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luv.Harshiti

@luv.Harshiti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: Premeer_Diwani

deka..mein sahi kaha.. u r ekta's sister..kaisa emotional atyachaar kar rahi hai mera saat..😡😡 chalo..maaf kiya.. 😛

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priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: luv.Harshiti

Ahem AHEm Update Dene Mein Mujhe SHARM AATI hai Thats Why delaying It not Premeer Happiness or The moment Dushman ??

bt epecail for U priya ( AHEM AHEM ) They are PREMEER..!!

HAppy !!!

sanjuuu...

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luv.Harshiti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: Premeer_Diwani

sanjuuu...
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u too want AHEM AHEM SCENE...

Yeh LOh..!!

hehhe isse Updar vi chaye toh say me/.. i will GIVEe

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Seema sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

its a nice update sanju
i m having full faith on u and prem
plss bring heer back...

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luvharshiti

@luvharshiti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

thanks for the update ...

it was awesome ...

waiting for the next update ...

please update soon ...

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kiran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: luv.Harshiti

Ahem AHEm Update Dene Mein Mujhe SHARM AATI hai Thats Why delaying It not Premeer Happiness or The moment Dushman ??

bt epecail for U priya ( AHEM AHEM ) They are PREMEER..!!

HAppy !!!

yeh cheating..hai bhai..isse kaam nhi chalega...😡

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sana.harshiti

@sana.harshiti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Bechara prem...

Know i get why he behave with heer like this for heer's sake...

AWWW prem was planning a honeymoon trip
Sanju update soon
thanks for the update

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864310

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

sanju have you see me too replied??? what is there today for your desperate readers

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luv.Harshiti

@luv.Harshiti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#279

Chapter 26

Prem Runs out of the Room throwing the Paper..!!!

He goes up the stares and opens the Terrace Door but couldnt see anything other than DARK. the rain is Raining Heavily, Thunder are shouting..!!

He shouts - HEERrr...!!!!!!!!!!!!!

after seeing Nothing.. He runs down again and Brings the torch and again goes up and lighten up the Light and step in the terrace... As the light gets on.. He sees the many candles on Floor which were Broken.. Flowers were scattered all over which was already ruined by rain..!! Prem looks here and there shouting HEER HEER... !! but no response was coming.. Then He sees heer Sitting in the corner folding Her Hand in Knees in cold with Closed Eyes and Head resting on her Knee ( hope u guys understood.. in wht position ) .

He runs SEEING her and Goes near and shakes Her..

Prem- HEER...!!

heer Opens the eyes and looks at him and smile...

Heer- Tum Aa gaye...!!! Prem mein.. ( cups his face) mein na... ( he cuts in between)

Prem- GET UP..!! get up from here... Makes Heer stand and Drags Her hand ...!! chalo..!!

heer is pulled up with Prem's with Prems high speed.. Prem Drags Her and angriely Leaves her hand and shouts,,,

Prem- PAGAL HO GAYI HO KYA??? KYA KAR RAHI THII UUPPAR.. INTI BARISH me...???

Heer ( looks back to him with teary eyes and says)- tumara INTAZAR...!!!

Prem Puts the hand on His Head with irritation...

Prem- Tumhe ho kya gaya hai heer??? Itni barais me tum ... Upper..??

Heer- Mujhe laga tum aawoge,,?? ( Sneeze...Haachummm...!!!!!!!!!!! )

Prem- (Claps his hand) Very Good CONGRAZZ..! LAAG GAYI SARDI..!! Aur jawo Pani me...?? Jawo..!! Disgusting..!! ( moves towards the cupboard and Brings the towel and hand Over it to heer..) pochlo and change karlo..!!!

Prem Moves to take his clothes also out of cupboard and when he looks behind.. Heer is still standing there looking at Him...!!

Prem goes Little near.. Looks at her with Strangly.. and says by joining hand - Please Gooo...!! change karlo.. Bimar paad jawo gi..!! Itna toh karo gi na... aapne liye..??? Please...!!

heer Looks down and moves slowly towards wash room. after few Mins she comes back with the maroon color Nighty and sees Prem isnt in the room..!! She gets tensed and the quickly runs out of the room looking here and there calling his name... " Prem.. Prem..."

She runs Downstairs hurriedly calling PREM.. PREM...!! She is abput to move out of the main Door when Some one catches Her hand from behind...!! she looks back and finds Its Prem who is Holding her hand...

Prem- kaha ja rahi ho..?? and chila kyu rahi thii.. Ghar pe sab soo rahe hai.. Aur... (stops when heer Hugs him Tight )

heer- ( crying and talking without Breaking the Hug ) Kaha chale gaye theee..?? mein kitna daar gayi pata hai...!! ??

Prem not knowing wht to do and he havent Hug her back... He is just standing llistening to her nd says- " Woh mein kitchen mein tha... " Suddenly he feels little more pressure of heer's body on him.

Prem- Heer...( tries to break the Hug and sees heer is in behos State...!!) Heer...!! heer..!! ( patting Her Face.. ) Then He Picks up in His Arms and takes her to the bed Room and Lies her down comfortably in the bed.. !! He is about to Move whn heer holds his hand.. He looks back nd Sees heer is still unconscious. He tries to free his hand bt Heer don't let.. so having No option he lays down in the Bed looking at Heer , he asides the hair coming on her cheek, caresses her cheek when heer turns her body to his side and insert inside his Arm her head on Prem's shoulder and Hugging him tight on his Waist.

