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Posted: 7 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: AASUS

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oho so many things at once happening.

1st wondering what did happen to Nihal that Meher is panicking 😲

hehe office scene is simply rocking. Preet and Prem are fab in handling their staff according to their mood.

PB and Preet yay lob them 🤗

woohoo Heer will get job in Jzoo office may be? Lets see - so the bros gona meet her in the shop then. Can't wait 😃

Nihal mystery will be solved in next chapter.
It will be nice to see some office romance between two pairs of lovers.
Posted: 7 years ago
#52

Rented love :

Chapter 3

Heer rushed t o her house.

"Meher kya hua Nihal bhaiya ko ? A panicked Heer asked Meher.

"Didi bhaiya buri tara se fas gaya hain. AAp to jante hein Murali,Raghav ko gang ko. Bhaiya ne unlogo se paisa udhar leke aapne lafange dosto ke saat jua khelke saare paisa har gaye. Aap Murali aur Raghav ko unka paisa wapas chaiye. Iss liye un logo ne bhaiya ko utha ke le gaya aur ye dhamki b hi di agar hum unlogo paisa nahi lautaya to hum Bhaiya ka mara hua much dekhenge. Unlogono sari mahalla ke samne se Bhaiya ko utha kar legayi aur ye dhamki di.Meher explained to Heer.

"Bhaiya kitne rupe udhar liye the unlogo se ? Heer asked Meher.

"Do lakh.Meher told Heer.

"Ye tu kya kahe rahi hain Meher , do lakh rupe ! Ye to meri ek saal ki agar ki barabar hain. Bhaiya nme itne sare rupe kyuin udhar liya! Heer felt helpless after learning the amount of money her brother borrowed from the local gangs.

"Mein nahi janti di. Lekin mujhe aab dar lag rahi hein didui. Itne kam samay pe hum itne sare rupe kaha se jugar karenge. Aur agar hum paisa ka intejam nahi kya to wolog bhaiya ko mar denge didi. Main bhaiya se bahut gussa karti hu, lekin mein unse payar bhi to karti hu na, aakhir kar jaisa bhi hein hamari bhai hein wo. Agar bhaiya ko kutch ho gaya to mein nahi janta hu ki mein kya karunga. " Meher broked into tears after telling that. She hugged her sister tightly.

"Meher meri taraf dekh, wasle rakh. Hum Nihal bhaiya ko kutch nahi hone denge, kutch na kutch jaroor intejam karenge. " Heer hugged her sister back after saying that.

On the other side of Hyderabad

" Maya tum janti ho hamare winter collection ke liye good press coverage kitna jaruri hein. Iss liye Preet aur mera interview Ashlesha se karni jaruri hein. Prem tried to explain it to Maya.

"Main nahi janti hu tumne aur Preet ne uss choorel Ashlesha mein kya dekha jo unko apne dost mante ho. Aur rahi baat... She could not complete her statement as she heard voice behind of her.

"Maya Dekhne ke liye aachi najar ka jarurat hein jo unfortunately har kisi mein nahi hoti. Aur mujhe bahut accha lagi ki tumhari dil mein meri liye itne payar hein. Ash told Maya in sarcastic voice.

"Ha tum sahi kahi rahe ho meri dil mein tumhare liye utna hi payar hein jo tumhare dil mein mere liye hein. Maya told Ash.

"Agar ye baat hein to mushkil hein . Kyunki meri dil mein dayeno ke liye sirf nafrat hein. Ash told Maya while looking at her face.

"Kya kahi tu mujhe churel , mein dayen ho. To thick hein aaj dekh ti hu kaun tujhe meri haat se bachate hein. Maya told Ash.

"Ekbar nahi hazar bar kahungi ki ha tu Dayen hein , aur mein tuj se darti ho kya? Ash challenged Maya.

"Teri to. After shouting battle cry Maya jumped at Ash. Ash also fight back. Soon they were both fighting aggressively against each other. They both punched each other and they were aggressively pulling each other's hair.

