MEET SS: THAT SPOOKY TOUR. UPDATED Last Chapter - Page 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: sana.harshiti

lovely concept

the family so cute 😆
fantastic start hope u update next chapter soon

I am sooo happy to get a feedback from you dear *-* Thank you so much. Thie meant a lot...I will update very soon 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: monaghosh

LOVELY OS,PLZ DO UPDATE SOON

U HAVE NOT UPDATED UR FIRST OS PLZ UPDATE THAT TOO,AM WAITING EAGERLY

Awww Mona. I will update my FF today and will update this SS soon too. Thanks a lot 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OOh the title is fun. Bunch of family / friends all around same age together. Surely something to enjoy. They are cool.

Lets see what happens then.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG Nikhad this is brilliant!!


I loved it, especially the following:


Originally posted by: Nikhad003

Preet took her inside the car..They sat on the middle seat of the car keeping the door open so that they could enjoy the time with the others...Preet showed Meher the water on the glass of the car and there he wrote Meet...Meher drew a question mark on the glass asking what did that mean? Preet wrote Meher+Preet and drew a heart sign..He gave a cute smile to Meher...Then Meher drew a crack line between the heart which Preet drew and showed him her tongue...Preet held the left side of his chest tightly with his hands as if his heart was broken making an adorable face...Meher laughed at this...



I mean I could literally pass out from the cuteness overload here...

I'm so happy now...I'm grinning like the Cheshire Cat.

With a writer like you on the Desh forum..I think I'm going to have to retire soon.

Thanks so much for the treat...and do continue soon.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AASUS

OOh the title is fun. Bunch of family / friends all around same age together. Surely something to enjoy. They are cool.

Lets see what happens then.

Thanks a tooon Athi love for the compliments *-* Yes yes they are fun together. Wait for the next update, all I can say is fun will be there. Muwaah...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Fatima_Q

OMG Nikhad this is brilliant!!


I loved it, especially the following:




I mean I could literally pass out from the cuteness overload here...

I'm so happy now...I'm grinning like the Cheshire Cat.

With a writer like you on the Desh forum..I think I'm going to have to retire soon.

Thanks so much for the treat...and do continue soon.

FATIMAAA *-* You made me so happy, that now I can't get sleep and feel like even start giving updates of a FF which I wrote long back on a other forum. After completing this SS I guess I will start that FF along with my current one.
This is what you are doing to me Fatima. Making me go crazy in happines.
Such a cute feedback from my meet soul sister. Oh wait, don't ever dare to think of retiring as no one can replace you Fatima and remember we are supposed to keep Meet alive together? Your writings are my inspiration.
I am so glad that I could make you this happy. Updated my FF, will update this really very soon too sweetheart <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Here comes the 2nd part.

CHAPTER 2

Everyone slept peacefully that night. They divided their rooms in two floors. Meher, Preet and Herman, Kiran, Gaurav in two rooms at the ground floor. Prem, Heer and Kulraaj, Ashlesha, Veera in other two at the 1st floor. But after Meet went to sleep the others made their whole plan for the next 3 days. They also planned how to stop Meher from leaving the palace because in case if they needed. The morning after, everyone woke up and went to the dining table. They all were having breakfast made by the care taker of the palace when Kulraaj asked the caretaker...
Kulraaj: Uncle why did not you stay with us here? It was really late night yesterday.
Meher: Yeah uncle, we won't mind...actually it would be good if you will stay with us.
The caretaker seemed to be little tensed on the question.
Caretaker: Actually I have family so I can't live here dear. Otherwise I would. But don't worry I will go only after all the works are done at night.
Heer: No problem at all uncle.

