passporet mujhe lauta do, mujhe LA ka next flight pakadni hain. Rajveer pleaded to Preet.

"Main tumhe tumhara passport lauta sakto hoon, lekin ek sharat pe ki tum mera aur meher ka honeymoon ka sara intejam karoge. Preet told Rajveer .

"Boss rtumhara sari sharat mujhe manjoor hain,aab to mujhe mera passport lauta do. Rajveer told Preet.

"Ye lo. Preet gave Rajveer the passport. Rajveer did not waste single moment after getting back his passport he rapidly escaped from Maan house.

After 15 minutes of Rajveer's disappearing from Maan house, Heer noticed that. She was really tensed as she could not find Rajveer anywhere in the house. She was feeling anxious.

Heer saw her husband Prem was enjoying misti doi. She went to him.

"Prem tum misti doi kha rahe ho? Heer asked Prem.

"Tum bhi na Heer kamnal karte ho0 shadi ka mahal mein main misti doiu nahi kahonga to kiya karalla ka juice peyoonga . An irritated Prem told his wife.

"Sunho na Rajveer kohi nahi mil raha he,mujhe lagti hain wo bhag gaya. Heer told Prem.

"Kya dulha shadi se bhag gaya! Prem pretened to be surprised. He knew Rajveer would leave today as Preet told him about the whole thing.

"dhere se balo Prem. Sono na tumhara jo dost haina ACp unko kaho na ki Rajveer dodhonde ne kew liye. Heer requested Prem.

"Heer tumhe kya lagta hain ye sab itna asan hain. Woe k ACP hain wosko aur bhi jaroori kam hain . Main use nahi kehe sakata ho kisi aise insane ko dhonde ne ke liye jinhone aapni hi shadi se bhag gya. Prem told her in a nonsense tone.

"Aab hamari pareiwar ka kya hoga, kitni badnami hogi hamari pariwar ka. Logo ne kaise kaise baat karenge. Heer told herself.

"Aab soach ne se kiya faida hain. Mein topahelei tumhe kaha tha ye ladka mujhe thick nahi lag raha hain, lekin tumne mujhe chup karaya ye kaheke ye tumhara bachpan ka dost hain, Usa se aya hua NRI hain, aacha kamata hain wagra wagara. Aarhe tumhe to tabhi sabdhan ho janai chahi te jab uss ladke parents shadi se anane ke liye mana kardiya tha. Prem sternly told Heer.

Preet saw his brother-giving lecture to his bhabhi. He realized that , this was the time for his appearance.

"Bhaiya bhabi maine pandit america se le aya ho akhir dulha qamerica se aya hua hain usase bhi to mantra samaj aane chaiye, phoolo ka aur ghadi ka bhi maine intejam kar diya hain. After telling that to his sister in law Preet moved away little.

"Dekha Heer mera bhai kitna kaam kar raha hain Meher ke shadi ke liye , woose to abhi bhi pata nahi hain wooska sari mehanat bekar hain kyunki dulha jo tumhara bachpan ka dost hai wo shadi se bhag gaya. Prem told Heer in a dramatic tone. Before Heer could say something Preet reappeared again infront of them.

"Bhabhi aap mujhe ye batyae Rajveer kaha hain, aadh ghante se mein unko nahi dekh raha ho? Preet asked Heer.

"Rajveer wshadi se bhag gaya. Prem informed Preet.

"Kya! Rajveer shadi se bhag gaya mere sari mehanat bekar ho gaya. Wo NRI pandit to mujhe English mein gali degi, m,ein aap phoolwalo kya kahonga aur car company ko kya jawab donga.

Ye sab to choriye bachari Meher ke dil mein kya bit rahi hogi, bacheri ki sare sapne tood gaya. Aap ka pariwar ka kitna badnami hoga.

Baatye bhabi aap ki pariwar ka ijjat bachane ke liye mein kya karoo. Preet told Heer in a desperate voice. Prem gave him an impressed look as Prem was highly satisfied with Preet's acting .

"Iss pariwar ke ijjat bachane ke liye sirf ek hi rasta hein. Wo hein ki Meher ki shadi hogi aaj hi hogi , issi mandap mein hogi, lekin kisi aur ladke saat. Samaj gaya Preet. Prem told Preet.

"Ha bhaiya mein aachi tara se samaj gaya ho. After giving his brother a smiling look Preet left the place. His job was done.

"Tumhara bhai kaisa rahega? Heer asked Prem.

"Aab wo bechara Rajveer kaha se dhodnega? Prem asked Heer in a surprised tone.

"Nahi meri kahena ka wo matlab nahi tha. Mein ye kahe rahi thi ki tumhare bhai se kahona mere behen se shadi karne ke liye. Heer requested Prem.

