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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Guys😃
I am here again with new OS 😊
Hope u Guys like it 😊

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Chahat ki Surprise

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Inspired by Aishu (aishwaryagayen) Her real experience with dad.
A Chahat & Prem OS by sana.harshiti


It is a sunny day. Chahat is happily walking back from school.

As she was crossing a road Chahat's eyes widened as she saw a small puppy roaming here and there.

Chahat smiled when the puppy looked at her with soft eyes .

Chahat was getting late, sadly she started walking.

A sharp bark caused her to look down at a little brown haired pup roaming around her feet.

Chahat kneeled down and picked the puppy in her hand .

She smiled and thought he is so cute.

She said out loud "ok you want to go with me ? *yo* lets go!"

Chahat happily walked with cute puppy.


Prem is waiting for chahat.

He was trying hard to concentrate and get some work done, but his mind was on Chahat.

He was deeply involved reading files, when suddenly an exuberant Chahat walked into the house.

He smiled to himself until he noticed her arms wrapped around something tiny.

Chahat saw her father and immediately she hid puppy behind her back because Prem has allergy for pets .

Prem : What are you hiding Chahat?

Chahat : Kuch nahi Papa

Prem : Chahat I know you have some thing in your hand. Show me.

Chahat : Papa I found him in a street. He is so cute so I brought him home.

Prem : Ok show me

Chahat : Papa..

She said, while slowly bringing that little thing wrapped in her arms like a baby closer to him.

Chahat : Look, He's so cute hai na ?

She exclaimed with joy! Prem was utterly shocked to see the cutest puppy in Chahat's arms.

Prem : What ?

Chahat : Look look papa, isn't he adorable? ❤️

Chahat said without lifting her eyes from the puppy that was cradled in her hand. 😎

Before Prem knew it Chahat had brought the puppy for him to hold in his hands.
Prem immediately stood up and stepped back.

Prem : No way! Absolutely No... Way...


Chahat : Oho Papa! Look how cute he is!


Prem : Get away from.. aah.

Prem's foot slipped and he fell on sofa.

Chahat laughing "Oh Papa grow up! It's just a small puppy and u are scared of him".


Prem : I am not scared. You know I have allergy for pets.

Chahat : Kitne bare ho gaye ho aap Papa! Fir bhi aik inch ke Brownie se darte ho!!

Woh Thori nah apko khaa jayega !!! ( you have grown so big Papa but still you fear for this one inch brownie!! Would he eat you up ?? haan ?? She said cutely.

Prem : Brownie ? yeah kaun hai?

Chahat : Oh ho papa! Aaj se is ka naam Brownie hai.

Prem : Chahat it's not like that... Prem made a face like he's helpless and don't know how to handle this new problem.

Chahat sighed loudly as the puppy jumped out of her hands and ran straight into Prem's arms.

Chahat smiled at the sight of puppy snuggling against Prem's chest.

Chahat : Awww so cute na Papa app toh aise hi dar rehe the. Did he say anything to you?


Prem : Chahat I am.. I am scared whether .. plz take him.

Chahat : Don't worry papa. He won't say anything.

Prem: Darn, he is cute.

Chahat : hein na

Chahat : It means he stays here with me?

Prem : Yes

Chahat : Oh I love you Papa. You are the best papa in the world 'hugs'🤗

Prem cooed as puppy wagged his tail and rubbed his nose against Prem's cheek.

Prem smiled when he saw Chahat's eyes fill up with happiness and delight.

It's Sunday. Chahat woke up and ready for breakfast. She came out of her room.

Prem is making breakfast

Chahat watched as Brownie ran towards Prem.

Prem : Brownie is such a cutie.

Prem sat down and scratched puppy's fur right above his tail. Brownie licked his hand in return, visibly excited and happy to meet someone who knew how to pamper him.

Prem: Chahat you woke up! Come and sit . I am just making some pancakes.

Chahat picked up a plate from the counter. She took a pancake from there, tore off a piece and put it in her mouth. She moaned "This is amazing papa!"