Prem tried to broke the violence but all of her got wasted as he was unable to stop the violence between two. Prem got pushed by both women in several occasion. Prem sent a urgent text to Preet to help him.

When Preet entered the room, he was shocked after seeing the way Ash and Maya were engaged in violence. Preet quickly holds Ash from the behind while PRem holds Maya from behind.

"Preet mujhe choro aaj to mein iss dayen ko eisa sabak sikhangui ki ye zindegi bhar nahi bhulegi. Ash angrily told Preet.

"Prem choro mujhe. Aur soon churel tu kya sabak degi mujhe wo to mein tujhe dungi. " Maya retorted back.

"Ash, Maya ye kya bachpana hain, tum dono ko kya ye shoba dete hain." Prem angrily told them.

"Bhaiya sahi keh rahi hain, tum dono ye ka laga rakha hain. Name calling, punching. Saach mein tum dono se ye umeed nahi tha mujhe" Preet added.

" Main samaj sakta hu ki tum dono ek dusro ko pasand nahi karte ho, lekin tum dono ko janna chahiye ki tum log aapni naraji, aapni napasand diplomatic bhi jahir kar sakte the. Agar issi tarah tum log behave karne lagi to tum lok sabke samne ek majak ban jagoge." Prem told them.

"Ha tum dono iss tara sa unprofessional behaviour hum future mein harkis bardast nahi karenge, ye office hein koi akhara nahi." Preet warned them.

" Ok, I am sorry, but I still do not like her." Maya remarked.

" Mein bhi sorry hu aur ha mein bhi tumhe pasand nahi karti hu Maya." Ash told Maya.

" Tum dono ko ek dusre ko pasand karne ki koi jarurat nahi hein, hum bus ye chahate ki tum dono ek dusre job bhi milo thoda civil raha karo." Prem told them.

" Ha, Ash mein aur Prem bhaiya kaal tumhare office mein tumse milenge. Aur Maya tum please hamare press release ko newspaper mein publish karne ki bandanast karo." Preet told them.

Ash and Maya soon left the office.

" Bhaiya manna padega ye dono ek se barkar ek hein. Mein soach bhi nahi sakta hu ki ye dono ek duse se iskadar nafrat karte hein." Preet told his brother.

" Sahi kaha tune, mein to pura hairan ho gaya tha in dono ka harkat dekke, accha ye dono ka baat ko yahi rahene de. Ek kam karte hein kyuin na hum bahar jaake ghur aye, office ka kaam bhi to jaldi khatam hogaya aaj." Prem suggested.

" Aap bilkul sahi keha rahe hein, choliye. " Preet told Prem.

Prem and Preet left the office.

On the other side of Hyderabad

" Didi aapko yaad hain jab hum paheli bar iss mahalle mein aye th. Tab mein, aap aur Nihal bhaiya issi park mein bathe the. Hum soach rahe the aage kya karni hain. Uss waqt Nihal bhaiya ne kaha tha. Kutch bhi ho jaye hum tino bhai bhen hamesha saat rahenge. Aaj Nihal bhaiya ka jaan khatre mein hain aur hum kutch bhi nahi kar sakte hein." Meher told Heer.

" Ha Meher zindegi mein itna behabas mein kabhi aur mehsos nahi ki." Heer told her sister.

" Zindegi ko dosh dena bandh karo bacche. Zindegi hamesha tumhe ek mauka zaroor dete hein aapni oereshan se rahat pane ke liye." A middle aged woman told them from opposite side.

" Ji maaf karna aaj se pahele hum aap ko kabhu iss mahalle mein nahi dekha hein. Kaun hein aap? " Heer asked that woman.

" Iss waqt mere parichay jaane se jyda tum dono ko ya jaana jaroori hein ki mein tum dono ko iss mushibat se bahar nikal ne rasta dekha sakta hoon agar tum dono mere ek kam kar do to." That woman told them.

" Paheli bujhana band kijje jobi kehana hein saaf saaf kahiye. " Heer demanded.

