You all know Grace : her ID is iheartChai
If not you will see on Page 1 of this forum,
there is a Sticky Topic "Desh FF / Creative Writing Archive..."
She collected with other fans' help as many stories written on Kis Desh show
and has posted there in Alphabet order.
If you never seen check out that topic. 😃
She is a writer and was a fan of Premeer / KDMHMD
She took a lot of pain in getting to know all the fans and be creative.
She's written many stories when she was active here.
Her stories are everyone's favourite and the reason for that is she would write in a photographic detail every happenings in the scenes of her stories.
You won't forget any detail after reading - it's a special skill I'd say.
We were lucky to have her.
One of her FF is called Pee Loon. It is my most favourite story.
It shows PH in a different light - modern setting both independent adults.
There is trouble but they reunite and have a cute family of 3 children. Fraternal twins named Ishaan & Leher. Youngest child is Chahat.
In the story Prem has rebuilt the house when their family expanded with children and it has a pool house also for his children to enjoy. Their Twins are very active, at times cute and other times trouble makers. They are also shown to be helpful to their parents in the kitchen or doing other chores.
Based on the characteristics of the characters in the story,
I built this concept and new write up on Premeer & Children.
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Wishing sana.harshiti a very happy Premeerilicous B'day.
September 11th
They are her craze for many years now.
She is an extremely dedicated fan of Premeer and Harshad Additi.
She has fan pages every where and till today keep them very active and alive.
She inspires everyone to be like her - creative / dedicated / loving.
Lob you Sana ❤️🤗
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Pool House Date