Prem : Really do you like it?

Chahat : Haan very much. Brownie come Papa made yummy pancake you also eat.

Prem smiled watching Brownie cuddling up with Chahat on the sofa and eating breakfast

After finishing the breakfast Chahat said "Lets play football Papa and Brownie too play with us."

Prem : Ok come.

Brownie ran out of the living room and was leaping into Prem arms to go to the garden.

"Here You go!" Chahat cooed and threw a stuffed ball at a distance.



Brownie and Prem rushed together to retrieve the ball back to Chahat. They spent the day playing with Brownie in the garden.

They were tired. Prem laid down Brownie in his bed. Chahat watching them cutely.

Prem turns around to see Chahat and she hugs him.

Chahat : Thank you Papa and I love you. You are the best papa in the world!


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Though Prem was allergic to pets and that made him afraid of pets, he managed to work with his daughter's Brownie.

He got rid of the fear and try to keep a distance from the pet so he won't be affected much. Chahat understood her dad and did not pester him all the time.

They managed to work out a schedule as to who takes care of Brownie and took turns during the week.

Over the time Prem became very comfortable and his body was not troubling him as much because of the new addition in their home. Brownie, Prem and Chahat became inseparable.



With love Sana ( sana.harshiti)




We are dedicating this OS for some members who have actively contributed to this forum.

Our way of saying Thanks. ...

lazychick.maria - Maria who celebrated her B'day on 17th April

newt2007 - Selvy di whose B'day was on 20th April

&

-Moutushi- - Mou who celebrated her B'day on 6th May

P:S. Thanx athi for helping me love u🤗
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harshitideewani thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Wow Thanks Sana🤗 for the Lovely and cutee OS👏🥳

Chahat saw a puppy on the road and brought it home so cute👍🏼
Prem is allergic to pets but accepted it keep the smile on Chahat s face soo sweet of Him👏...yeah he is Best Papa😉
Prem made Pancake for Chahat as Brownie has come so sweet
Time moves Prem Chahat and Brownie inseparable after that ..🤗..
Great Loved it...🤗 so cuteee...👏
Keep writing Sana😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sana 🤗
Sho cute 😃 I love reading it over and over.😃
It look so real and was able to imagine clearly.
Chahat in the show actually had a scene feeding pets from her lunch box and G3 found her. She then takes her to mandir.
Prem Chahat 1st meeting at Prem's hotel garden while Chahat was playing ball. 😃
You made such cute scenes in story Sana, I just love how the father and daughter are such best buddies and talk like they're equal in age. 😆
Chahat can boss her Papa around and Prem complies to her demands. So sweet.
One good thing came out of this : Prem grew out of the fear of dogs and able to stay relaxed. His allergies are not bothering him now.
Every bit in the story, especially the dialogues I enjoyed so much. 🤗 lob u too.
You make us smile all the time with your creativity Sana. Muwah
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wowww Sana Thank you For such a love Os
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Its beautifull lovelyy 😃
soo Cute nd Awosome dailogues
Loved loved loved it
You Are Awosome Writer 👏
want to read more Os Frome u 😃
⭐️
aishwaryagayen thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG ... this was just me and dad and my dog GOLDEN EYE .. athi told me few days back that u writing .. am so happy that you wrote it and you have written it beautifully ... it was adorable and heart warming and we all actually can imagine prem and chahat like that. Thanks for the Pm love .. God Bless !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Awww this is the cutest OS I've ever read ❤️
There was a smile on my face throughout while I was reading this OS... Cute story with super cute emoticons 😊

Keep writing Sana 🤗 Good job 👍🏼

Btw Heer kahan hain story mein? 😲 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Woww Such a beautiful Os ...
Loved it 🤗
Thank you sana 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Awesome OS 👏
keep writing !!!! 🤗
thank you sana
Shweta300 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Awsome story
Loved it
Tysm for pm dear
Plz write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
aww such a cute story... chahat and brownie
prem's reaction towards the pup was hilarious..🤣
loved it 😉

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