" Tum dono ka kam hein rented love yane bhare mein payaar. Aur tumlogo ye kaam mein Daljeet Juneja dena chahati hu." Daljeet told them.

Chapter end.

Prem Heer and Meet first meeting.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#53
Awesome to good very nice update.
I love it.
The whole office scene was really funny
waiting for next part.
Can't wait to read their first meeting.
update nxt part soon.
Edited by preciousrose26 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
awosome update
love it
loving prem nd preet bonding nd
Heer meher bonding
awosome sceans and aosome dailouges
thanks for the pm :)
pls update next pat soonnn
Posted: 7 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: preciousrose26

Awesome to good very nice update.
I love it.
The whole office scene was really funny
waiting for next part.
Can't wait to read their first meeting.
update nxt part soon.

Their first meeting will be interesting.
Posted: 7 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: tarannum6

awosome update
love it
loving prem nd preet bonding nd
Heer meher bonding
awosome sceans and aosome dailouges
thanks for the pm :)
pls update next pat soonnn

Thanks for your comment, I will try to update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#57
Two times I tried commenting but it wasn't getting posted.
Dunno what the issue was _ two diff days.

Anyhow trying here again.


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Superb PB and Preet so my kinda update 😎
Shurid lub ya for bringing the brothers back alive in your stories 🤗
I miss the best bros and happy to see them getting large screen space in ur updates 😃
Now the way both employees were handled by J bros are awwesome,

I'm guessing Heer will meet Jbros and let's see how that goes.
Really sad about Nihal here - wonder what did make him turn to alcohol 😕
Edit add :

😆 I think I re commented about this ch. well it's ok
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oho Kya fight hai 😆 ok that was funny - the name calling of Ash vs Maya 😆
I kinda enjoyed - made for each other villains 😆

Moving on aww emotional sisters🤗 Heer is reassuring Meher cho chweet.
Ok now the Jbros - woah they going out 😎

😲 DJ - this I didn't c it coming!
A surprise 😲
Well I had ominous feeling she'll hurt the sisters or at least Heer will be the target here.
Let's see how it is. Looking forward to next part.
Posted: 7 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: AASUS

Page 8

Oho Kya fight hai 😆 ok that was funny - the name calling of Ash vs Maya 😆
I kinda enjoyed - made for each other villains 😆

Moving on aww emotional sisters🤗 Heer is reassuring Meher cho chweet.
Ok now the Jbros - woah they going out 😎

😲 DJ - this I didn't c it coming!
A surprise 😲
Well I had ominous feeling she'll hurt the sisters or at least Heer will be the target here.
Let's see how it is. Looking forward to next part.

No doubt that,Ash and Maya deserve each other.
We will see more sibling bond between brothers and sisters in future.
DJ will definitely have a prominent role in the story.

Posted: 7 years ago
#60

Rented Love

Chapter 4

"Dekhiye aap ko shayed koi galat phemi hoyi hein, aap jaisa samaj te he hum ustararki ladki nahi hein."Meher sharply replied to Daljeet.

" Dekho tum shayed galat samaj rahe ho. Meri baat pahele pure shunlo. Dekho meri jo sasur ji hein Aparajit Juneja wo india ka top most busniessman hein. Wonka net worth 10000 cores hein, wonka jo bade bete the meri jeth ji Lalit Juneja, wo ekdin ek different ethnicity ki, different cast ki, aur lower middle class background ki ek ladki se shadi karli.

Jahir se baat hein meri sasur ji iss rishte se kush nahi the. Unhe laga tha wo ladki unke bete ke liye sahi nahi hein. Lalit paaji bhi ziddi the unhone bhi gusse mein ghar chodkar aapne biwi ke saat chole gaye.

Lalit paaj ithoda intellectual type ka insan tha jiske liye paisa zaida maine nahi rakhtha,aur wo bahut socially liberal bhi the iss liye unhoe koi farak nahi pada ki Sipra parhyji alag ethnicity, alag jaat ke aur lower middle class background se hein.