"Kya mera bhai Preet ka rishta tumhare behen Meher ke saat? Prem again gave her a surprised look.

"Dekho agar Preet ka shadi Meher se hogaya to tum dono bhai, aur hum dono behene ek saat rahenge. Sab log saat rahenge, aur acche rahenge. Heer tried to convince Preet.

"Ye idea bura nahi hein iss tara do bhai hein, woos tara do behen hein, sablok saat mein milkar rahenge. Prem agreed with his wife.

" Ha wo hi to mein kahe rahi ho. Iss liye please aapne bhai se kaho Meher se shadi karne ke liye. Heer again requested Prem.

" Lekin mein uska bada bhai ho mein kaise wose ye baat karo. Prem told Heer in a helpless tone.

"Thick hain main hi Preet se kahonga tum bas mujhe support karna. Heer told Prem.

"Aab hoyi na baat, saach mein Preet ka dimag ka tariff karna hoga. Prem told himself in his mind.

On the other hand Heer was searching for Preet and she finally found him.

After noticing Heer Preet went to her.

"Bhabhi aap chinta maat kijye aaj nahi to kaal mein woos Rajveer ko dhoonke aap ke samne le aaonga. Preet told Heer.

"Woose chodo Preet. Tum ho na Meher ke liye. Heer told preet.

"Mein, main kutch samjha nahi bhabhi. Preet again acted to be surprised.

"Ha Preet tumne sunha nahi tumhare bhaiya ne kya kaha mera pariwar ka ijjat aab tabhi bach sakte hein job medri behen ka shaddi abhi issi mandap mein ho kisi aur ladke saat. Iss mushkil ke waqt mein tum hi jo hamari pariwar aur meri pariwar ke aapne ho. Aur iss waqt tumhare ilva kisi aura ache ladke nahi hein mere behen ke liye. Heer pleaded to Preet.

"Bhabhi main nahi janta ho mein aapse kya kahonga , mein to shadi ke liye socha bhi nahi. Preet again acted to be surprised.

"Preet tum hamesha aapne bade bhai ke baat mante ho, aaj please meri baat man lo mere behen se shadi kar lo. Meher bahut acchi ladki hein wo tumhe bahut kush rakhega.

Meri pariwar ki ijjat aab tumhare haat mein, mein tumhare haat joddti ho. Heer pleaded to Preet.

"Maan ja Preet. Prem told Preet after giving him a meaningful look.

"Thick hein bhabhi mein karoonga shadi Meher se. Preet told Heer.

"Ye kya baat hui didi pahele aap mujhe apne bachpan ke dost ka saat shadi fix kya phir aab job ha gaya tab aapne aapke devar ka saat mera shadi fix kya. Meher suddenly told Heer.

"Ye tu kya kahe raha hein Heer jara meri devar ka bhola sa chaera to dekh, dekhne mein acche , lambhe hein , teri jiju ka saat business mein bhi join kya hein. Meri devar to hazaroon mein ek hein, wo tujhe bahut kush rahega . Heer tried to coinvince her sister.

" Thick hein agar aap inka itna tariff kar rahi hein to mujhe bhi aapke faisala ka samman karne chaiye. Mein bhi tayar ho Preet se shadi karne ke liye. Meher told Heer.

"Ye hui na baat aab jaldi se tum dono ka kar dete hein. Prem told Preet and Meher.

After few minutes, Preet and Meher were sitting inside of mandap. Prem and Heer tied the knots of Preet and Meher together.

With every single phere around the holy fire Preet and Meher were getting happy as they were feeling that their dreams were finally becoming a reality.

After completing saat phere. Preet tied the mangalsutra around Meher's neck and applied sindoor on Meher's maang.

Meher closed her eyes in happiness when her lover applied sindoor on her maang.

Pandit soon declared them as husband and wife.

Prem and Heer both congratulated and hugged their respective sibling. Thery were feeling for Preet and Meher .

Preet and Meher on the other hand were looking at each other lovingly. They were finally belonged to each other.

Without giving any warning Preet pulled Meher towards him and soon their lips found each other to seal their union.

End of One shot.

Thank you to all my readers you are best.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
Awesome to good very nice part.
Love all the scenes
keep up the great work.
Posted: 7 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: preciousrose26

Awesome to good very nice part.
Love all the scenes
keep up the great work.

Thanks for liking this os.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Overall story is nice
Keep it up 👍🏼
Yeahhh no doubt Heer ka devar hazaro mai aik hai ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Awesome update
Love all the scenes
Posted: 7 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: sadiaharshiti

Overall story is nice

Keep it up 👍🏼
Yeahhh no doubt Heer ka devar hazaro mai aik hai ...

This is the end of this os.
Thanks for your review.

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