The group went out for sight seeing after the breakfast. It was really a very beautiful town. They did ride on horses too. At the late afternoon when the gang was busy roaming around the biggest school of the town, Preet took Meher to the lake side of the town. Meher was mesmerized by the beauty of the nature.
They sat on the grass beside the lake and kept looking at the sunset.
Meher: Preet?
Preet: Hmm Meher?
Meher: Such a beauty na?
Preet: Hmm and beautiful feelings also.
Meher: *smiles* yeah! Thanks a lot Preet.
Preet: *looking at Meher being surprised* Thanks?!! What for?!
Meher: *looks at Preet* For changing my life. I never felt this good before. So happy that I have a friend like you in my life.
Preet: *smiles* I am too much glad to have you in my life, girl. Do you even realise how much special you are?
Meher: *smiles again* Same to you my dear husband.
Preet: Oh dear wife love. *winks*
Both again looked at the nature, after a while Meher kept her hand on Preet's hand. Both looked at each other and smiled...Preet held her hand, she did too. They drowned themselves again in the sunset.

At night after the dinner the cousins were ready for their plan 1. According to the plan, when Meher and Preet went to their room, Kiran and Prem knocked on their door. Preet opened the door.
Preet: You guys?!! Need anything?
Kiran: No, buddy. Need you. Let us go out for sometime.
Preet: Where? Moreover why?
Prem: Nothing much, just that we married 2 and this soon to be married man can share our sorrows, happiness together na? Going nowhere far, but just in the outside corridor for a walk.
Preet told Meher about their stroll after she came out of the washroom and then they left. Meher made their bed and went to sleep. After a while she heard an awkward sound. At first she did not realise what was it. But later she realised it was the sound of a moving swing. Oh how could she forget there was a swing in front of their room outside. But who was riding the swing at this time? She felt like her heart missed a beat or two being all scared. Then suddenly she heard some footsteps as if someone was dragging something to somewhere. Meher gulped. She looked here and there. Actually what was happening that, Herman was moving the swing and Kulraaj was walking in the corridor beside Meher's room dragging a sack making sound. Herman stopped moving the swing and kept looking how Kulraaj was doing through the glass window but then he looked back at the sound of the moving swing.
Herman: Strange?! I did not move the swing last time, did I? Maybe I did or maybe I am too much into the drama I guess, after all I am doing the drama so good.
He smiled and again kept checking how Kulraaj was doing. In the mean time Meher was scared like no other day. She was about to come out of her room. Understanding this Kulraaj hid herself and Meher almost ran to the outside corridor where the three men were gossiping like there was no tomorrow.

Kiran: *Seeing Meher* What is wrong Meher Bhabi? Have you seen any ghost?
Prem: Huh?! What are you talking about Kiran, Meher and scared?! She is our one brave girl...right Meher?
Preet: Is there really any gho..gho..ghost?! *Stammering being Scared*
Kiran: Preet bhaiya are you scared of ghosts? From when? *surprised*
Preet: I do not know from when but yes, a lot. *weird face*
Meher understood if she would speak out anything everyone would mock at her and after seeing Preet's condition, she thought it would be better to keep quiet...Moreover, she was not even sure what if there was some wind blowing and there was a chance that, maybe she was just thinking too much. So, she just said,
Meher: Preet lets go to the room, it is late night. We should sleep.
Preet: Are you okay Meher?
Meher: Yes I am. It is just that the palace is too big and I was feeling lonely. Then thought of joining you guys but this corridor is also far away. I lost my way and got scared.
Preet: Not a fact, let us go to our room.
Kiran: Yeah yeah go go.
Prem: Wow, today is your day I mean night Preet.
The both teased Preet and Meher to which they both blushed. Then Meher almost dragged Preet from there to their room.

Preet: Dear wife, what is up with you? *winks*
Meher: Shut up and get some sleep.
Preet: If you will be beside me, how will I sleep? *teasing*
Meher: Preet?!! *angry*
Preet: Okay okay, let us go to sleep.
They both leaned on the bed. After a while when Preet fall asleep, Meher held his tee shirt tightly. Then she closed her eyes finally in peace and with a relieved heart.


TBC...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow new update exciting. Will read later. 🥳 Thankooo 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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LOVELY UPDATE😊PLZ UPDATE NEXT PART SOON AND A LONG ONE PLZ WITH SOME ROMANTIC MOMENTS OF MEET😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AASUS

wow new update exciting. Will read later. 🥳 Thankooo 🤗




Awwwie Athi darling, you are so sweeet ❤️ Waiting for you to read 😆

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