Lalit paaji university ka lecturer thi, Sipra parjyji bhi lecturer thi same university ka. Itne bade ghar mein paida hone ke baad bhi Lalit paaji ko koi dikkat nahi the apne biwi aur do bete ke saat middle class zindegi bitane ki.

Lekin kutch saal baat ek car accident mein Lalit paaji ka dehan hogaya. Meri sasur ji kabhi bhi Sipra parjyi ji ko aapnane nahi paye aur jeth ji ki maut ke baat unka gussa Sipra ji ke liye aur bad gaya tha.

Mere sasur ne Sipraji ke liye zindegi mushkil kar di, aapne paise aur connection ko use karke wonone Sipra ji ki promotion roka di aur unke liye tara tara ki professional problem khara karte raha.

Kutch saal baad mein jab Prem Preet teenager tha tab unke maa ki cancer ki wajase maut hogayi.

Aur Meri sasur ji ko laga ki aab wonke do pote wonke saat rahenge kyunki won dono ka koi nahi tha tab. "Daljeet told them.

" To Sipra jiKedo bete jarur wonke dadaji se ke saat rahene laga, jaise ki hum rahete hein hamare dadiji ke saat." Meher commented.

" Nahi, wo dono nahi aaye meri sasur ji ke saat rahene ke liye. Dono bhai ne aapni parents ko jo savings aur pension thi unke upar chol ne laga. Jahir se baat hein wo bilkul bhi enough nahi thi wonke higher education ke liye.

Dono bhai kya kutch nahi kya darji dokan mein assistant ki kaam ki, cafe mein waiter bana, jab tak wo dono 12 th pass kori thi, ek chote se kamre mein rahete the do bhai lekin phir bhi aapne dada ji koi help nahi liya. Dono bhai ne meri sasur ji ko kabhi maaf nahi kiya kyunki meri sasur ji ne wonki maa ki zindegi mushkil kar diya tha.

Dono bhai bahut hi aache student the iss liye dono ne scholership lekar higher study ki. Study ki saat saat dono ne aur bhi kaam tha jaise ki tution padana, office mein part time job karna.

Meri sasur ji ne bar bar koshish ki lekin wo dono wonse koi baat karne liye tayaar nahi the.

Maano ki dono bhai mein ek junon sawar tha kutch kar dekhani ki. Dono bhai aapne class mein first class first hua tha lekin wo log phir bhi university ka teacher nahi banna. Uske baad dono ne aapne parents ki aur khud ki jo savings tha usko busniess mein invest kiya aur chota sa fashion house khula." Daljeet told the sisters.

Heer and Meher were definitely impresed about Prem and Preet after hearing their struggle. The way they fought for their self-respect and dignity was really a touching moment for them.

" Usske baad? " A curious Heer asked Daljeet.

"Shayed busniess ka talent dono bhai ki khoon mein tha teen char saal ke bitch wo dono ne itne badi fashion house establish karli aur dono ne textile busniess bhi shuru kardi

iss ka matlab hein kapre design, model selection, marketing kee saat raw material collection, manufacturing aur production bhi un dono ki company hi karte. Aap wo log hyderabad ki number one fashion house ka saat mashur textile busniess ke malik bhi hein. Dono bhai ne aapne dam par cororpati ban gaye." Daljeet told them.

"Accha laga won dono ka success story shunke lekin mujhe ye samaj nahi aarha iss ke saat aapnka bataya hua kam kya connection hein? " Meher asked Daljeet.

"Dekho meine to paheleI bataya tha ki dono bhai meri sasur ji ko kitna na pasand karte the. Wonke ye na pasand aaj bhi nahi badli balki aur bar gaya jab dono bhai ko pata laga ki meri sasur ji wonke company ko take over karne ki koshish kar raha hein.

Dono bhai ko ye palle nahi padi, dono bhai office mein jake meri sasur ji ko bhala bura suna diya. Keh diya paise se meri sasur wonki khuddari, pechan nahi karid sakte hein.