(creations credit : sana.harshiti)
Premeer were all ready and came down stairs. They were happy and looking forward to going on a long awaited Date that they've planned months ago.
Their children were in the living room. Leher and Ishaan are 9 trying to catch lil 2 year old Chahat who is hiding behind the sofa. She has her eyes closed and looks like she is praying so no one will catch her. 😆 In few seconds she cracks open one eye and tries to look around without moving from that place.
Ishaan and Leher are walking all around the living room as if they are so lost.
PH had a smile on their faces looking at this scene. They know their older kids know exactly where their lil sister is but they would prolong the search as much as possible just to make her smile.
Her giggly infectious laugh that had entire family as her slave. She literally holds all of their attention on her. 😆
There is video games and of course Ishaan and Leher should be practicing their tennis as per their instructor but instead they choose to play with Chahat. It is understandable though as Chahat doesn't have a play mate other then her older brother and sister.
Gungun who is same age as Chahat is two doors down the street and she would only come whenever her parents visit here.
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Preet and Meher Singh are like siblings of another set of parents for the Junejas. They are very close.
Both couple share everything about everything among themselves.
They hang out together and look after each other when they need help.
Sampson their pet dog is very comfortable in either of the houses. So today Sampson was supposed to come with Preet and Meher and Gungun.
But unexpectedly the plan is dropped as the Singhs had an emergency and needed to be elsewhere.
Needless to say Heer was rather disappointed. With Prem's workaholic habit, her own work, her small children's very hectic schedules for all their school and extra curricular activities there was no time.
Chahat is just under two years and always needed a parental attention. She is very attached to Prem. If he is not there Heer has to be there. Since she was born she was a daddy's lil girl and will get very restless if her parents stayed away too long. The only exception for her being happy is either she had to be with Heer's parents or with Meher and Preet.
When the Singhs cancelled the visit, a gloomy atmosphere fell on a very peaceful living room.
Prem said Preet apologizes. and we will go sometime very soon Heer.
He says looking at Heer.
Her disappointment is visible on her face but she quickly hides and says in a cheerful voice,
"It's ok Prem. We get to be with our little family. I am ok. Really, don't worry."
Prem nods his head, at that time his cell phone rings and he picks up to answer.
The children has seen their mother. They were sad too as they were looking forward to hanging out with Uncle Preet. He spoils them and play with them. He would never scold them. Aunt Meher though is a bit stricter than Uncle Preet, she is their most favourite aunt. Add to that no Gungun or Sampson either. Their faces turned dull too.
Leher the older of the twins said to her brother "Ishaan did you see mom? She's sad. I know dad is also sad but he hid it."
Ishaan: Yeah I know. What do we do now? I don't want mom to be sad.
Leher: Neither do I. Soon her face brightens up and she says "What if we call Grandma?"
Ishaan: Which one?
Leher: Uff Ishaan where is your brain? 😲 I am talking about Naani. Daadi is always busy.
Ishaan: But she isn't here.
Leher: Uff that is why I'm saying we can call her. Ask her ideas. Naani is cool. She loves us.
Ishaan: Of course she does she's our mom's mom. (He looked at Leher as though she is being idiotic to think their Naani won't love them.)
Leher : ok lets do that. I'm gona ask her a way to cheer up mom
Ishaan: Leher Mom and Dad were going out weren't they. They called it Date. Is that like going to party?
Leher: I think so because they dressed up for it. Not like work clothes.
Ishaan: So why don't we let them have it here?
Leher: Where?
Ishaan: I was thinking. Y'know not here inside the house. But we have a cool Pool house. Mommy loves to spend time there. She gets excited just like us every time we have pool parties.
Leher: umm I know she does. (Leher was wondering how her brother is going to make their mom happy in pool house 🤔)
Ishaan: I mean if mom and dad were going to a party - that means food, drink , music right?
Leher: (smiling and her face brightening up) Oh right! Yess!!! Ishaan I love you. You're genius!!!
Ishaan: (Looking quite proud that his sister praised him but didn't show it.) um thanks I guess. 😆
Leher: Ok I know what to do. Will you help me?
Ishaan: I thought you were gona call Grandma.
Leher: No need Ishaan. Because your idea is great. We will make mom and dad have a party at our pool house. It is outside and it is quite nice with cool breeze in the evening.
Ishaan: Are you sure Leher? We'll be in big trouble for going there alone. Mom wouldn't like this. I am not making her angry today over this.
Leher: She won't. When dad gets off the phone we'll go meet him privately. I mean in his office room so mom won't hear. Ask dad to help us. I know he will. He can keep mom busy while we get everything ready.😃 OMG I'm sooo excited woohoo. I hope mommy will like our surprise.
Ishaan: What are you talking about? What surprise?
Leher: Ishaan you're the one told me - party means food/ drink / music. Don't we need to arrange that for this party?
Ishaan: um oh yeah. But how will we do it? Y'know we are not allowed to be in kitchen by ourselves.
Leher: That is why I said we'll ask dad to help us. We will speak with dad and while he is chatting with mom we will do everything. I know how to do Ishaan. I helped and you did too many times whenever we had parties.
Ishaan: Yes I'll help you. Lets go to dad then.
The children went to see their father in his office room. He was off the phone so they right away explained what they came to talk to him about.
Meanwhile Chahat is playing with Heer in the living room - her favourite game of Hide & Seek.
Prem was very surprised by his children's sudden appearance at his office room. He smiled at them indicating them to speak. Leher started to explain what needs to be done. Ishaan asked if their father agrees to help cheer up their mommy.
Prem appreciated their thoughtful gesture and he explained their mother is not really sad. He assured them that he would take care of her and not to worry.
The twins insisted their father to agree for this "Pool party" as the called it. They said their parents always cheered them up when any one of them is sad. Now it's their turn to cheer up their mom.
After hearing the twins Prem said ok. Leher told her father exactly what she will do. Prem knows his daughter won't do anything that he may not like or Heer would disapprove.
The twins ran off from there while Prem went to see what his wife and Chahat are up to.
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After serious discussion with Ishaan, Leher made all the arrangements. She asked her brother to take care of the music. Few songs that may be her mom's favourite.
Ishaan : Leher how will we play the music?
Leher: Dad has ipod Ishaan. Go and ask dad you want to borrow it. He'd give it to you. Dad has mom's favourite songs. You will see.