Then He hears Heer saying- I m sorry...!!!!!!! Bohut Buri huu na mein...?? Bohut Dil dukhaya Meine Tumara..!! I m sorry..!! Please Maaf Kardo.. please... !!! "

Heer was getting More and More closer to Prem with Grip even More tight..!! Prem's Breath Increases with this, He tries loosen heer's Grip on his waist bt Fails so Looks at heer's face and gently Kisses her forehead which is near his chin, switches off the Light and drift into sleep.

In The Morning...!!!

heer gets up and Sees Prem is getting ready infront of Mirror.. She quickly Runs to washroom and with a Min she comes out by getting ready and takes the Tie in hand which was on the chair and Goes near Prem where prem sees Her in Mirror..!!

He Looks at Her in the Mirror and sees Her cute smile which she was Giving to him and nnotices the Tie on her Hand. He is about to move.. when Heer says..

Heer- Umm.. Tie...!!!

Prem stops and Forwards his Hand asking for it..!! Heer Gets confused seeing his hand.. and hand over to him sadly... bt then Prem Gets a call and starts talking ... Heer Moves closer to Prem.. pulls The Tie from his , round it aroud his neck.. Prem looks at her while talking to phone and tries to Move away but heer pulls him closer with the support of Tie.. Their Faces are too near to each other that Prem was feeling heer's Breath in his Chin.. bt he Tries to avoid her eye contact n looks next side while he is still talking on phone...
heer Ties the Tie very nicely without disturbing him to talk bt expects him to see her.. bt Prem isn't looking at Her... which makes her sad...!!

Prem cuts the call and sees Heer is looking at him with Her hand on his Chest..!! they stares at each other for a while but then suddenly Prem puts his hand over Her hand which is on his chest to put it down when he NARROWS his eyebrow in tension... and says..

Prem- Heer...!!! Tumko toh Bukhar hai...?? ( examines her placing hand in her forehead and cheek..!! ) Bukhar hai tumko..??

He Pulls her to the bed and makes her sit..!!

Prem- Ruukko mein kuch kahne ko lata hu then.. dawaee...!! ( Heer is looking at him with smile )

after few Mins He comes and Says her to eat..!!

heer- Tum khelawo na..!!!??

Prem Looks at Her and says.. nai khud khawo.. jaldi karo..!!!

heer ( with teary eyes)- naraz ho na kujh se...?? I m sorry...!! mujh se Bohut badi galti ho gayi...!! meine tumara dil dukhya... Tum pe saqqq kiya...... ( prem cuts in bet and says )

Prem- Dekho please...!! tum khalo..! mujhe aavi tumse Koi baat nai karni hai..!! please try to understand and Eat..!!

Tears rolls down her cheek ... and she eats the food slowly. Prem Gives her dawaye.. and

Prem- rest karo..!! and Bhgwan ke liye... aapna Khyal rakho.. please..!!! ( in upset tone and moves out of the room closing the Door )

all the time in afternoon she is only thinking how to make Prem Anger shant...!!

Meher comes in Heer's room and says...- Di. hum sab chanda uncle ke yaha ja ahe hai.. app yehi pe aram kijye ga.. we will come soon..!!

heer says Ok...!!!

As soon as All Move out of House.. heer Goes to kitchen happily and starts Making Chocolate cake for Prem to make him happy..!! She makes Everything ready... she puts the cake in the oven to bake .. and starts Cleaning the messed kitchen and her room..!!

She takes out the cake out of the Oven and writes.. " I M SORRY PREM " in it and starts decorating it..!!

She is smiling looking at the beautiful decoration of cake she made for prem but suddenly... She gets SCARED BY THE VOICE
FROM BACK " HEER.. "

She looks back with fear and says- HUH.??? ( sees Prem in kitchen door who is looking at her with wired sense..??

Prem- Tum Yaha Kya kar rahi ho? tumko kamre me hona chaye tha na...?? (upset way.. )

heer- woh Mein... Tumare Liye CAKE.. ( gestures towards It mistakely Her palm falls on it and cake is ruined ) Heer Looks at Ruined cake with tears.. and looks at Prem as well.. Prem comes Near the Kitchen slab and looks at Ruined cake where he could only see Heer's Palm shape and SORRY... !! He gets whats Going on and smiles little bit without letting Heer Know who is still shocked to see her mehenat went vain...!!!

Heer- WOh...!!!! ( tears Flows Down.. when she looks at Prem..)
But then suddenly... the Floor Below them starts Shaking...!! and premmer starts getting tensed...!!!

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Heer- yeh kya ho raha hai... (Holding Prem hand )

Prem-EARTH QUACK/... Earth Quake HAI..!! Holding Heer tight... after Few mins It comes to normal bt then prem and heer is Full WhITE as the floor above Them is falls on them.. They Both Look at each other and LAUGHS>..!! Prem and heer both sitting on floor and laughing freely looking at each other white face and hair ,...!!!!!!!!!!

to be continue...!!!

Edited by luv.Harshiti - 12 years ago