Meri mano to dono bhai bilkil bewkuf hein iss mamle mein. Ha dono kororpati bangye lekin jaha Prem aur Preet ka net worth 2 million USD hein uha meri sasur ji ki net worth 2 billion usd hein.

Meri sasur ji ka aur sirf char grandchild hein aur do bete hein jo zinda hein.

Meri pati busniess mein interested nahi hein aur wo busniess jyda samaj ta bhi nahi aur meri beti aabhi aabhi university join kiya hein aur wo arts padta hein.

Unke chote bete America mein settle hein aur unka bhi rishta meri sasur ji ka saat kutch khass nahi hein.

Meri sasur ka umar hogaya, unnhe unka galti ka ehasas hein, unnhe pata hein unnhone hein Sipra parjayi se galat saluk kiya, aur wo maffi bhi manne ke liye tayar hein Prem aur Preet se. Lekin dono bhai unki koi baat sunhne ke liye tayar nahi hein.

Dekho meri sasur ji ka najariya aab badal giya. Wo marne se pahele apna dono poto ka ghar basna dekhna chahate hein. Wo chahate hein ki unke baad Juneja busniess empire ye dono bhai chalaye.

" Dono ka koi girlfriend nahi hein kya. Kya dono bhaI playboy hein?"Heer asked her.

" Bilkul bhi nahi, meine kaha tha na won dono ka maa ek lecturer thi university ka, unhone in dono bhai ko aisa parvarish nahi diya tha. Prem aur Preet ka koi bad habit nahi hein. Dono drinking,smoking, drug use aise kutch nahi karte hein. Dono bhai bahut health conscious hein, regular jym jhate hein.

Nahi wo dono playboy type ka bhi nahi hein. Meri parjayi ji ka morality lesson won dono mein khut khut ke badi hoyi hein, they respect women, aur wonki office mein bahut sare ladki kaam karte hein, kissko kabhi bhi koi dikkat nahi uha kaam karne mein.

Wo dono bahut hi sarif hein mein to kehata ho had se jyda sharif hein kyunki bahut sadi famous woman ka one night stand ki offer aur ambitious woman empoyee ka physical relationship ki offer wo dono thokraha diya. "

" Kya?" They were shocked after hearing about such strong moral characters of Juneja brothers.

They previously thought that, the two brothers were playboy type man who behaved roughly with woman and who had difficulties about committing to one woman.

"Ha, chawk gaya na, dono bhai bahut hi strict hein iss mamle mein, dono aise ladkI chahate aapne jeevan saathi ke roop mein jo won dono ko sirf Prem aur Preet hone ke liye pyar kare. Wo dono samaj te bahut sari ladki won dono ko unki paise ke liye won dono chahate hein.Wo dono ko aise ladki pasand nahi hein.

Jab tok wo dono ka aapna payar nahi milega wo dono shaddi nahi karega.Aur yaha meri sasurji ka umar hogaya.

Iss liye mein chahati ki tum dono payar banke mere bhatije ke zindegi mein aaon, undono ko payar ke jhaal mein fasaon, undono ko khuwab dekhao aise zindegi ka jaha un dono aapne payar ke saat rahega. Undono ko aise apne payar mein dewana karo ki wo dono tum dono se shadi karne ke liye aagle choy mahine mein raaji ho jay." Daljeet told them.

" Nahi hum aisi kaam nahi karenge, hum do acche insan ki zindegi ki saat iss tarah khilwar nahi kar sakte hein." Heer told her in a determined voice.

" Ha didi sahi kehe rahe hein, aap ko to sharam aane chaiye aise baat karte hue." Meher also expressed her displeasure.

" Dekho tum dono ko to sirf payar karne ke liye kahe raho, shaddi nahi, agar tum dono unn dono se shaddi nahi karna chahate ho thick hein, lekin usse pahele Prem aur Preet ko tum dono se shadi karne ke liye officially raaji karana parega.

Ek tarah se mein meri do bhatijo ka madat kar rahi ho, unki rokhi sukhi zindegi mein payaar la raho ho, tumhe pata dono ka koi ex girlfriend bhi nahi hein, sarre waqt sirf kaam ko lekar do bhai busy rahete hein.