Ishaan went off to see his dad again.
When he returned, Leher asked Ishaan to bring the small cart wheel they use for serving guests in the party. They both carefully arranged all items to be taken to the pool house.
It's not far but they just have to be careful and their little hands were not big enough to hold many things together.
At the pool house they set everything one by one after decorating the table by the pool with a water resistant table cloth, a vase with flowers (They plucked out their mom's favourite fresh flowers from their garden).
The table is set for two people. They decided to keep some extra food just in case their parents get hungry. 😆
They went back inside and gave "thumps up" sign to Prem who understood everything is clear for him to take Heer for the party their children has arranged.
It was more than an hour for all this to be arranged. He had a really hard time keeping his wife from changing her evening gown to something more comfortable. Heer wondered why Prem is keeping her in living room but she was a bit preoccupied so didn't ask many questions to him at the time. Time just flew by as they all watched cartoon with lil Chahat sitting in between themselves on the living room sofa.
After Ishaan and Leher took their lil sister to give her evening snack, Prem invited Heer to go take fresh air by the Pool House.
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Prem was smiling looking at the table by the pool. He was really surprised how much trouble their children went into arrange all of this for both of them.
Heer didn't pay attention she was just walking silently besides Prem.
Prem looked at his wife and whispered "surprise!"
Heer came out of her dream world and looked up to see smiling Prem pointing his finger towards pool table. She was shocked!😲
Heer : Prem when did you do this? I mean you were with me the entire time !😲 Did you order out? Was it delivered here?
Prem: Heer go closer and check it out. (He said still smile on his lips)
Heer: What is this? The melon it looks like the one you carved for kids this evening. But these snacks we usually make for kids. Why did you put them here. Wait 😲 how is this possible? Prem why are you smiling? I'm asking you a question! Did you sneak away while I was playing with Chahat?
Prem: No Heer. Chill. Relax will you please? Stop asking so many questions. Look this is a beautiful summer evening isn't it? Cool breeze kisses your skin makes you feel fresh. Blue water in the pool is just a treat for the eyes. ⭐️ Don't you think so? ( He hugs Heer from the back and automatically Heer's hands move up to allow him to hug her in her waist. Prem has his cheeks touch her cheeks and his face slightly resting on her shoulder).
Heer notices that Prem still has this huge smile on his face. She couldn't figure out what is going on.
Prem realizing her confusion answers.
Prem; Heer our twins did this. They arranged this in their words "Pool party". They didn't want their mom sad. They had asked me to keep you occupied while they get ready for this party. So what if our Date was cancelled? Our children did a wonderful job planning out everything isn't it? Lets enjoy. I'm sure they are waiting in kitchen trying to see your reaction and if you're smiling yet. Now please smile Heer. (He kisses her cheek).
Heer breaks out into a wide smile after hearing what her children had been planning and what they've done.
Heer: OMG - all the training we did while organizing our house parties paid off huh ! aww look how beautiful all this is set out to be. Our two artists in the house. awww. She literally gushed seeing the way snacks have been arranged.
Prem: Yup absolutely. Our 9 year olds are all set to be hosts for an evening party!
Heer: aww I am still in shock! What in the world?! How did they manage to bring these?
Prem: They used the cart wheel which we use for serving in the parties.
Heer: I'm so touched.( Her eyes start to tear up and she sniffles. Prem again hugs her from behind hoping to comfort her.)
Prem; So it's party time lets enjoy the snacks they've prepared for us. 😃
In the mean time Ishaan and Leher were trying to see if their mom got happy. They couldn't hear anything but they just wanted to get a glimpse of their mother smiling. When they saw that they got excited and gave each other Hi 5 😆
Leher: Ishaan it's not polite to watch people.
Ishaan: Why? They are just having a party.
Leher: Still it's not polite. Let dad take care of mom.
Ishaan: Oh yea ew I don't wanna see them kissing 😕
Leher: Ishaan stop being rude. Dad and Mom love each other. Grandma told us they are perfect mom and dad.
Ishaan; I know but I don't wanna see.
Leher: Who asked you lol. Now be good and go and press the ipod. Dad won't know about it as we didn't tell him about music part.
Ishaan: Oh yea forgot (he puts his hand on his forehead as if he is worried)
Leher : It will be fine you go and turn on the music.
Ishaan walks up to the pool house. He saw their parents were walking ahead towards their back yard garden where they have bench to sit and enjoy the evening.
He goes to the table by pool side and press to open play "My Heer's favourits" album
He knows that is meant for his mom.
He press to play continuously and runs back into the kitchen as quietly and quickly as possible. 😆
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At the pool house Premeer suddenly hear the music and they turn around and found it's coming from the pool table. 😃 They understood it's their children's idea. 😆 They smiled hearing the song.
The song playing in ipod at the time is "Hulchal Hui Zara shor hua Dil chor hua Teri or hua"
Prem gets up and puts his right hand palm facing upwards asking Heet if she would like to dance.
Heer smiles at him and accepts his hand. They danced for a while smiling and being happy again.
After that they walked over to the table to enjoy the snacks - almost all cooked by both of them but they appreciated the hard work of their twins. Their thoughtfulness to cheer up their parents whose Date was cancelled unexpectedly.
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Here is Junejas' back yard and Pool house 😎
Very spacious place to hold a big party.

Appetizers Ishaan's peanut butter craze along with his favourite things.

Leher's decoration fruit kabab

More on Leher's handi work learned from her mom and dad

Courtesy of their father Prem - he has prepared this for kid's fun time that evening.
The children decided to use this for their parents instead to quench their thirst.

Their mother's preparation for kids' evening snack. Leher suggested to add on the parents' menu. 😆 Ishaan felt rather sad but agreed all the same. 😆

Leher prepared bread and jam sandwich while Ishaan added his favourite strawberries in between. He thought his mom likes these kind of decorations as she's always taking lot of pain in decorating plates whenever they have people over at their house.

These were kids' snacks prepared by parents for their children. But the children decided to be gracious and made their parents have them instead. It's the thought behind this effort that counts.
Premeer having a delicious snack filled evening with romantic music & songs entertaining them in the background.
Credits:
Premeer creation: sana.harshiti
Pics with food from Google