FF-Pyar Ka Asar-2 ||EPILOGUE on pg no-68||COMPLETED!! - Page 43

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

Pg 66

Wow lot of drama huh
It was very gripping. Felt like I'm in a movie sitting in edge anxiously what and how will the next scene be like. Great job.
Rajveer is d hero and Snajana d dutiful friend to Prem.
Lovely to see Preet.🤗
Thanks Kiran lob u - I always enjoy your story. Esp the masti part and dialogues and the family interactions - you really do a wonderful job writing those.
❤️

thank u athi..for reading and appreciating 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tarannum6

wowww superbbb update kiran amazing dialouges Happy ke rishab is dead Its my fav FF ... plz we want epilogue... plsss kiran

thank u tara for always read and appreciating my updates..and always waiting for the nxt chp patiently 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bhagyashri12

It is always a pleasure to read ur FF Kiran.🤗

Thank you for updating it was a great part & u r amazing writer. Please kiran can u write an epilogue with some premeer scene !! Plzzz

thank u dear for reading and supporting 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tanuharshiti

finally rishab ke death ho gai yaaay
feeling really bad for sanjana ...
Love prem heer scean ...

thanks for ur support 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ok..first of all thank you so much everyone..for your support..patients and your appreciation..this was my first FF..and it really means alot to me that you guys loved my story..so thank you soo much for bearing with me 😆
Now second point...when i wrote the last chapter..i wasn't planning on adding an epilogue to this ff...but since all you guys are continuously request for an epilogue...i decided to make ur wish come true..so yes i m adding an epilogue to this ff..but let me tell u one more thing this epilogue isn't long..because muje kuch nahi soj raha tha ki mae aage kya add karun..because it was't preplanned...so deal with it..😳



Epilogue

7 years later

"Heeerrr" Prem shouted...

Heer putting her on her ears...:- arhh premm!!! Kyn itna chila rahe ho..main yahi isi ghar mein hu..mars mein nahi hu jo tum itna chila rhe ho..

Chahat giggled..as Prem glared at heer

Heer:- ab kharde kharde muje ghoorte hi rahoge ya bataoge bhi ki kya problem hai..

Prem angrily:- Problem...problem yeh hai..tumhari beti..

Prem pointed towards chahat..who is innocently looking at her parents..

Heer:- wah! Wah! Jab chahat school main first athi hai tab wo papa ki princess ho jati hai lekin jaise hi wo sharat kare to meri beti ban jati hai..very good mr. prem juneja..sahi ja rho...

Prem looked at her disbelieve..Heer sighed

Heer:- kya kiya chahat ne ab..

Prem:- kya kiya..tumhari beti naksh ke sath date ke plan bana rahi hai..they're going on date..

Heer:- awww that soo cute..

Again chahat giggled at the look which prem giving to heer..

Prem angrily:- cute..tumhe yeh kis angle se cute lagta hai..she's mere 5 and half year old

Chahat:-no papa I'll be 6 yearsh old nst year!!

She give her proud smile

Heer smilingly corrected chahat:- Its "6 year old next year" baby

Chahat (angori bhabi style):- sahi pakdre hein!!!

Heer giggled at chahat as prem glared at heer..

Prem:- what the hell...heer chahe chahat 5 saal ki ho ya 6 saal ki..she's not allowed to go to on date until she's...until she's

Heer:- han until she's...???

Prem:- until she's 30 no...40...ok 50

Heer and chahat looked at prem liked he had to heads,,,

Heer:- are you crazy...chahat..beta tum jao...meher masi se kaho...tumhe ready karegi..kunal uncle ate hi honge..

Chahat:- yaaahhh

She happily ran out of the room...

Prem:- heer ...tum chahat ko date pe jane ke liye keh rhi ho...whats wrong with you...

Heer:- whats wrong with me!!! What wrong with you prem..chahat or naksh abhi bache hai..unke liye date ka matlab hai zoo mein picnic..ice cream khana..park mein khelna..beach pe jake sand castle banana..or uske baad cotton candy khana..jis type ke date ke baare mein tum soch rhe ho us type ke date ke baare mein un dono ko bata bhi nahi hai...

Prem sulked at heer..

Heer:- I know prem tum chahat ko leke bohot protective ho..but don't worry..she will be fine...konsa wo dono akele ja rahe hai..kunal bhi to hoga na sath mein..i sure kunal apne bete naksh ko control mein rakhega..

Prem:- or agar rakha to mein kunal ko control mein rakhdunga..

Heer:- acha baba rakh dena..ab kush!!..

Prem:- hmm

Heer smiled and wrapped her arms around prem's waist

Heer:- waise prem tum na gusse mein kafi sexy lagte ho..

Prem smiled and pulled heer closer to him

Prem:- acha!!

Heer nuzzled in prem's neck and start kissing way upto his jaw to his lips..prem hungrily pulled heer's lips with his..and started kissing passionately...

Prem broke their kiss and went towards their bedroom door...

Heer raised her eyebrows in surprise when she realized that instead of going out prem closed the door and locked it..and turn around and smriked at heer..

Heer:- tumhe office ke liye late nahi ho rha hai..

Instead of answering heer's question prem pulled out his phone made call and ordered his secretary to shift his morning appointments to noon..

Prem come closer to heer..:- baby shuruwat tumne ki hai to khatam mae karunga na..

After saying this prem pulled heer towards bed and made love to her..

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The End!!

Edited by kiran_28 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderfull epilogue kiran 👏
And thank you so much
A big hug for u 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
The Epilogue was awesome Kiran.😳
Thank you so much for updating 🤗
Prem & heer part was so cute.
Chahat was really sweet...Loved the ending.
Will surely miss reading it..😔


It was a great FF From beginning to the Ending.
Really enjoyed it.🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi

page 68

This is a surprise. 😆 wow 😲 I dunno what to say.
Superb update.
Very cute Prem Heer Chahat scene.
It looked like we are watching on tv. 👏
Prem's upset, the way Heer made his see the reality of what their daughter really going to do and Chahat giggling looking at her parents are so cute.
Lob you thanks for the treat!🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
wowww kiran Superrbbb epilogue
just loved loved loved it ^_^
Thank you Sooo Much 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: eishe10

Wonderful epilogue!!!

thank you so much 😳

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