Meri sasur ji ka umar ho gaya, kya tumhe nahi lagta ki tumhe ek pariwar ko jhodne mein madat karna chaiye.

Aur uske badle mein bhi tum dono ko madat karna chahata ho. Meine suna tum dono ka bada bhai Nihal ek bahut hi khatarnak gang ki kabje mein jo unhe maar dega agar tum dono ne unka paisa nahi lauta to, bolo kya tum dono ye bardast karne psoge. Kaisa lagega jab tumhara bade bhai ka dead body tum dono ka samne hoga. Kya karoge tum dono uss waqt, kaise najar mila paoge khud se.

Har waqt yahi soach tum dono ka andar mein rahega ki kash tum dono meri prastab ko maan lete to ye din dik na nahi parta.

Meri ye kaam kardo mein tum dono beheno ko 5 lakh rupia doongi wo bhi bilkul cash, aur uske baad bhi additional benefits hein tum dono ke liye. "Daljeet smiled after saying that.

Daljeet knew she had won the argument, she knew people could do many things when they were desperate.

Heer and Meher knew they did not have any other options, they did not have any other options, they could not let their brother die. They knew they were trapped.

" Thick hein hum karenge aapki kaam, par hamare bhi kutch sharat hein." Heer told Daljeet.

Later in the evening

" Bhaiya choliye uss coffee shop mein jate hein." Preet suggested.

"Ha chal, uha baat ke coffee ke saat saat hum dono bhai baate bhi kar lenge." Prem gave his approval to Preet's proposal.

Two brothers sit in a corner of the coffee shop and enjoying natural view.

"Heer, Meher jaldi yaha aao." Coffee shop owner called the sisters. Incidentally, Meher also joined in the coffee shop today in some special circumstance.

"Kya hua? Meher asked.

"Dekho yaha do maaldar saheb aye hein, jahke undono se tamiz seputcho unki kya jarurat hein Coffe,snacks,milkshake,tea, ya juice ki." Owner of the coffeeshop told them.

"Lekin order lene ke liye aap ek ki wajaye dono ko kyun bhej rahe hein? Meher asked in a confused voice.

"Kyun ki wo dono VIP customer hein aab jao."

Heer and Meher went to Prem and Preet's table.

"Sir aap do no kya lenge chaye, coffee, milkshake, juice? "Heer asked while she was looking at Prem, and she found herself lost for a moment when she looked at the chocolate brown eyes of the extremely handsome young man. Heer also liked the way he styled his hair and the black suit fitted him nicely.

On the other hand, Prem felt like surprised when he heard the sweetest voice and when he saw her he felt mesmerized by her natural beauty. Prem could say she was definitely one of the most beautiful women he ever saw. Her curly beautiful hair was looking very cute to him.

Her eyes had so much depth Prem felt she could see inside of his soul by those beautiful eyes of hers.

Prem saw many women but nobody had so much effect on him on first meeting. There was something unique in her, he felt.

"Jee, aap hum dono ko please do cup coffee dijye please with one table spoon sugar. " Prem told her clamly.

Heer could felt her cheek blushed when she heard his loving voice, she could tell from that, he was well mannered.

"Sir, coffee ke saat aap dono aur kiya lege? Meher asked Preet. She felt blushed when she looked at that young handsome man. She could sense that, he loved his elder brother just like she loved her elder sister.She could see naughtiness in her eyes but at the same time she knew he was well mannered.

Preet was stunned after seeing the beautiful young woman. She was a deshi beauty; she had a unique grace in her. Her eyes were so deep that, Preet could feel she could get lost in those eyes. Her voice also seemed to carry cuteness.

"Ji coffee satt do chicken sandwich bhi please le ayye." Preet told her.

Meher felt butterfly in her stomach when she heard his deep voice.

A woman in her mid 40s was secretly observing the interaction between four.

"Mission accomplished.She smiled after saying that.

Chapter end.

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