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Posted: 12 years ago

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AASUS

@AASUS

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you Premeermania 🤗wonderful gift to celebrate 18th June anniversary.

It's an interesting take on 2 v successful individuals and their lives.

I think you wrote their pov's well that we understood what each person is going through.

I liked it v much.

The hand reaching Heer to save her in staircase while the crowd pulling her down is the highlight.

We guessed it must hv been her Prem.

The middle age couple with kids was an interesting start.

On one hand it looks as if PH just got used to staying in same house. But Prem saving Heer in fire really put things on perspective and both realized, they love each other.

Hehe it was actually funny how Prem feels that he can't talk properly. He sent her bouquet 😲

Nice ! Glad Heer came and found him. She decided speak 1st 😆 finally Cold War is over and they hugged aww. Cute.

Keep writing. You do have a knack for coming up with different stories.

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Amna.

@Wrappedinblue

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Beautiful os 😊
I thought k dancig couple is PH but when i read prem is sitting on d bench.. all i.could say wS hawww 😆
Heer wanting divorce..my reaction.. i better not write here lol.
Ahh.. beautifully written.. 👍🏼

Edited by Shona.Angel - 12 years ago

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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Muna di this is awesome. . At the begining when you spoke abt a couple i thought that's prem and heer , but then :-D you showed prem sitting on the bench. . You gave me a heart attack at the very begining !! DIVORCE ?? I was like nooo !! You explained both of their point of view really very well. Just amazing. Prem and heer having a arrange marriage ,, and then both are totally opposite , having different lifestyles. Adjusting to the other and then suddenly kahani mein twist. Heer wanting divorce and prem agreeing. Thank god nothing happened. :-D really really very very well written os. Perfect explaination of emotions. :-D and then abt sneezing spoiling some moments. Reminds me of kis desh 21st may rain scene where the romance was interrupted by sneezing :-D beautiful. Keep writing more. And well that song is even my fav. Tc. Love ya

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luvharshiti

@luvharshiti

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

amazing OS ...loved it ...

please keep writing more...

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sana.harshiti

@sana.harshiti

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

AMAZING it was just WOW. Muna ...

Loved each and every bit of it...very well written

Keep writing...

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luv.Harshiti

@luv.Harshiti

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

What A amazing Come Back Muna !!!

Just Loved The OS.!!

I am telling you u must start Writing SS or FF.. u really write Awesome Muna Please please

MEntos Khawo and Dimag Ki baati Jalawo and Give us one more SS or FF...

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midnight_blue

@midnight_blue

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

awesome one muna

loved it..wonderful job 👏

keep writing more please 😃

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priya

@JugniPH

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome wrk muna.. Realy lovd the prem and heer here..and lovd the way u narratd their story.
Keep writing..

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ToobaS

@ToobaS

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

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Beautiful write up..really loved reading it.. monsoon n premeer are just perfect for eachother or i shld say monsoon is incomplete withhout premeer :D

thanks for the beautiful treat..keep writing more :D

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